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Burn(mixed)


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screamalexz

 Genre: Acoustic

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this is a newer recording of a song i posted a few weeks ago (will you burn with me) not a final version by far but i think the production is a bit better. i think the guitar may be too quiet not sure what do people think? and ignore when it gets to could i burn a thousand deaths my missing the word could.. or i missed the first half cuz i was falling asleep and forgot what i was doing when i was recording cuz i zoned out. i wasnt going to post this one, but dee wanted me to put up the newer recording because she really likes it. i have more produced recordings of my last few songs. i may add a second guitar to some of the picking parts.. sounds good but i also sort of like the emotion of just one voice and one guitar.

.. additional thought.. this song has been confusing some about it's meaning and such. this song is sad yes but in it's dark way it is a song about hope. it is a song about the hope of being saved. let me explain.. "burn in hell with me it just might feel like heaven" in my own way that means we can save eachother from the past and fill the empty hole of loneliness. this song is not about ravyn.. it is about a friend who i have all but fallen in love with over and over again it is about telling her we can help eachother through and comfort eachother and through it we may discover we truly love eachother. i know it does not sound like a song of hope.. but it was sparked by hope. it was saying look at all the pain ive felt but you can make it feel better.
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Lyrics
my soul cannot be saved
i drown in misery
i don't even wanna try
it's burned me from the start

the first breath i took
i looked into the light
slowly i've been dying
losing with out a fight

maybe if you hold me close
burn your soul inside of me
burn in hell with me
it just might feel
it just might feel like heaven

my soul cannot be saved
i lost it from the start
would you lose your soul tonight
to spend eternity

the blood drips from my neck
to your longing mouth
slowly cuts the flesh away
to breath this life aknew

could i burn a thousand deaths
to feel the sweetest pain
give into another night
and take this flight away

take me away take me away take me away

Song Stats
Hits: 2631
Comments: 31
Fans: 12
Plays: 60
Downloads: 86

Uploaded: Apr 17, 2008 - 08:31:51 AM
Last Updated: Apr 17, 2008 - 10:00:25 AM Last Played: Oct 03, 2014 - 05:07:01 PM
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Hardware:
fender accoustic
Software:
cakewalk home studio
Comments
said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
Really good
Chance this version is better your voice is good on this seriousely
I mean you are singing about a memory of a lost love.And you are agonising over it.
But that guitar
I seriousely love the sound and the chords.
Its got a beautiful sound, Your voice is sad and mournful/as it should be thats the song.
Yet the sound of the guitar is sooo beautiful. The two opposites see what I mean. I think your guitar loves you.!! :)
Peace Dee xxxx
screamalexz said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
...
thanks dee. the interesting thing is this was sort of written out of a moment in hope. me and my friend both have the same problem and it was sort of my saying lets forget everything we've lost and take care of eachother. i know it's hard to find the light and the hope through this song, but it was there. my writing and dark mind often mask joy and hope to where it's almost invisible.
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Godchaser said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
Sad song
and a song that conveys a lot of emotion.I think I heard the first go around and liked that as well.I can certainly feel this deep in my bones.There is much I could say about the discription part of the post but that's a whole other story,only to be spoken of in private due to the nature of the site.Musically I like what you're doing here,stripped down,barebones raw,zero effects,naked.Much enjoyed.

Blessings,
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screamalexz said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
thank you
thank you i'm glad you liked it. i definitely felt this song when i wrote it. yes there is lots that can be discussed with the description it was over analyzing of the song by others that caused me to write more to the description so perhaps the meaning of the song made more sense.
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Feter said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
Burn
nice ballad my friend this for sharin !!
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screamalexz said 3506 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
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thanks i'm glad you liked it. it's one of my favorite songs i think.
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Skean said 3507 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
I'm impress
You've is right on in this my dear friend :-)
You never stop to impress on me.
And I'm glad to read hove you really love and try to find the way in to hers heart... Sad yes but lovely in the same-time.. Bravo.

About the mix yes that is the thing you've impress me as your playing & singing too.

