Evisceration

savage4hire

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This song I have been working on for awhile, Im pleased with most of it. Feel free to offer any suggestions if you want.
Im also looking for lyrics and/or vocals to this, if you want to try to sing or write lyrics, email me.

Song is about pain and stuff like that.
My first song not inspired by bunnies. Enjoy..

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Song Stats

Hits: 1869
Comments: 14
Fans: 1
Plays: 212
Downloads: 93
Votes: 4
Uploaded: Nov 16, 2005 - 03:31:25 PM
Last Updated: Nov 16, 2005 - 11:39:32 AM Last Played: Dec 04, 2012 - 10:06:26 PM

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Creative Commons License:
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Keywords:

eviscerate (1)

Hardware:

G5 Tower

Software:

Garageband, Logic Express

Comments

drakonis

drakonis said 2772 days ago (November 16th, 2005)

removed my vital pipe organ!
Hm... it is very simple and repetitive, didn't really keep my interest.
However, the raspy sawblade lead did indeed make me wonder if
important parts of my brain were being removed with rusty pliers and
potato peelers. And I mean that in a good way... that is, you definitely
got me feeling queazy and uncomfortable.
ttfn,
Drakonis, shaking scrap metal out of his head

Check out my latest song called Belle Aire (for Mandolin Orchestra)

drakonis

drakonis said 2772 days ago (November 16th, 2005)

Check out my latest song called Belle Aire (for Mandolin Orchestra)

savage4hire	savage4hire said 2771 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
	removed my vital pipe organ! Yah, thats why it needs vocals, or a guitar solo. Check out my latest song called Dark Throne of the Bunny King

jmt	jmt said 2771 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
	not without I believe this needs some sort of "drums" and some sort of structure... I can imagine this as a hard rock or heavy metal song, but not without, well, hard rock or heavy metal! Check out my latest song called mARINERS lULLABY

screamalexz	screamalexz said 2771 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
	rhythem the rhythem part sort of near the beggining is nice, but doesn't seem to flow too well. it's very choppy. if you want to try and use a poem of mine for lyrics i have some very dark painful writings that may be sung. i do like the sound of the rhythem Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit

Einarus

Einarus said 2770 days ago (November 18th, 2005)

I agree...
...with previous commentators - it gets a little repeatitive.
There were some sounds in it, though, that I kinda liked - very psychotic
and depressive, but in a good way.
I think it should break out in a certain point. The songs seems to build a
bit towards something, but then it leaves you just hangin' there between
creepy sounds and melodies.
This has some potential - with a little more work this could get pretty
good.

Check out my latest song called Preparation

alley-oop

alley-oop said 2765 days ago (November 23rd, 2005)

Evisceration
Got to love a song named Evisceration.
Websters: disembowel; divest of strength and force. evisceration.ha ha...cool I thought I'd write some lyrics for you, you ought to sing them yourself. I'm assume you have a fine set of vocal chords

From the beginning
to the end
My guts are screaming
question once again

Running from the alter
lost in pain
sacrifice my peace of mind
anguished tears in rain

Broken and bleary eyed
Only left to roam
follow the setting sun
Never heading home

Eviscerate my empty heart
beating weaker still
Always lost always lonely
Slowly lose my will

There you go. see...easy
inspired by the the title and the music

great job! Sing! it's easy. why have someone else do it?

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DOS	DOS said 2764 days ago (November 23rd, 2005)
	my my I love this track! great work man. DOS Check out my latest song called The Poor Little Girls of Ontario

DOS	DOS said 2764 days ago (November 23rd, 2005)
	And to mention I like those lyrics too. DOS --- Deadication of Sufacation Check out my latest song called The Poor Little Girls of Ontario

	said 2760 days ago (November 27th, 2005)
	You have a riff here that could potentially play a part in a song. There is a clean balance of sound but it needs alot more development before it could really be enjoyed. It's worth your time to keep messing with this and see where it takes you. cheers I hope this is constructive. :)

	said 2758 days ago (November 29th, 2005)
	UHHHH PUKE SLIT WIST! Naggle fundiddle carepe el munchero cotton blood sash wash blood tister poison piss blasphemy puntang shiver supper buns pies puke and parties! Needs metal guitar!

	said 2748 days ago (December 9th, 2005)
	Wow what amazing chops and song writing it must have taken years of practice to develop such mind numbing skills. I'm really surprized you have not been signed yet truly amazing.

loyd vader	loyd vader said 2684 days ago (February 11th, 2006)
	out of time did someone forget to quantize???????? do do do, dah dah dah..................what???????? this to me would be what a kraftwerk sound check would sound like......sorta Check out my latest song called im not lazy, im just tired

savage4hire	savage4hire said 2684 days ago (February 12th, 2006)
	out of time not sure what you mean, lol Check out my latest song called Dark Throne of the Bunny King

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