Beautiful Machine v3 [TENSE]

chikoppi

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This is a remix of Packosmokes "Beautiful Machine." The song remains the same, but we've been experimenting (read: fighting) with GB to try and achieve better masters. Be critical, be kind, be good enough to leave any tips you might have!

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Lyrics

Got the disease, initiate the remedy

Built up as a trap, seeking out my immunity

Pulsing with the sin from within, they injected me

Seething with the strain and the pain, I'm in agony

Picking up all of the fall and the tragedy

Have to replace every trace of what isn't me

Compassion never found any ground for the likes of me

Got the disease, initiate the remedy

Feeling all the hate, this is not what I want to be

Now, I realize I'm my own worst enemy

No one is to blame for the shame, I'm not what I seem

Goth the disease, initiate the remedy

Seething with the strain and the pain, I'm in agony

Pulsing with the sin from within, they injected me

Built up as a trap, seeking out my immunity

Got the disease, initiate the remedy

Welcome to my world

Step inside my dream

Create my fantasy

Beautiful Machine

I want so much more

Kill my reality

Give me what I need

Song Stats

Hits: 3811
Comments: 20
Fans: 10
Plays: 771
Downloads: 163
Votes: 32
Uploaded: Aug 17, 2004 - 06:36:03 AM
Last Updated: Aug 17, 2004 - 03:10:57 AM Last Played: Oct 26, 2009 - 09:42:39 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

Shure m58, ART Tube MP, M-Audio Keystation 49e, Line 6 Spider AMP, Ibanez RG-470L

Software:

GB 1.1

Comments

penguinsocks

penguinsocks said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004)

packo's girlfriend's vocals
they sound a little odd... maybe they need to be a little
more similar to the quality of packo's... when she's solo.

otherwise, great mix, very smooth and professional.
awesome vocals.

previous version, people: http://www.macjams.com/
song/song_profile.php?lid=2491
comparatively this new version has a lot more BANG!
actually Scarlette's vocals have that same different quality
in the original too. it almost has too much presence.

little typo in your lyrics btw.. 3rd stanza.

Check out my latest song called reel me softly in the shade

penguinsocks	penguinsocks said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004)
	p.s. who the hell gave you a 6 for production?! Check out my latest song called reel me softly in the shade

	said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004)
	Zap my temples! Man, I love it when the Van de Graf generator lights up in stereo and ignites my temples. Up to that point, the sound was mostly center stage. What a trip! Sounds especially good on my Sennheiser earphones. Good job, crew. Keep the fantasy alive!

_nderscore	_nderscore said 1927 days ago (August 18th, 2004)
	..& i thot v2 was great really polished things up chiko. the changes are subtle but still definitive-nice work! ..on a side note-i've been having trouble getting some of your tunes to stream even tho they show as 'active' Check out my latest song called glyd

Cameron

Cameron said 1926 days ago (August 18th, 2004)

improved
The mix seems better balanced now (not that it was at all
bad before...). More polished and professional.

I really like all the little hooks popping in and out, spices
things up nicely. Great driving beat, but not overbearing.

The vocals are generally very good, but as pengy pointed
out, the quality of SCARLETT's voice is quite different
when she's solo.

Truly excellent job overall. Pretty much radio ready.

Check out my latest song called EPONYM

Ringo	Ringo said 1926 days ago (August 18th, 2004)
	Aural Excitement Jehosaphat chik dude, you really can squeeze a lot out of your rig.. You have got some good raw material with a track like this but it's impressive what you have done to it. All hail to the remix king. Check out my latest song called Real Slow

bloosman1	bloosman1 said 1926 days ago (August 19th, 2004)
	! So awsome! Hints of 'Berlin' (old school) as well as tragically new!! I love this! ---Jerome Check out my latest song called Broken Wing

ka-klick	ka-klick said 1925 days ago (August 19th, 2004)
	Welcome to the First church of apliantology, the white zone is for loading and unloading only... Yeah bayyybeee. I loved it before, and it's even more polished. Check out my latest song called Big Bad World - Live 1-16-2009 plus - MJRF

	said 1924 days ago (August 20th, 2004)
	Great production I like the mix. It's amazing that you did it all in Garageband. The lyrics are really good as is the guitar. Actually, the guitar is awesome! And I love the girl's vocals too.

Moodee	Moodee said 1924 days ago (August 21st, 2004)
	Great Indus base, cleaner mix Already commented previous version. as Ka-Klick says this one is "more polished" It serves well this song which I appreciate a lot for its originality. Check out my latest song called Coalesce (Parkee mix) - re-uploaded

TobinMueller

TobinMueller said 1921 days ago (August 23rd, 2004)

Excellent
Excellent production, CD ready. Great sound. Absolutely
consistent concept, integrated arrangement and lyrics.
Great. (Female vocals in a different dimension makes
perfect sense to me in this piece, adds to the story line. I
imagined she was the fantasy... The blending of the
machine metaphor with the reality of the machine
production is what makes this so brilliant!) Perfect
production (even tho the constant bass drum drives me
crazy... which is the point, I suspect).

Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

Normal	Normal said 1907 days ago (September 6th, 2004)
	Heyo... It sounds a lot better. Though when I was listening to it at a rather high volume, the guitars were starting to grate my nerves a little. Otherwise, it's great. Check out my latest song called Searching (intrumental)

Iseae

Iseae said 1881 days ago (October 2nd, 2004)

Reznor any one?
This for some reason it makes me think of what the
product would be if NIN and KMFD could procreate. I
would have gone for a rinkey tinkey sequencey bit over
the guitar, but that's my taste for you. I really liked it,
thought it got off to a bit of a slow start but once
everything got going it was a masterpiece (couldn't think
of a better word I've been face first in a computer all day)

Check out my latest song called Vickys Song

	antwan said 1851 days ago (November 1st, 2004)
	Scarlettes vocals She has a nice tone . But I think a more soulful approach would suit this track, almost a KMFDM style would rock it. Check out my latest song called First one done son

Pie	Pie said 1801 days ago (December 21st, 2004)
	Rockin' It's a builder alright - but when it gets there it kicks. Great vocal. Music to kill to :-) Check out my latest song called Kaleidoscope (Single)

Peter Greenstone	Peter Greenstone said 1778 days ago (January 14th, 2005)
	Cool tune Great powerful sound. Love the vocals. Sounds like maybe the mp3 is a little over compressed as I could hear some compression artifacting on the high end, particularly on the female vocals. Check out my latest song called From Nothing

TennesseeVic	TennesseeVic said 1705 days ago (March 27th, 2005)
	Nicely aggressive The song as such I can take or leave, but I'm very impressed by the production of this track. Alternating dense and sparse passages, distorted and clean sounds, creative panning; this is seriously good stuff. 7-9-8-8 Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)

Swanny	Swanny said 1630 days ago (June 11th, 2005)
	Wicked Good ! SWEEEEEEEET ! Check out my latest song called Chillin

	said 1561 days ago (August 18th, 2005)
	The test This is still one of my favorite MacJams. It passes the test of time. Ignites my temples!

screamalexz	screamalexz said 1468 days ago (November 19th, 2005)
	nice very NIN beat, like the vocals. kind of a grungy, metal style of vocal style that sounds cool. i like how the female vocals fit in, they give a nice contrast to the make vocals. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

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