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FREEDOM


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ROCARI

 Genre: Trance

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It's a track with a feeling of joy, happiness and freedom.
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Hits: 2035
Comments: 19
Fans: 7
Plays: 137
Downloads: 0
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 16, 2007 - 11:32:25 PM
Last Updated: Aug 28, 2007 - 09:40:41 PM Last Played: Jan 28, 2017 - 04:41:46 AM
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Hardware:
None, just my MacBook
Software:
Garage Band 3.0.4
Comments
jubah said 3805 days ago (July 17th, 2007)
Great...
This melody is amazing, as is the breakout bit at the end. Really loved it.
ROCARI said 3805 days ago (July 17th, 2007)
thanks jubah
It feels so good to hear this first comment :) Highly appreciated.
It's my first production ever (No Way Out the 2nd one)
I was even afraid of uploading it...lol
Thanks again brother & peace
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said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
hmmm:-)
Then make your intro longer! hahaha (replying here to a PM (private message) Rocari). Perhaps use a subtle cut-off to introduce the melody and open the baby up and then drop the beat in. The melody is Goa/ deep house and very addictive, love the stacatto backing melody. No shame at all for this being a first track. It shows you are a bit scared to show off your talent and consequently (perhaps) change stuff so sudden. Don't let the music take control when you make it. YOu seem to be an emotional and warm guy, at least judging from this tune. You have a talent for melody, freak around with "effects" like cut-off, resonance, (LFO) modulations, etc. Only judgement i do want to make is about the beats, just add a little bit more variance in it. Perhaps percussion and hi-hats, the 4 on the floor is repetitive as it is, right? ;-)

hats-off bro!

U have MJ liking it and that says more than enough for me!

Jb
said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
i meant to say
Don't let it scare you. Let your music take control!!!
And if it becomes a bit tedious (repetitive) you can always edit that!

So let your music take control and feel the machine you use to make it---> buy a tactile (something you can grab with your hands) control mechanism to fade individual patterns in and out

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I'm Rick James, B!
ROCARI said 3768 days ago (August 23rd, 2007)
you do make me feel good, thx Justbase!!
Thx so much for taking the time to reply, to you and everyone else, you people are amazing.

the funny thing is that I had a beautiful long intro and I changed it...lol.

btw, what do you mean with "percussion and hi-hats, the 4 on the floor is repetitive as it is"
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bud said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
Impressive debut - nice track
I like it when you drop out the beat. To be honest I'm not a fan of the straight techno beat - I like some more varied or if not - then more textured. Have fun and experiment.
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Moviz said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
great
sounding track here. Justbase gives you all the advice you need right now, but this is excellent, M
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Feter said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
Freedom
you music has some sence of flowin
and burstin into spaces ..and sure
it give some pleasant sence of freedom
thank you for the invitation ..welldone !!
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said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
Welcome!
Welcome to MJ. This is a nice first outing. As this is not my genre I don't feel competent to give tech advice here. I can only say it was a pleasant listen. Thanks for the heads up!

Be well!
Reinholt56 said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
An excellent piece of Trance.....
The mix is excellent and the production is very well done.

R56.
said 3770 days ago (August 21st, 2007)
I like this
The drums start things off nicely after the short synth intro. My opinion on long intro's is that people may get bored before things really kick in. Not the case with your song though. The timing seems just right.

One thing you might try is to change up the staccato synth arp that starts before the break, then carries through the break. When you first bring it in, try longer (whole notes, maybe) then at the break do the staccato thing. It might be a cool variation.

Overall, this is a very nice track!
ROCARI said 3768 days ago (August 23rd, 2007)
Thanks Mikey_d
Thanks to you and everyone. Your comments are so encouraging but my knowledge of music is little.

I started playing with the Garage Band software that came with my MacBook and this came out, so let me ask you Mikey, please, what do you mean with:

"change up the staccato synth arp that starts before the break, then carries through the break. When you first bring it in, try longer (whole notes, maybe) then at the break do the staccato thing. It might be a cool variation."

Excuse my musical ignorance but maybe you can point out the seconds so I know which part to work on.

Again, thx 4 your time my friend, really (and everybody else)
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said 3768 days ago (August 23rd, 2007)
I'll try :-)
The synth part starts at approximately :56 seconds. It is a very short note pattern using keys D,E, F#, G. Instead of the very quick rapid notes, try longs notes that change in the same places.

When the break starts (at approximately 1:50) change the synth to the quick rapid notes. I thought it would help to make a nice change in the note pattern for the second 1/2 of the song.

I hope this helps!
dajama said 3769 days ago (August 22nd, 2007)
Nice vibe here
This is an uplifting piece of music - full of energy and joy. The sounds are good, and the melody is catchy. I would try to make the beats more varied maybe? There is great feeling here; it flows through the music and that's magic. Nice work. Thanks for sharing! Peace.
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said 3767 days ago (August 24th, 2007)
the plateau of heightened splendor
Majestic. After a couple minutes, I wanted the percussion to soften and just then, it did! Excellent transition. Still needs some lyrical, up-front soloing with a flute, piano, electric guitar or Mediterranean vocal chant. The flaming bird of song needs to soar front and center stage on this wide and deep escarpment of joyous creation-song. Excellent start.
ROCARI said 3766 days ago (August 25th, 2007)
thx for your kind commets bu,,,
would you like to rmx it FEEDOM - (rschletty Rmx)

or anyone
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SmokeyVW said 3762 days ago (August 29th, 2007)
smooth
this works well as relaxation music for me.

if you want to expand on it, i would say it needs to evolve slowly into other sounds, but keeping that smooth sound you have achieved here.

but this is nice - real nice - as it is!

thanks!

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LightTronics said 3761 days ago (August 30th, 2007)
Nice Track!
A lot of loops though. But, that leads to another whole discusion of opinion. Keep up the good work!
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said 3593 days ago (February 14th, 2008)
Sounds like mine !!


This stuff you got going on in the background sounds like mine too

that I played on my keyboard with the Metropolis Synth Pad in Garage Band
I loved that synth pad too

The rest also was really good its given me also some more idea's how I can use that to.o thanks. thats the only thing that we had in common though.

Dee
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Trance music is a subgenre of electronic dance music (EDM) that developed in the 1990s. Trance could be described as a melodic, more-or-less freeform style of music characterized by steady beat between 130 and 158 bpm and repeating melodic patterns.

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