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| Bubowski said 1323 days ago (April 14th, 2006) | |
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Very angular opening Not sure what you mean by "angular" but I do agree about the phrase shaping. The held chords definitely could use a bit of dynamic movement to help the melody. If I only had more than 15-20 minutes at a time to work on stuff :-(. Anyway, thanks for listening and commenting. Check out my latest song called Galaxy Band 8
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| atonalis said 1295 days ago (May 11th, 2006) | |
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Very angular opening "absent third"? is he/she not listening? Check out my latest song called lit with a wet match.
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| Andronis said 1322 days ago (April 14th, 2006) | |
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Those Strings This reminds me of why I try not to use Garritan Personal Orchestra or the MacJams strings. Their strings have such a synthesized hollow sound and fail to convey the integrity and spirit of your actual music which is actually very nice once I overlook the strings. I might've liked a more obvious melodic line, but that's just me being picky, probably. This'd probably make incidental music for a movie. Check out my latest song called Dance at Merry's Tavern
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| thetiler said 1322 days ago (April 14th, 2006) | |
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like the pic and how it goes with the music. Soothing, imotional, like the fact you have put the software programs to good use here, both of them. Reaching out with extra musical coloration etc. Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called Little Drummer Boy Variations
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| Ed Hannifin said 1321 days ago (April 15th, 2006) | |
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You nicely matched the picture... ...with the piece... 'Reflective' is the word that comes to mind, and the photo conveys that... I am totally unschooled in classical form, and I am totaly unfamiliar with the contents of the various instrument sources described. This sounds good on my speakers...The only lacking thing is that some of your pieces, Graham, make me sit up and take notice just BECAUSE of the amazing sound of the instruments, and this doesn't hit like that. I am always envious of your sense of melody, harmony and timbre. Ed Check out my latest song called Next Time Around (w/jiguma)
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| composerclark said 1298 days ago (May 8th, 2006) | |
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Sparse I like the sparse texture. My only suggestions are to consider varying the texture a little more (thinner in places, thicker in places), and consider a section using just the lower register; it would seem to suit the dark mood you have established. I initially had trouble getting past the wobbly Garritan strings sound too, so I listened to the track a few times and just focussed on the lines, which did the trick. Cheers, Clark Check out my latest song called Scarlet Nightfall
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| atonalis said 1295 days ago (May 11th, 2006) | |
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wonderful...... .....melancholic and lush..... the orchestral elements sound quite nice...... you have a lovely sence of harmonic structure.... very lush, suspended aolean......... beautiful. i must fav you now. Check out my latest song called lit with a wet match.
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kristyjo
The voicings are good. It stays in that 'absent third' state a little more
than I'm personally comfortable with. I kept singing the third harmony
voice that was left out. A little more twiddling with dynamics on entrances
(stronger) and held notes (fade away more quickly) would bring in some
contrast and let the listener know where attention should be directed.
Right now it's high and low voices, a middle voice would warm it up. Good
strong melodic line that's consistent through the piece. Good album art
that conveys the same strength.