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Heartbreak.
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Lyrics
In the action he surrounds himself with silence
And a stillness then descends among the crowd
In his head he has retreated, the privacy of the defeated
And he doesn't seem to realize that the people aren't staring anymore

He is somehow led away but his mind is so astray he doesn't realize it's his feet that's done the leading
Getting wet now in the rain overshadowed by his pain
he passes people more concerned with their own problems

Away She Goes

Chorus:
Breathless and waiting for you
Then pushed into something new
He's down on his knees
Lost in losing you
Saying yeah sure I'm OK
But dying a little evryday
He just can't believe she'd let it slip
Away

Days turn into weeks which somehow pass into the emptiness
He's back to what some consider normal
But those little things per day, will they ever go away
And he feels haunted

Blinded by the hope provided, hanging on her words
Hoping they convey a hidden meaning
Racing towards distractions hoping they will fill the void
They can fill the void

Oh can they, can they?

Away she goes.

Chorus:

Let me, Let me, Let me
Remind you.

Chorus:
Song Stats
Hits: 1221
Comments: 10
Fans: 0
Plays: 184
Downloads: 104
Votes: 7
Uploaded: May 18, 2005 - 10:06:21 PM
Last Updated: Nov 24, 2008 - 07:30:47 AM Last Played: Nov 12, 2009 - 09:39:25 PM
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Hardware:
Powerbook, Martin D15, my vocal chords
Software:
Garage band, external mic.
Comments
Joshosh said 1650 days ago (May 21st, 2005)
NOBODY?!
Nobody likes this song enough to comment or even vote?! Wow. I thought it was better than that.
Check out my latest song called These Few Words
said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
NOBODY?!
You're right. This song kicks ass. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Joshosh said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
NOBODY?!
Much obliged. Thank you for listening!

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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler

Check out my latest song called These Few Words
compyellow said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
cool
very pete gavriel vibe to it. sounds like it could be a
soundtrack to a movie. great chorus.
Check out my latest song called Let Me In (Again)
Joshosh said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
cool
I love Peter Gabriel. Thank you so much.

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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler

Check out my latest song called These Few Words
said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
Live quality
This tune has much power to it. Nice voice. It has a very
analog "unplugged" sound to it (which is good). You have
a vocal strength, which comes across nicely. I would love
to hear this "produced" with a bigger sound to it. But it
certainly stands tall all by itself, as is.
Joshosh said 1648 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
Live quality
Thanks. Yeah, this song had some seriously raw feelings driving it, so it's nice
to know they come through. I would love to record it "bigger" as well, and
when I play it live it somehow seems more powerful than this particular
instrumentation. I guess it could use some refinement. But again, thank you
for listening!

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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler

Check out my latest song called These Few Words
ThatNation said 1649 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
nice mix
nice mix of live and looped sounds....this is a tune with good potential on macjams....
Check out my latest song called Performance Anxiety
baucis said 1472 days ago (November 14th, 2005)
strong
Your voice has a real strengh. The song sounds authentic. Congratulations
said 1442 days ago (December 15th, 2005)
Progression
You are a fabulous songwriter. And you sing with passion. Your voice
has a nice contour, even when screaming! Excellent movements
between soft and hard. It works for me. There seems to be a loss of
fidelity in the sound (too much compression?) -- almost like it's
playing on a car radio that has half an antenna. But that makes it kinda
cool.
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