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| J.A.Stewart said 834 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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Solid Start Yeah, in addition to badly-needed bass, this tune needs some variety in the drum section... fills, transitions, etc. But it's a nice, clean vocal and some good guitar work.Just build it from here. Welcome to MacJams, pablatone. ;) --- Joe Check out my latest song called A Night @ Neverland
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| bjack said 834 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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I like This is a nice song. It has a lot of potential. Your smooth vocal fits perfectly. With a little more instrumentation this could be killa. Keep up the good work. If this is your first one, it's nice. Check out my latest song called Especially 4 U
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| Gav said 834 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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Nice I agree with the above comments. Great tune but could be worked on a little more. Definately needs bass. You could post in the forum seeing if anyone wants to play bass on the track? Nice vocal rythm! Check out my latest song called Understand
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| pablatone said 833 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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post to a forum? That would be so cool! How do I do that? and can I still mix it? This is all new to me, I can't even get a banner up. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| Feter said 834 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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everybody's talkin cool tune .. a very need for a bass here and more dynamic with the drums pattern very nice guitar work ..keep them comin !! p.s what kind of guitar your are playin with ?? Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )
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| pablatone said 832 days ago (August 17th, 2007) | |
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guitar i got an ibanez artcore hollowbody, i love it. i think it's on the middle postion for the rythm and bridge for the lead. I've done a bit of recording over the years, I started with a Fostex X-15 (i think) 4 track cassette recorder, the I got this tascam 388 7" reel mixer/recorder. the thing was the size of a coffee table and weighed 80 lbs, after that I got a Fostex digital 8 track, and now I have an imac w/logic express. i'm about 2 months into it and walk away everynight feeling like somebody just handed me the universe. This thing is just crazy. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| lengold said 834 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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This is a really catchy song, sung and played extremely well. The production is also first class and crisp. It obviously could use some bass on it, but otherwise very enjoyable and downloaded. Thanks. Cheers Len PS: Welcome to Macjams Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
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| pablatone said 832 days ago (August 17th, 2007) | |
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you couls hear that?!! Boy, you hit that one right on the head. it was about 104 in here. It really helps keep my vocal cords loose though. BTW if you ever need to sing a bass part- do it 1st thing in the morning before coffee or anything, or wait till you catch a cold. ;) You could try to get a cold I guess but that's just crazy. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| pablatone said 833 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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Thanks Thanks guys, yeah all critiques are spot on. Who wants to play bass? It is definately in the ruff stages right now, I was just so excited I had a premature debarcation. ok, that's only marginally funny. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| said 833 days ago (August 16th, 2007) | |
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Keep Up The Good Work ! Very nice song, the guitar sounds very good, much enjoyed listening to this piece, really needs bass but beautifully played and arranged, Welcome to MacJams ! Take Care ============== Yeman Auf Al-Rawi ------ Checkout what the Dragon thinks in Dragon's Rock |
| pablatone said 832 days ago (August 17th, 2007) | |
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thank you Birdman! thank you, I'm blad you liked it. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| said 832 days ago (August 17th, 2007) | |
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This is kickin some cool bass and this is a hit for sure! love it |
| Moviz said 831 days ago (August 18th, 2007) | |
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I... comply with all the other constructive comments and I still love it. Love your smoooooth vocal and that guitar, cheers M Check out my latest song called Come Back Billie
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| pablatone said 831 days ago (August 18th, 2007) | |
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could be yeah it's a very ruff take, but dang was it fun! logic express and loops- whoo-wee I'll be goin' deep and stayin long. Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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| Dj French Toast said 826 days ago (August 24th, 2007) | |
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Downloaded wow cool soul funk blues song man . Keep postin and Ill keep listenin man ...thanx for sharing ! Check out my latest song called Its The French Toast(Colab W/WillBill808)
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| revofsound said 666 days ago (January 31st, 2008) | |
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Way Cool Rythmn guitar reminded me of Grand Funk a bit. Love the Artcores. No bass didn't bother me any could here some in my head anyway. Reminds me of a song I heard in Altadina California years ago in the gym at a holloween party. The guy playing guitar looked and sounded alot like you :) Sweet solos with a smooth tone. I know a bass player you could probably get to do this with. The Doc. Mr Double D. |
| pablatone said 665 days ago (January 31st, 2008) | |
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Awrite!! We got the rev onboard! wat cool mike glad you stopped in! Check out my latest song called I got a gal
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Nice tune. Loved the vocal and melody. Needs some bass and some of the cymbal hits seemed off a little. Lot of potential here.