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Reaching out


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Tobbe

 Genre: Pop (mainstream)
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Some kind of "country pop" song. I quite happy with the result and it would be nice with some comments from you what you think. I like construtive critics! Good or bad...
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Song Stats
Hits: 2137
Comments: 13
Fans: 1
Plays: 139
Downloads: 101
Votes: 4
Uploaded: Apr 26, 2006 - 06:15:31 PM
Last Updated: Apr 26, 2006 - 11:59:51 AM Last Played: Feb 28, 2014 - 10:52:23 PM
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mint01 said 4044 days ago (April 27th, 2006)
Heard it twice
Hi!

Great songwriting. I liked it pretty much. Just one thing to mention: I
would have preferred some variation to the drums. But that's not all too
important.
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Cori Ander said 4044 days ago (April 27th, 2006)
Nice tune
Hi Tobbe, and welcome to MacJams!

Feel that this tune has a good swing and a good mood! I dig the
intertwining guitars and the popsy backup. Also think you are a good
singer.

/Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander

PS. Helt kul o hitta en till svensk pa macjams! Det kryllar inte av oss...


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Cori Ander said 4044 days ago (April 27th, 2006)
Oh yes
Oh yes, the constructive critics:

Not much, just that I feel some instruments should be panned a bit
towards the center and not so extreme out. When listening in
headphones, especially the guitar in the left ear almost feels like some
mosquito that doesn't belong to the music.

Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander

Check out my latest song called O store Gud
said 4043 days ago (April 28th, 2006)
Oh yes
I agre with Curry but a prety nice start.
Welcome/Välkommen

Sincerely
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Skean
Tobbe said 4042 days ago (April 29th, 2006)
Oh yes
Hallå där!
Jag jobbar på de sakerna du tog upp. Ska snart lägga upp en ny version.

/Tobbe
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Cori Ander said 4039 days ago (May 2nd, 2006)
Oh yes
Haha! Skysst med lite svenska kommentarer !!!

Good to hear!

Wish you the best fortune here! This is a great place!

Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander


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/Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander
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jie said 4041 days ago (April 30th, 2006)
cool
nice guitar intro, excellent voice, great arrangement. lovely. keep it up. Cheery
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Tobbe said 4041 days ago (April 30th, 2006)
cool

Thanks a lot for all kind words! I hope I´ll upload the fianl version of this song tomorrow (monday).

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Scott Carmichael said 4041 days ago (April 30th, 2006)
good song sense
A very good pop song sense here... you understand how to put it all
together, mix sonuds good on my speakers... the vocorder on the bak
vox was a nice touch... not overdone... this is a great start... you
obviously have the background
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Thompa said 4040 days ago (May 1st, 2006)
Nice song..
Nice song and a good vox mix...Its probably my speaker but i want some
more "body" or bas, but ovarall a god song well "sunged" (sger man s?)

;-) welcome to MJ

Thompa
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Tobbe said 4035 days ago (May 7th, 2006)
Nice song..
Thanks! I´ll try to upload some more songs during the next week.

/Tobbe
Check out my latest song called Song for Jenny
TobinMueller said 3984 days ago (June 26th, 2006)
Solid pop, well sung
Really strong writing, solid tune. Nice use of harmonies, sustaining
chordal notes, giving the track a shining, crystalline feel. Great pacing,
beat, hopeful feel. When it comes to the mix, in my headphones the
extreme panning of the lead guitar (left) was a distraction; and the
repetitive nature of the harpsichord sounding ostinato guitar part needed
a more natural acoustic sound, something more alive, to match the really
nice electric guitar and smooth bass work. But I really enjoyed this song,
the solid writing, the wonderful singing, the smiling feel behind it all.
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apb said 3892 days ago (September 26th, 2006)
Great vocals/voice
.. nice harmonies, vocal recording, effect selection.

I agree the panning choices for the instruments is the
thing that strikes me as the only thing 'odd' in the mix .. (el.guitar and
bass guitar off to the left is the most noticeable).

Tune is well delivered but plods along a bit too much and needs more
passion and sparkle - more dynamic drums may lift it a notch as
suggested above. Bit 'harmless' for my tastes but good work all the
same.

I imagined Belinda Carlisle or the Bangles singing this .. hmm, no idea
why.
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