Satisfy (collab with Bronco)

selters

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I posted this a while ago as a demo. Now i have done the real thing, and my Favourite Macjammmer; Bronco has Added som Lead Guitar and Some Beautiful Harmonyvocals!! I think this song sounds very good, and I hope you feel the same!
Words and Melody :Selters
Rythm Guitar: selters
Lead Guitar: Bronco
Backing Vocals: Bronco
Keys: Selters

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Lyrics

Im so tired, im so tired
Its so hard to get up
Im so nervous, without a reason
I feel your breathing in my neck

Im so tired, im so tired
your so hard to satisfy
Im shaking, im breaking
I am trying, to find a way

Its so hard to satisfy
All demandings and all cries

Are you smiling, Are you denying
Its so hard to figure out
Im hiding, im crying,
are you lying into my face

Im so tired, im so tired
Its so hard to satisfy
Im so nervous, without a reason
I feel your breathing in my neck

Song Stats

Hits: 2049
Comments: 17
Fans: 6
Plays: 308
Downloads: 77
Votes: 15
Uploaded: Feb 18, 2006 - 09:46:31 PM
Last Updated: Feb 22, 2006 - 10:48:55 AM Last Played: Oct 27, 2009 - 03:44:50 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

Bronco (6), Selters (13), Melancholy (61), Soothing (31), sad (148), tired (17), ()

Hardware:

M-Audio Delta 66, Audiobuddy preamp, 2 Adk51 E mics,

Software:

Tracktion 2, Garageband

Comments

K Möller J	K Möller J said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
	undrgrnd WHOOOHOOOOO! This is real hardcore underground ! It will be a hit in my circles! Check out my latest song called GRILL

The Composer

The Composer said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)

just a few comments
quite a nice song selters... aside from the depressing lyrics :P

As far as critism goes... the lead guitar got a little distracting at times...
mostly when it was playing during your singing in the verses/chorus...
mostly it was fine playing in the gaps... but just could've been toned
down a tiny bit on occasions. Would've also liked the synths to be
brought up a little in volume at the end.

Nice song writing though, well played and sung too. Nice work!

Check out my latest song called 25 Minutes in a Japanese Restaurant (Readers Digest Version) (MJRF)

thetiler	thetiler said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
	nice like the soufful words in the song, I hear a bit reo speedwagon in the vocal. Like the subtle touch in the strings towards the end. Like the guitar folk fee. Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

Ed Hannifin

Ed Hannifin said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)

It's got a nice living room...
...or back porch feel...

Neither too produced to lose its charm nor so rough that it loses the
pleasure of listening...

Reminds me of some of the old Beatle demos... before all the other
instruments get added in...

Rhythm guitar playing is clean and steady. I like the lead fills, too. And
your singing is always good, selters....

Ed

Check out my latest song called Next Time Around (w/jiguma)

bronco

bronco said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)

Liked the Lyrics
Magnus, Thanks for the opportunity to play on one of your songs. The
fact that they are so melodic makes them easy to play along with. I
loved the lyrics on this song. Anyone should be able to relate to the I'm
so tired part as life by definition is a gradual wearing down of the
human substance. And my favorite line is the I'm so nervous without a
reason which defines what a lot of people feel. Then I stop to think that
these lyrics are being written in what is not even your first lanquage.
Outstanding job!

Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling

bronco

bronco said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)

Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling

selters	selters said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
	Liked the Lyrics I really apreciate your job on this Tom! Your harmonyvocals are so beautiful, and youre playing is great! Thanks a lot for the nice comments! --- Check out my latest song: <a href="http://www.macjams.com/song/16895">Killing for Milk and for Honey</a> Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)

screamalexz	screamalexz said 1373 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
	mellow the additional instrumentation works well. a peaceful, and mellow song nicely done selt. i like the lyrics to this one. they seem to have developed more since the last version i heard. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

	said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
	UHHHH! Singing songwriting and rhythm geetar sound great! SOlo guitar and back ground vocals need serious help! Great witing Selts! Send me thos pics Bargooble humpenstein!

bronco	bronco said 1370 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	UHHHH! Thanks Mr. B - glad you enjoyed it! Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling

urbnite	urbnite said 1372 days ago (February 20th, 2006)
	:) i'm on my second listen. i love this. am i dreaming or are you not doubling your vocal tracks as much here? your voice sounds great! i like bronco's additions as well. love it! Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 1372 days ago (February 20th, 2006)
	nice 'n mellow! hey. another catchy awesome song! loved it. i really liked your lyrics. its always somehow um... twisted? theres something seriously off beat about your world!! i hope your girlfriend/wife would embrace that as your charm!! Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

Komrade K	Komrade K said 1372 days ago (February 20th, 2006)
	A fine tune Another Selters' goodie. I like the feel of this and your singing seems to be getting stronger. Bronco's guitar works well with this as well - although (writing as another soloist who makes this mistake) perhaps a little less lead guitar would be more effective. KK Check out my latest song called Ye Mariners All

stevel	stevel said 1370 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
	Another Selters classic A good laid back groove...those unmistakable vocals...poignant guitar counterpoint from Bronco. Another winnter Steve Check out my latest song called Electricity

jiguma	jiguma said 1368 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
	Good one! Vocals sound very good Magnus, and what a cool set of lyrics - you do write nice songs! Neil Check out my latest song called Lost In Translation (w Mike Watkins)

JOAN	JOAN said 1365 days ago (February 27th, 2006)
	pretty nice job fellows.....excellent lyrics and the instrumentation is spare yet sufficient enough to give this piece an full sound!!! Check out my latest song called MUD

Einarus

Einarus said 1364 days ago (February 28th, 2006)

Sounds pretty good
First of all, sorry for arriving so late - I've been a bit preoccupied. But here
I am, and better late than never, right?
This sounds pretty good. I really like your mix of sweet melodies and
depressing lyrics. Your vocal performance is pretty good, fits the easy-
goingness of the guitar.
The lead guitar is pretty nice, but I agree with The Composer about toning
it down a bit during your singing. The backup vocals didn't really grab
me, but they didn't really affect my opinion on this track.
Very nice work, the both of you!

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Name: Magnus Torbjørnsen

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