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| Doadars Uncle said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Trippy! Thanks Michael! Good comments. The percussion issue might be during the first transition. It is a bit disarrayed. Even still, I'm proud for getting this far! Thanks for taking a moment! Doug --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| bronco said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Mixed Bag Parts of this were quite good indeed! However I would have to agree that the early percussion needs some work and the transition from the acoustic guitar to the midi was sort of abrupt. However I really like your guitar work especially the acoustic. Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling
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| Doadars Uncle said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Mixed Bag Thanks Bronco, I am honored you stopped by! Stopped by your "...Blues", Telecaster is sounding great! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Not quite I meant the last 1/3 of the song. --- http://www.schletty.com/song |
| Doadars Uncle said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Not quite Richard! Pleasure to hear from you! "little mitebots trying to eat the flesh of your guitar" Yum. Comments noted! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| screamalexz said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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thoughts liking the mellow ambiant part. its a little weird when it transitions into what sounds like a flut and then it goes to guitar. the guitar is pretty cool/ sounds like it was recorded at the ocean, when it goes into distortion it seems like a bit of an awkward change like it was just thrown in there, this has alot of cool ideas but sometimes it feels like things are forcively put together, sounds like you could take the ideas and make 2 or 3 seperate songs. like the melody near the end. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| Doadars Uncle said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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thoughts Scream, Thanks for appreciating the mellow part. I will keep this in some form or another. Will work on changes. Thanks for taking the time! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| screamalexz said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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thoughts no problem. its got ideas in it, i think over time you can develop it to flow together more. --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| Doadars Uncle said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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Take with a grain of salt Gracious thanks, Alimar! I believe you are one of the masters of composition! I will take more time with this one. I like multiple themes but have always had difficulties with transitions. Thanks again! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| atonalis said 1267 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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nice jam feel........ very free formed n trippy with all the percussive textures. nice changeups with the guitar tones...... some work a little better than others. the transition a little after half way was a little too jarring for this track. a little longer of a transition into it might have been nice....... the section itself is nice n uplifting...... it's difficult, i think, to make tracks that delve into non-formed compositions........ nice track all around for sure......... Check out my latest song called lit with a wet match.
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| Doadars Uncle said 1266 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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nice jam feel........ Thanks a great deal! Lots to think about. I'm intrigued with the idea of extending it to benefit the transitions. Wouldn't it be nice as a half hour jam thing? --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| composerclark said 1266 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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A lot going on! There's a lot going on here; lots of good ideas, kind of spliced onto one another. Idea 1 has a nice happy feel, but the acoustic guitar is a little out of tune. Idea 2 is kind of trippy, experimental, and I REALLY liked it. I guess I like experimental stuff. I also like idea 3, with the steady ride cymbal against a simple acoustic guitar vamp. The electric guitar solo is good and interesting. Idea 4 is the fuzz guitar stuff, sounding kind of like southern rock from my youth in the '70s, and basically it works well too. Maybe you tried to put too much into one song, but even if you did, it all still works, and I'd encourage you to do more of this stuff. For what it's worth, most of the people I teach come up with pretty good compositional ideas, but the thing everybody has to work harder on is what to do with the ideas, how to develop them, how to structure them so that it all makes musical sense, and how to transition from one idea to the next. Really enjoyed this! Check out my latest song called Scarlet Nightfall
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| Doadars Uncle said 1266 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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A lot going on! Teacher! This is encouraging, indeed! I understand that it might be too much. But maybe, not enough. My biggest issue is impatience. I will try to sit on this for awhile, check some angles, perspectives. It might go somewhere. It is a lot of fun, at the very least! Thanks! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| Magritte said 1266 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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I liked these pieces. All together it seems like more of a sampler than a unified whole. But each sample was very tasty and I think they all could be separately expanded to create several instrumentals. The last part in particular would make a terrific soundbed to a vocal or a longer instrumental jam. Very enjoyable performances and production overall though. Thanks for sharing your experiment! Check out my latest song called Tango Macabre
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| Doadars Uncle said 1266 days ago (June 5th, 2006) | |
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I liked these pieces. Magritte! I agree. The last segment could be one of those extended jams ... days long as each MacJammer gets their appropriate solo. Thanks for the solid comments! --- We have a cat. Our fish has recently passed away...long live Swimmers! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| HOKEY POKEY said 778 days ago (October 6th, 2007) | |
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melba toast You make interesting music! Check out my latest song called Maxwell's Alien Sonata Opus B, pt. 3
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| Doadars Uncle said 777 days ago (October 7th, 2007) | |
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Much Thanks! Thanks for taking the time, Mr. Pokey! --- Freedom is a state of mind. Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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An interesting piece, this. I'm not positive the percussion always works,
but I like it overall. Creative. Ambient in places. Guitars from mid-section
on sound great. Reminds me of many an odd album track from back in
the psychedelic sixties (according to what I've been told---I was there).
Be well!