Waiting

SmokeyVW

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album: Manic | Depressive
track 1: 3:58 True, Man
track 2: 2:11 The Last Whale
track 3: 6:32 Happenst (col w TydelWave)
track 4: 3:19 Break The Loop
track 5: 5:28 Dream of Snow
track 6: 5:56 Dig Dig, Dig
track 7: 2:34 Small Setback
track 8: 4:57 Clamshell Alliance
track 9: 2:52 despair
track 10: 4:11 Homaridae
track 11: 2:34 Waiting
track 12: 7:40 My Dancing Snowflake
track 13: 2:12 All Through The Universe
track 14: 5:06 And My Toothbrush
track 15: 5:41 Talkoot
track 16: 2:05 Peaceful Sunrise (col w RoxyLee)
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Song Description

A song about waiting.

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Hits: 1250
Comments: 11
Fans: 4
Plays: 97
Downloads: 48
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Uploaded: Oct 23, 2006 - 10:11:25 PM
Last Updated: Sep 19, 2008 - 11:44:34 AM Last Played: May 19, 2009 - 10:07:57 PM

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SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 1131 days ago (October 23rd, 2006)
	expression No need for ratings or comments on this one. I just needed to express myself... Check out my latest song called One For Me

	said 1131 days ago (October 24th, 2006)
	Pretty I'm reminded of being alone in a park, reflecting on a cloudy, cool, autumn morning.

Schello	Schello said 1131 days ago (October 24th, 2006)
	,-) so delicate the piano remind to me far away..bravo Smokey! Check out my latest song called Snozz'en (Cronik Mix)

RickW	RickW said 1130 days ago (October 24th, 2006)
	Absolutely beautiful What a marvelous atmosphere to wait in. :-) Check out my latest song called Picture of Perfection (MJRF)

drakonis

drakonis said 1129 days ago (October 25th, 2006)

Nice washes...
Very pretty flute melody, and the ebb and flow of the piano and strings,
seem to wash time away. Nice dramatic spot for a key change... great
slowing and softening to the end... this is very well thought-out! The
only thing I could imagine improving is in the middle when you have all
the instruments together, it gets a little midrange-heavy and less clear,
the flute almost gets lost. You may want to do a little more separation by
panning instruments apart a teeny bit more, and possibly adding more
low-end bass, boost the brass or cellos a bit to add to the pathos. Wow.
Great stuff!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 1128 days ago (October 26th, 2006)
	. thank you so much for the feedback... i was basically an emotional wreck when i made this. so some of the details were very likely not quite on. i'll definitely think about your comments here, if or when i remake this... i guess i should - if not only to better capture the moment the way i felt it at the time... --- B^) Check out my latest song called One For Me

Feter	Feter said 1129 days ago (October 26th, 2006)
	Moving !! pardon me to put my 52 cents here my friend I always enjoyed your way of writings ..... it carries alot ...very nice job the strings works so passionate and elegant with the flute ..! well done !! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

SmokeyVW

SmokeyVW said 1128 days ago (October 26th, 2006)

to all of you
thank you very very much for the comments - i really did not expect any feedback here - this was just an outpouring from within me, based on some very strong feelings due to my wife going into surgery.

she is fine now - and this dark cloud is now quickly passing by... so again, thank you for commenting. but really, i just needed to send this musical thought out there, into the vast internet, simply for anyone to possibly hear and feel my state of mind at the time.

my heartfelt thanks to you.

Check out my latest song called One For Me

paul f. page

paul f. page said 1121 days ago (November 2nd, 2006)

waiting
There is a decided tension in this number that draws the listener into the music...in sort of a dark way. Music like this speaks to inner regions of one's being...and it did to me. The structure is supurb, beginning and ending with that plaintive flute and not worrying about making a spash of any sort by resolving chords at the end. It takes courage to conclude like this and you were definitely up to the task... I am personally drawn to music mostly through melody and I think this is the one area where you could spread your winds some in this piece. You kind of get stuck in the middle and have a hard time getting out into the air again. I hope you'll consider doing a little more work on this because the piece itself, even in its present form and recording is compelling. I am glad I listened to it.
Paul

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MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 192 days ago (May 19th, 2009)
	Bill I found this so totally relaxing it was amazing... What a GREAT piece! Thank you so much! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

Char	Char said 192 days ago (May 19th, 2009)
	Gorgeous! Wow, you are so-o loving, s-o deep. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

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Name: Bill

Eclectic, at best. I learned some music theory at school, and read a ton about it since. I've listened to lots of music over the years. I once played guitar in an actual garage band and actually got paid to play! Once. Although live performance is an... [see more]

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