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This is a resubmission of a song. I needed to change the creative commons attribution. Driving techno rock. Uses poem by Drew Roberts called "Uncertainty". see:http://www.archive.org/details/druncertainty
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Lyrics
A crowd
A room
People standing, talking, laughing
Whispers
Glances
Plans unanswered, answered
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Uploaded: May 09, 2006 - 11:51:44 AM
Last Updated: May 09, 2006 - 11:45:31 AM Last Played: Nov 18, 2017 - 03:19:24 PM
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Hardware:
guitar, bass.
Software:
Logic Express, iDrum, Amplitube.
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screamalexz said 4216 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
panning
nice panning. like the drum change when the poem is read the second time. seems to be pretty nicely put together. you do a nice job of making sure the song mellows down when the speaking comes in.
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smokey bacon jnr said 4215 days ago (May 10th, 2006)
panning
appreciate the comment about panning. It took me ages manually drawing in the panning parameters in Logic for the guitar solo so it appeared to be a dialogue.

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said 4216 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
Techno
Good mix. The music doesn't seem unbalanced like most techno is.
Maybe bring out the vocals with a few different ways, reverb, echo, things
such. Also, when I listen to this I am expecting singing vocals, since i am
so used to it. Maybe throw in some background vocals, soft. Just ideas.
Sounds good either way, and I like the back off of the music when you
speak. Good job. God Bless.
smokey bacon jnr said 4215 days ago (May 10th, 2006)
Techno
I like the idea of backing vocals. I may play with vocal synthesizer sounds. thanks!

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smokey bacon jnr said 4214 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
Techno
oh yes - incidentally, it's not me speaking on this - the vocal is a sample from a poet called Drew Roberts (see link in blurb on song). I can't sing and if I did it would be in a ghastly welsh mixed with liverpudlian accent.

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said 4214 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
I Like the Minimalist Lyrics
The music seemed not as energetic as it could be and I think part of it is
what jsacker called it being 'balanced' - yes the instrumentation is
balanced, yet it is somewhat static - not as dynamic as it could be to
shake the listener up a bit.
said 4214 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
I Like the Minimalist Lyrics
The two artists at MacJams who come to my mind when I mention dynamics (soft
to loud/slow to fast/etc) are sil-VER and Electro Estate. They are very good with
this.

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smokey bacon jnr said 4214 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
I Like the Minimalist Lyrics
Hi Mungo, thanks for the comments. I know what you mean about the dynamism, but I quite like the solidity of it as is, although I will have another listen to the artists you mention to steal - ahem - I mean learn - their approaches to creating a shifting musical landscape. I suppose part of my aim is to produce something monolithic like a kind of music mountain! But maybe that's a bit boring for the listener. You've given me food for thought!

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Warren Smith said 4091 days ago (September 11th, 2006)
texture-wrapping
I don't know - a gastly Welsh-Liverpudlian accent might be a nice addition to macjams : >

Of course, it would have to be the right type of music, but I would think industrial techno rock might work for it!

In this particular piece, I think the lyrics are a nice fit with the music.

All of your pieces exhibit catchy melodies. I like the various textures you wrap them in.
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smokey bacon jnr said 4089 days ago (September 13th, 2006)
Thanks
Thanks very much for the comments, but I think I'll keep my tonsils where they belong for now!

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