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this is a remix version that i did in garageband of a song i wrote called 'dear airplane'. i'd love to hear what you think.
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Lyrics
dear airplane,
carry me home
daneo, time to wake up (no!)
and remember where you are (no!)
as if youve forgotten (no!)
that you wont be at home today
dear airplane, carry me home!
carry me home
but listen while the sun goes down,
and listen while my light goes out.
carry me home
daneo, time to wake up (no!)
and remember where you are (no!)
as if youve forgotten (no!)
that you wont be at home today
dear airplane, carry me home!
carry me home
but listen while the sun goes down,
and listen while my light goes out.
MissChaos
I can't believe no one's commented on this yet... Well, here you go!
Okay, first, the ending fade is too abrupt. Easy fix. Second, I think this
needs some sort of bridge or variation on the melody. The percussion
& strings become a tad repetitous without having a break or bridge --
especially since your vocals are so deliberately atmospheric and hard
to understand. I like the reverb on the vocals, actually -- especially
when they're layered as you've done.
Vocally, you're on key, and those sustained words are sung so
beautifully and with emotional impact.
Here I go comparing again... forgive me! This sounds very much like
Marillion. I really like the feel of this. I'm a fan!