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Guys, I could really use some help here. I am so far out of my comfort zone on this one that I don't even know what genre to put it in. (Just couldn't bring myself to land on "soft rock" so I opted for creating a new category of "Caribbean Blues.")
At any rate, I won't bore you with a long-winded story but I'd really like some suggestions on this one. I haven't posted anything before until I thought it was pretty much done but I honestly have no idea how close this one is.
I'm a helluva lot more comfortable in a canoe or a bass boat than a three-master so lets hear what you think guys. I promise I won't take offense to anything that's said.
cheers
snow
At any rate, I won't bore you with a long-winded story but I'd really like some suggestions on this one. I haven't posted anything before until I thought it was pretty much done but I honestly have no idea how close this one is.
I'm a helluva lot more comfortable in a canoe or a bass boat than a three-master so lets hear what you think guys. I promise I won't take offense to anything that's said.
cheers
snow
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Tobago Breeze
Time hasn't much meaning,
Running downwind by the lees
Off the starboard bow, seven dolphins nod
Making their way to Belize
Overhead, white horses, wander aimlessly
As the sky invents new colours of blue
And the gentle roll of a morning sea
Hasn't anything better to do
Somewhere fools rush madly
Chasing losses like the day before
The ladder climb leads to broken dreams
But you just can't see that ashore
No concrete, asphalt, smog or steel
Give us brass, teak and mahoganies
To begin the endless journey seeking shelter from the noise
Heading off on a Tobago Breeze
An ancient metaphor becomes a single sign
Guided only by wind and sea
Alone with our surroundings and filling sails
Essentially technology free
Any mysteries fade and complications dissolve
Tranquility slowly creeps in
Life was meant for living not for lofty goals
And now you know just where to begin
Time hasn't much meaning,
Running downwind by the lees
Off the starboard bow, seven dolphins nod
Making their way to Belize
Overhead, white horses, wander aimlessly
As the sky invents new colours of blue
And the gentle roll of a morning sea
Hasn't anything better to do
Somewhere fools rush madly
Chasing losses like the day before
The ladder climb leads to broken dreams
But you just can't see that ashore
No concrete, asphalt, smog or steel
Give us brass, teak and mahoganies
To begin the endless journey seeking shelter from the noise
Heading off on a Tobago Breeze
An ancient metaphor becomes a single sign
Guided only by wind and sea
Alone with our surroundings and filling sails
Essentially technology free
Any mysteries fade and complications dissolve
Tranquility slowly creeps in
Life was meant for living not for lofty goals
And now you know just where to begin
Hey Craig,
i like the overall vibe of your song, the lyrics
are really cool. Percussion parts are nice too.
The guitar licks are cool and I like the Neil Young
sound. Maybe bring the rhythm guitar and the bass
up in the mix. Organ is a great addition and I really
like the funky lines.
Your vocals fit the whole vibe and sound cool and
laid-back.
Only thing I would work on is the mix, other than
that, I am really digging the tune.
You are in the Zone Snowy....
Cheers