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| kristyjo said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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Thanks, Roxy I'm glad you came to listen! I might add more rides to the cosmic playground, eventually. Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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| drakonis said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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L0V3LY This is a really satisfying melody, both A and B sections, they just feel good together, I love this kind of writing. The ending was unpredictably perfect too. Of course, this is your piece, but this sounds perfect for a music box melody... have you thought of the cliche idea of starting with the melody played on music box (or guitar), then being accompanied in verse 2 by the space synths, then maybe ending again with the music box? Not that this needs much embellishment, it is delicious! ttfn, Drakonis (Dang, I have to get up pretty early to get here before Roxylee!) Check out my latest song called Temporal Tantrum (Sister Savage Mix)
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| kristyjo said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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Great ideas, Drak! I like them for a way to extend this into a larger piece of music. (I have a brain stuffed full of themes, but I get lazy when it comes to extension and development.) I'll try some of those ideas in the near future, I can see how they would make this more complete as a piece of music that stands on its own. Yes, Roxy appears to be an early riser! I've always envied people who could wake up early and be 'ready to go'. Our entire family is (in the words of my daughter) nocturnal. Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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| kristyjo said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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movie music is something I'd dearly love to write, so I'm glad this evoked the idea of movie background for you. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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| Bowman said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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Quirky fun I liked this stately - yet with the quirky spacy orchestration - strangely fascinating piece of music. I especially like the second section with it's longing nostalgic quality. Well done. Check out my latest song called The Orion Express - MJ Space Race 2009 by Bowman
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| kristyjo said 1112 days ago (October 22nd, 2006) | |
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Quirky - Yes, sometimes when I 'play' with a piece, I come up with things that, at first, I wouldn't have ever thought would work, but then end up sounding interesting. This is originally a classical guitar piece, and it has a very different 'feel' to it with that instrumentation. Thanks for listening! Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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| Morning Light said 1119 days ago (October 15th, 2006) | |
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Too short! I really like this.... it has a happy feel to it! The NightBird~ Check out my latest song called To the Children
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| Parichayaka said 1113 days ago (October 21st, 2006) | |
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How sweet is that?! I'd love to be a little kid again, sitting on that merry-go-round somewhere up in the sky or some fairytale forest. I really like not only the energy but also the instruments you chose. Simple but charming and the melody is just lovely. I hope you'll get a chance to make it a little bit longer, I'd come back and listen to it again, and again. Thanks! Check out my latest song called f12
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| kristyjo said 1113 days ago (October 21st, 2006) | |
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Yes, a longer merry-go-round ride is what others have commented, also. I used to teach freshman theory, and I could give a whole list of ways to develop a theme, but I don't always follow it myself - I'll have to try some of those things. Thanks for listening! Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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| recycledair said 1108 days ago (October 26th, 2006) | |
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this sounds good This is really nice..it is really soft on the ears and thats why i like it. Keep on doing what you are you doing. you should come check some of my stuff out. most of isnt finished but its still pretty good. cya! Check out my latest song called QPWOEIRUTY
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| thetiler said 1070 days ago (December 3rd, 2006) | |
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backround is a bit mushy and the second to the last note is off! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| kristyjo said 1070 days ago (December 3rd, 2006) | |
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Tiler, thanks for listening! There is definitely an ambivalence to the background. That's part of the feel of the piece, I guess - kind of like kids who are afraid of clowns or merry-go-rounds or a host of other things that should be fun, but are scary for unknown reasons. If you'd like to hear it as written originally, it's here. The 2nd to last note was actually meant to be flatted, and it helps avoid sounding like a standard V7/I stock ending. I think it gives it more of a chromatic flavor, and -it's a surprise! Again, thanks for sharing your thoughts and opinions on this piece. Check out my latest song called What a Friend We Have in Jesus
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Roxylee
Heehee, it does evoke images of a cosmic merry-go-round ride! Very
pretty, Kristy. :-)