Bright White

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bug67

Genre: Rock

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This is the final version. After months of computer problems and procrastination. A very special thanks to Amanda for her, as always, spectacular backing vocals. Also a shout out to Rob K. on lead guitar. Glad I caught him before he left the MacJams fold. Ya'll can check him out here:

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Lyrics

Bright White
Dave Placko © 1993

Bright white before me
Endless horizon
unopened book
unwritten pages

Why can't the stories be told?
Why can't I understand?
What's become of baby?
Why doesn't it fit the plan?

Bureaucracy bullshit!
I - hate you
Tellin' me I gotta fit in
I just want to go on livin', yeah

To hell with all of this structure
I'm tired of bein' in your chains
I wanna do what the hell I wanna do
Don't you be messin' with my brain

Bureaucracy bullshit!
I - hate you
Tellin' me I gotta fit in
I just want to go on livin', yeah

To hell with all of this structure
It don't even have to rhyme
Or even have any time
Or even mean a damn thing

Bureaucracy bullshit!
I - hate you
Tellin' me I gotta fit in
I just want to go on livin', yeah

Song Stats

Hits: 1207
Comments: 32
Fans: 16
Plays: 148
Downloads: 119
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Uploaded: Nov 14, 2007 - 08:24:18 PM
Last Updated: Nov 15, 2007 - 11:18:28 PM Last Played: Oct 25, 2009 - 12:09:57 AM

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Hardware:

Everything I own. This song wound up being over 30 tracks.

Software:

Digital Performer

Comments

amandamason@mac.	amandamason@mac. said 739 days ago (November 14th, 2007)
	AMAZING! This sounds so amazing!!! I just listened to the old one in comparison and wow! You've done a fabulous job! Guitar is sooooo sexy and soulful. A long but worthwhile project I think. You're such a talented man! Amanda P.S. It was a pleasure - for you anything. Check out my latest song called MacJammin

bug67	bug67 said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Amanda Always a joy working with you. You are the best! Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

Feter	Feter said 739 days ago (November 14th, 2007)
	Bright White this is Powerfull and groovey !! , Incredible singin and harmonies ..sure the lead guitar work ..just perfect ,man this is a gem ..KUDOS !! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

bug67	bug67 said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Thanks Thank you for taking time to listen and comment. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

caroline	caroline said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	we loved this in our house.... great singing and fab guitar - well done chaps!!! thank you. Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf

bug67	bug67 said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Caroline My best MacJams buddy. How the heck are you? Thanks for listening. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

Scott Carmichael

Scott Carmichael said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)

mysterious & atmospheric
excellent vox all around... the guitar work is perfect... it really propells the song... this has such a cool vibe.. as I read the lyrics, Dave... I'd like to hear you scream this toward the end... I don't care about the notes... just the emotion... your voice is smooth and sweet to the ear... this song is just beggin' for you to ruff it up a bit before it's done...

sheesh... I haven't been in touch for a few months... then I come and critisize...

sorry... this is great... did I mention that part

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bug67

bug67 said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)

Scott
Thanks for the critique. I used to belt this out a long time ago. However, as I've gotten older, my voice has mellowed somewhat and I can't scream 'em like I used to; at least not in a multiple take situation. In other words, if I don't get the scream right within the first couple of takes, forget it.

Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

stevel	stevel said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Great track Top quality song, performance, production! Has a nice Gilmour/Knopfler/Steve Stills feel. Cheers for sharing! Steve Check out my latest song called Electricity

bug67	bug67 said 739 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Wow! To be bunched in with such icons! I'm speechless. Thanks for listening. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

FGarofalo	FGarofalo said 738 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Pink Floyd meets Crosby, Stills and Nash. Beautiful man. The whole song has a great tone to it. Thank you for sharing. Frank. Check out my latest song called Chosen Few

bug67	bug67 said 738 days ago (November 15th, 2007)
	Thanks Thanks for the comment and the listen. Again, such an honor to be compared to such icons! Thanks. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 737 days ago (November 17th, 2007)
	Nice and tidy really nice production everything is in it's place. One of those type of tunes that gets you swaying in time to the music! Check out my latest song called November

bug67	bug67 said 736 days ago (November 18th, 2007)
	Thank you Thanks for taking time to listen and comment Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

dynoMYSTIC	dynoMYSTIC said 737 days ago (November 17th, 2007)
	( drums still make me smile... love Floyd. Cool, lush new voxes, special mention goes to the nice guitar solo and fills... very soulful... one of my favorites. Check out my latest song called Gravity

bug67	bug67 said 736 days ago (November 18th, 2007)
	Thanks I'm so lucky to have a friend that plays drums and does so well. It has made making music for this site a very rewarding experience. Thank you for listening. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

	said 734 days ago (November 19th, 2007)
	yeah I commented to you before in email, but here it is... Nice tune all around, next time 'belt it out' at the end -heh he (picked from Scott there). That would be cool to hear you truly bust a nut on the vox on the end part.... (free bird, yeah:) But it's good as is, Dave, nice done. Also a cool harmony from Amanda . - Harold

bug67	bug67 said 734 days ago (November 20th, 2007)
	Harold! Hey man, glad you're back. Thanks for stopping by. Check out my latest song called Follow the Bouncing Bear With the Kazoo Blues in E (MJRF)

craft	craft said 733 days ago (November 20th, 2007)
	I love it a great song!!! Really soudz amazing!! Well done Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)

