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pablatone

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discovered a loop that fit. went crazy from there
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Hits: 3082
Comments: 22
Fans: 7
Plays: 161
Downloads: 152
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Aug 15, 2007 - 10:32:13 PM
Last Updated: Aug 07, 2007 - 10:38:18 PM Last Played: Nov 30, 2015 - 10:37:05 AM
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Hardware:
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Software:
logic express 7
Comments
said 3690 days ago (August 15th, 2007)
Love the vocal
Nice tune. Loved the vocal and melody. Needs some bass and some of the cymbal hits seemed off a little. Lot of potential here.
J.A.Stewart said 3690 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
Solid Start
Yeah, in addition to badly-needed bass, this tune needs some variety in the drum section... fills, transitions, etc.

But it's a nice, clean vocal and some good guitar work.Just build it from here.

Welcome to MacJams, pablatone. ;)

--- Joe
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bjack said 3690 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
I like
This is a nice song. It has a lot of potential. Your smooth vocal fits perfectly. With a little more instrumentation this could be killa.

Keep up the good work. If this is your first one, it's nice.
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Gav said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
Nice
I agree with the above comments. Great tune but could be worked on a little more. Definately needs bass. You could post in the forum seeing if anyone wants to play bass on the track?

Nice vocal rythm!
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pablatone said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
post to a forum?
That would be so cool! How do I do that? and can I still mix it? This is all new to me, I can't even get a banner up.
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Feter said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
everybody's talkin
cool tune .. a very need for a bass here
and more dynamic with the drums pattern
very nice guitar work ..keep them comin !!


p.s
what kind of guitar your are playin with ??


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pablatone said 3688 days ago (August 17th, 2007)
guitar
i got an ibanez artcore hollowbody, i love it. i think it's on the middle postion for the rythm and bridge for the lead.
I've done a bit of recording over the years, I started with a Fostex X-15 (i think) 4 track cassette recorder, the I got this tascam 388 7" reel mixer/recorder. the thing was the size of a coffee table and weighed 80 lbs, after that I got a Fostex digital 8 track, and now I have an imac w/logic express. i'm about 2 months into it and walk away everynight feeling like somebody just handed me the universe. This thing is just crazy.
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lengold said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
This is a really
catchy song, sung and played extremely well. The production is also first class and crisp. It obviously could use some bass on it, but otherwise very enjoyable and downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len

PS: Welcome to Macjams
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said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
Summery Groove
...love the August-lazy guitar loping along, with the relaxed, comfy voice just grooving along. Yeah, a cracking baseline and some varied drum fills would carry this into the 'killer' zone - but that can come with time. What a debut! Welcome to MacJams!
pablatone said 3688 days ago (August 17th, 2007)
you couls hear that?!!
Boy, you hit that one right on the head. it was about 104 in here.
It really helps keep my vocal cords loose though.
BTW if you ever need to sing a bass part- do it 1st thing in the morning before coffee or anything, or wait till you catch a cold. ;)
You could try to get a cold I guess but that's just crazy.
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pablatone said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
Thanks
Thanks guys, yeah all critiques are spot on.
Who wants to play bass?

It is definately in the ruff stages right now, I was just so excited I had a premature debarcation.

ok, that's only marginally funny.
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said 3689 days ago (August 16th, 2007)
Keep Up The Good Work !
Very nice song, the guitar sounds very good, much enjoyed listening to this piece, really needs bass but beautifully played and arranged, Welcome to MacJams !

Take Care
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pablatone said 3688 days ago (August 17th, 2007)
thank you
Birdman!
thank you, I'm blad you liked it.
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said 3688 days ago (August 17th, 2007)
This is kickin
some cool bass and this is a hit for sure! love it
Moviz said 3687 days ago (August 18th, 2007)
I...
comply with all the other constructive comments and I still love it. Love your smoooooth vocal and that guitar, cheers M
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said 3687 days ago (August 18th, 2007)
cool tune!
welcome to macjams by the way!
i like the tune, and that guitar is killer.
mayber the rhythm is too loud? it seems like it is red lining a bit.
but i REALLY loke this song!
kudos!
pablatone said 3687 days ago (August 18th, 2007)
could be
yeah it's a very ruff take, but dang was it fun! logic express and loops- whoo-wee I'll be goin' deep and stayin long.
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Dj French Toast said 3681 days ago (August 24th, 2007)
Downloaded
wow cool soul funk blues song man . Keep postin and Ill keep listenin man ...thanx for sharing !
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revofsound said 3522 days ago (January 31st, 2008)
Way Cool
Rythmn guitar reminded me of Grand Funk a bit. Love the Artcores. No bass didn't bother me any could here some in my head anyway. Reminds me of a song I heard in Altadina California years ago in the gym at a holloween party. The guy playing guitar looked and sounded alot like you :) Sweet solos with a smooth tone. I know a bass player you could probably get to do this with. The Doc. Mr Double D.
pablatone said 3521 days ago (January 31st, 2008)
Awrite!!
We got the rev onboard!
wat cool mike glad you stopped in!
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Youra said 3439 days ago (April 22nd, 2008)
love it as it is
This simplicity makes it unique. Pure vocals, bare guitars, basic pulse. The pure spirit of blues rock ! _loaded. Thanks for it !
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said 3424 days ago (May 7th, 2008)
Everybody's talkin
Pablatone You Rock!! I love your voice on this too.

I love listening to first uploads LoL

Peace Dee xx
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about 2007 I received the gift of a presonus firepod. That launched me back into a love of music that I hadn't realized I'd been missing. Since then I've been writing and learning the craft of recording and mixing. I am now in two acoustic groups-... [see more]

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