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newer better version,,,, still no proper lyrics
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| musichead said 654 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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final take this is the final home take. time to move on to the next song. Thanks for the listen..... Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| said 653 days ago (February 13th, 2008) | |
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Good sound It sounds great.... The melody is good... Thumbs up..... |
| musichead said 653 days ago (February 13th, 2008) | |
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thanks but.... Thanks but Im just still not happy with the lyrics. Its my weak point... Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| said 653 days ago (February 13th, 2008) | |
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still.... ... the song and production instrumental is good.... And it's a favorite, on my list..... |
| musichead said 652 days ago (February 13th, 2008) | |
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well i really didnt think my lyrics are that good.. Im always thinking of a better way to get my point across..If i even have a point...thanks for the listen Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| Roxylee said 652 days ago (February 13th, 2008) | |
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Love the guitar solo and the rhythm, the clean, delicate picking, the strings, and the vocals. Niiiiiice......:-) Check out my latest song called Sweet Grace
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| musichead said 649 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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funny Its funny but I really dont think of myself as a singer. I think I sound flat with no tone....well..thanks for the listen!! Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| Estella said 650 days ago (February 15th, 2008) | |
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nostalgic has a nostalgic feel to it. Great! Check out my latest song called Este Momento
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| musichead said 649 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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thanks Good to see ya again ......thanks for the listen Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| BloodSoul said 650 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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i think the lyrics sound fine. i have a lot of trouble with lyrics as well... it's hard to express what i'm trying to say with words, i like guitars a lot better. Check out my latest song called New Blues
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| musichead said 649 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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Lyrics Lyrics are something that I have to work . I prefer playing over writing lyrics any day of the week. But I will work on my weakness. And maybe someday it will get better Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| Alannah said 650 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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I still ..... .. always think it's not a bad idea to post the lyrics ... so that those of us who like to hum along and read along can ..... I would turn up the vol on the vox a tad in spots or clarify them a little ..... but's thats just me .... to give the lyrics some clarity ..... I like tha backing vox but still would like to here the lead a little more .... or clearer ..... Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit
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| said 648 days ago (February 17th, 2008) | |
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Crazy The lead is like a ruff spot on a gentle breeze. I like that alot! Realy well thought out song! Enjoyed! |
| musichead said 634 days ago (March 2nd, 2008) | |
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thought out? naaa...never thought out.. I just winged most the lyrics. Thanks for the listen!! Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| peacepiano said 632 days ago (March 4th, 2008) | |
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Tune You've really refined the tune here. It's cool how we can follow your process through the versions. I remember liking the original idea a lot, and now I am impressed by how much you have been able to improve on it. Thanks Bill Check out my latest song called I Should Have Known
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| Joe Brady said 627 days ago (March 9th, 2008) | |
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Proper lyrics... This song has pure potential, but you're right, the lyrics need to be as good as the melody/instrumentation (which is excellent btw). The first line is killer, and well sung; after that I have a hard time knowing what you are singing about, but I sense you have something there, an emotion, maybe. I feel you should let it sit awhile and come back to it when you need it. This could really be great. Joe Check out my latest song called The Refugee Blues by Feter with Jiguma
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| musichead said 624 days ago (March 12th, 2008) | |
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thanks I have worked on it.. I still dont have it yet...But I have written 3 new songs. I think the only time I will finish the lyrics, Is when I buy studio time. Sometimes it just comes down to being pushed into a corner. Thanks for the listen!! Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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Feter
cool demo my friend ..I best like your solo
in the middle .wish to hear the final take !