Joe Brady	Joe Brady said 730 days ago (November 23rd, 2007)
	WOW! Great production Dave. It sounds very professional; the kind of sound that turns your head and makes you listen. Rhythm and melody mixed superbly, able to hear it all without trouble. Well done. Cheers, Joe Check out my latest song called The Refugee Blues by Feter with Jiguma

	said 644 days ago (February 18th, 2008)
	very nice i liked the CSN&Y vibe. it takes you to a place where gods once trod the muddy upstate new york farmlands of rock and roll. Allen

Barretok	Barretok said 642 days ago (February 20th, 2008)
	Great! What a beautiful piece. The guitar is superb and then the vocals. A C,S,N & Young "Deja Vu" feel, still an original. Very powerful and well crafted song. B Check out my latest song called ANOTHER STORY

ageofthedeathtree	ageofthedeathtree said 637 days ago (February 25th, 2008)
	man.... that was an awesome experience. i'm speechless, in a very good way! great job! very impressive! age -sons of hypnos Check out my latest song called Liar's Oath (sons of hypnos w/heightened)

	said 594 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	Bright White. i read your bio pretty interesting. My daughter lives in alaska so I just had to listen:) Happy i did this sounds fantastic cool guitar playing love your vocals. Ecellent!! Dowload for certain. Thank you sooo much. Peace Dee,

Norman Goodman

Norman Goodman said 591 days ago (April 10th, 2008)

Awesome song
Love the guitar playing.....intro, and build particularily floored me.
Exceptional vocal harmonies and melody.
Lead vocals are very good....love the punctuation of the guitar fills.
Excellent moody song....female parts helped drive this mother home.
Excellent playing all around..... very very very good song....I`ll be sure to check out more of your music.
If this is exemplary of what you are about I am blown away!

Check out my latest song called Sailing Across a Sea of Light Pt II

duhdewd	duhdewd said 578 days ago (April 23rd, 2008)
	Amazing tone! Hey man, this guitar tone is amazing! The vocals are great too. I'll have to pick your brain about production techniques some time soon. Mike Check out my latest song called 1997 (Fresh Electric version, no cheesy drums)

Jarvoid	Jarvoid said 556 days ago (May 16th, 2008)
	Very solid sounding piece,excellent....hell 30 tracks!?That is one hell of a project and it all sounds so clean and spaced ,well way to go ......Jarvoid Check out my latest song called Witches in Texas-'Hallowe'en Challenge 2009'

richardhowardjones	richardhowardjones said 533 days ago (June 8th, 2008)
	. Very laid back, without being soporific.Nice stuff my man. Check out my latest song called STANDIN' IN THE RAIN

VicDiesel	VicDiesel said 520 days ago (June 21st, 2008)
	CSNY ? This sounds remarkably like some halfway famous 70s band.... Hm. You have a nice voice, but you have to pay attention to what pitch you sing. At 1:15 and 1:20 there are some notes that are drifting all over the place. Don't just "let yourself go". Even spontaneity has to be controlled. Other than that, this is great stuff. Check out my latest song called Desert Stars

rtcooper	rtcooper said 474 days ago (August 5th, 2008)
	BIG Now, THAT's Rock n Roll. Wish the EQ had brought the Vx a little more Stage Front, but I certainly got the idea (then cheated and read Lyric). Compliments and Regards, Cooper Check out my latest song called Intimate Anyway

	said 455 days ago (August 25th, 2008)
	Bright White hahaa I don't know some folks never learn. Even when to shut there mouth. lol Sounds Fantastic Well done guys. Mitzi

Bob6stringer

Bob6stringer said 434 days ago (September 15th, 2008)

Diving in
What a lush soundscape, and it's got that ambience with some teeth in it, not just another pretty ambient elevator ride. I can't help but pay extra attention to guitars in everything I hear and I'm just taken by your performance and treatment here. This level of studio smarts will forever evade me; it's all I can do to rub two sounds together and generate some light/heat, but you have it all, bugman.

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Name: Dave

~About me~ Born in the West Texas town of Midland and raised mostly in Dallas, TX. I have lived in several places throughout my life and visited many more. One of the more interesting was Tehran, Iran in 1979 during the overthrow of ... [see more]

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