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Tell Me


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Brian D

 Genre: Indie Rock
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a remix, some new parts added, etc -this is the second version (I removed the first version)

a 70's style midtempo song - a "don't you love me no more" sort of thing.
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Lyrics
I've been watching as the hands go 'round - it's nice o'clock or maybe ten
Perhaps I'll watch them as the hands go 'round again
'cause I'm not certain if the time is right - Perhaps I'll wait another day
I've been searching for the perfect words to say

Would you tell me that you need me?
Would you tell me that you'll treat me right?
Will you tell me that you'll love me only - if the price is right

I've searched myself for any sign of doubt - come whatever, come what may
I want to reach you but my words push you away

Will you tell me that you want me?
Will you tell me that you'll treat me right?
Or will you tell me that you'll love me only - when the timings right

I can't imagine what I might have done - I guess it's nothing I can see
You never said and if you did it's news to me
I think about the way you used to be - but that was then and this is now
a perfect stranger come to take her final bow

Would you tell me that you need me?
Would you tell me that you'll treat me right?
Will you tell that you'll love me only - if the price is right

Will you tell me that you want me?
Will you tell me that you'll hold me tight?
Or will you tell me that you'll love me only - when the timings right
Song Stats
Hits: 855
Comments: 8
Fans: 4
Plays: 99
Downloads: 70
Votes: 4
Uploaded: Mar 03, 2007 - 01:15:14 AM
Last Updated: Mar 03, 2007 - 01:15:14 AM Last Played: Sep 09, 2009 - 08:50:23 PM
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Hardware:
G5 Dual 2GHz Tower
Software:
Garageband w/ Mellotron plugin
Comments
thegreateugene said 999 days ago (March 3rd, 2007)
nice.
i like it a lot!
Check out my latest song called Summer's End In Stereo
Vic Holman said 999 days ago (March 3rd, 2007)
70's alright
must be that vibrato keyboard & clav. now this is a prety cool song. great job on this. really enjoyed it.
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Scott Carmichael said 998 days ago (March 4th, 2007)
exellent
less of an Indie rock song and more of a pop song.... Tod Rungren peekin through here and there... that puts this song in a pretty big league
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rsolorio said 997 days ago (March 6th, 2007)
Catchy 'lil tune
I fell in love with the major 7th chord you'd land on at the end of each verse. Very nice. Well written, well played, well recorded. There you go now, I've told you.
Check out my latest song called Bass Thoughts
Brian D said 993 days ago (March 9th, 2007)
your picture
did you photoshop that picture?

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-B
Check out my latest song called Chase That Frown Away
rsolorio said 993 days ago (March 10th, 2007)
FAO Shwartz sized guitar
Um. Now how would I do that? %D

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Regards,

Roy
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public_buildings said 982 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
I'm diggin it!
Well done.

The guitar tone is right on, the arrangement is exactly what the song needs. I like it.
Check out my latest song called Don't Hate Me
said 972 days ago (March 30th, 2007)
Rundgren
I agree with Scott - I've always been a fan of Todd.

Nice vocals, composition is right on. Nice fitting lead guitar.

. - Harold
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