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About the inner struggle of living a privileged life and knowing that most of the world does not - Gratitude, Guilt, Fear, and Disbelief fighting for attention.
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Lyrics
I wait patiently
for the moment when
it all will come to rest,
and it hurts only when
I think of it
the end, the end.
*It is so comfortable here
I have nothing at all to fear.
I forget what you said;
his fingers are in between mine.
I forget
when he touches me like that
something about
the world and how it would end.
*
I care; I promise to
but what am I supposed to do?
Am I nearly enough
to make this world new;
make it all new.
*
for the moment when
it all will come to rest,
and it hurts only when
I think of it
the end, the end.
*It is so comfortable here
I have nothing at all to fear.
I forget what you said;
his fingers are in between mine.
I forget
when he touches me like that
something about
the world and how it would end.
*
I care; I promise to
but what am I supposed to do?
Am I nearly enough
to make this world new;
make it all new.
*
jiguma
Wow Estella, have you ever taken a big step forward with this one! I love the song, your vox, the guitars - and the bass and drums work well too. I have one major nit though, the synth overlay really needs to be cut WAY back - at the moment it totally overwhelms all the work you've put into the rest of this excellent little song. I really can't overemphasise this enough - everything else about this is just so good!! In fact, I think I'd just leave the synth out altogether - it really doesn't work for me. The other thing I'd change is to extend the wave fx both in and out of the song - so they happen for a few bars while the music is playing as well as before and after.
Your vocals are exceptional, and I love the way you've played the guitar on this - it's such an interesting approach. I'd love to hear a remix.
I think this could be a top notch song for sure.
Neil