Take care
--
Kenta
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screamalexz said 3506 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
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thanks. i still don't think this a finished version but definitely a lot closer than the first one i posted.
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davisamerica2 said 3506 days ago (April 17th, 2008)
Very heart rending, Skean
Sublime guitar work. Your voice, very alluring. Message? One line dominates. "Losing without a fight." I listened to this twice, and I hope many do. Thanks for sharing. Terry
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screamalexz said 3506 days ago (April 18th, 2008)
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i can see why that sticks out especially because it sticks out for how i've often felt lately like there's nothing to even fight anymore. i'm glad you enjoyed it.
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davisamerica2 said 3496 days ago (April 27th, 2008)
Sorry for the name screw-up Chance
but message is the same. Thanks again for sharing. Terry
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magnatone said 3506 days ago (April 18th, 2008)
Burn
wow chance - this is a big leap forward on this song. Your vocals are sounding really good here, nice guitar work. Congrats!
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screamalexz said 3506 days ago (April 18th, 2008)
thanks
thanks. ive had so many troubles trying to record this one but it finally came out pretty decent tho it's still not finished. every now and than things just seem to all of the sudden make a lot more sense and work better
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lavalamp said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
soulful
You really lay it out there. Very emotional. Your voice sounds great.

Well-crafted song.

Dave
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screamalexz said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
...
thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it.
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dirigent said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
Burn
Wonderful singing, outstanding delivery, what a performance, I love it!!
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screamalexz said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
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thanks i'm glad you liked it. it's probably the closest i've had to a finished recording.
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obbster said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
Nice ballad
I can feel the pain shine through...
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screamalexz said 3504 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
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thanks. i'm glad the feeling was able to seep into the recording a bit.
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aegri_somnia said 3503 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
love it!
Very raw sound hear. Adds to the mood of loneliness or mourning. I have to admit the lyrics are awesome. Keep on jammin, my fellow macjammer.
-Tim
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screamalexz said 3503 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
why
thanks! this is one were i rather like the lyrics. i just played this live a little while ago. thank you for the comment :)
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Diviner said 3502 days ago (April 22nd, 2008)
Your voice suits the song
and you sing with such feeling, it really helps make the track. The music is well played and as noted in a 'Perfect Pitch' forum thread, its the voice of feeling that matters. Nice track.
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screamalexz said 3502 days ago (April 22nd, 2008)
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thanks i'm glad you liked it.
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Barretok said 3502 days ago (April 22nd, 2008)
Agonizing sound...
Beautiful melody on the guitar. Agonizing vocals that deepen the sense of doom of the lyrics. In contrast the beautiful girl in the picture is looking up at the camera flash with profound eyes. Very sad song.
B
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screamalexz said 3502 days ago (April 22nd, 2008)
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thanks for the comment and that's my favorite picture of the pretty lady in the picture. think it's because it seems like she's looking up at me. tis a great friend. i'm in love with the picking picking pattern on the guitar, for years ive obsessively played melodies based around that pattern no matter where the capo is moved just playing in d chord position changing up the notes on the last string is so pretty
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said 3499 days ago (April 25th, 2008)
Nice!
A very nice song Chance. Good vocals, good playing. I enjoyed it but I was wishing if you can turn it into a full song with solo, some electric guitar or just strings background! But it's really nice song. Good job my friend!

Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi
screamalexz said 3499 days ago (April 25th, 2008)
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i have tinkered a little with adding another guitar too it, but i donno if it would it the song. i like the feeling of just sitting next to a special someone singing to them that a solo guitar gives. i shall tinker a bit and perhaps post a version with more instruments.
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dajama said 3496 days ago (April 27th, 2008)
Very cool
Once again, you produce something powerful and affecting with just your voice and guitar. The lyrics are thought-provoking and very well expressed. Your voice on this is very good - expressive and emotive. This is very powerful. Nicely done, my friend. Peace.
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screamalexz said 3496 days ago (April 27th, 2008)
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thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it.
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selters said 3494 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
Very nice!
You fill oyur music with a great amount of emotion. You are improving all the time.
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screamalexz said 3494 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
thanks
thank you for the listen and comment :) always appreciated from the selters
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