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Once upon the end


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jeidse

 Genre: Experimental
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I never know what to put for genre, so I always put experimental. This song was written some years back when I felt like music had broken up with me. Nothing was working
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Lyrics
Once upon the end of a love story
One small world was drowned in it's misery

A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.

Long ago, a song began too beautiful
There it grew and there away it flew

A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.

And it slips from me like a rolling wave
And I cannot hold tightly
Once we held a song
Now I sing alone and it bruises so gently

A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.

And it slips from me like a rolling wave
And I cannot hold tightly
Once we held a song
Now I sing alone and it bruises so gently

Song Stats
Hits: 2187
Comments: 5
Fans: 1
Plays: 109
Downloads: 75
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Sep 18, 2006 - 04:46:19 PM
Last Updated: Sep 18, 2006 - 04:46:19 PM Last Played: Sep 13, 2017 - 05:17:30 PM
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Comments
said 4101 days ago (September 19th, 2006)
Beautiful tune
With a little taste of Mike Oldfield and you sounds like Maggie Reilly.
I only have a littel criticism the start! you can here noise and at the end
it's a noise...With a new Remix of this Lovely tune and I'm sure it's came to
be perfect.

Skean
krismacqueen said 4097 days ago (September 23rd, 2006)
Lovely
Joy, wow, this is so nice. There's a lot of depth in the arrangement.
There are a number of mix issues, but they don't take away from this
great song. I like all the vocal experiments your trying here. Great
texture, harmonies and doubles. Great lyrics, particularly in the chorus.
Check out my latest song called Song for Rob
said 3961 days ago (February 6th, 2007)
WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOW
. . . . . .
....WHAT GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT MUSIC . . . I : % : ) :0 can heardly believe it. . . : ) :0 ; ) :6
Speak of touching thy (MY!!)soul . . . . . THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wish it was EVEN LONGER . . . I love everything about it the TEXT, MUSIC YOUR VOICE...Your voice is absolutely incredible.. what a gift to manhood: )10101010101010101011

(I'm no Musician so the technical details I truely can't say anything about..)

THANKS AGAIN
Lena
said 3961 days ago (February 6th, 2007)
: )
...did you ever play djembe ?
; )


TobinMueller said 3862 days ago (May 16th, 2007)
Nice
A cool Tori Amos vibe. Really nice. There are a few distortions from overdriving the vocal track, consider a remix?
Check out my latest song called Momentary Undertow
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Name: Joy Eidse
Location: Winnipeg Manitoba Canada
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Grew up in rural Manitoba, done a lot of international travelling. Currently taking Social Work at U of M part time. Been writing plays recently. Enjoying motherhood and life in general, these days. ... [see more]

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Genre Info
Experimental music is any music that challenges the commonly accepted notions of what music is. There is an overlap with avant-garde music. John Cage was a pioneer in experimental music and defined and gave credibility to the form. As with other edge

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