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an unexpected love song i wrote... this is the first cut and i'm looking for tips.
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| MarkHolbrook said 579 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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Echo what Micheal said... Catchy song and love your vocals! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
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| Willywagga said 53 days ago (October 5th, 2009) | |
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oh so again See, there you go again, being perfect. With the right production any of your songs I've heard so far could be enormous. Lovely uplifting feeling from this pure like early Joni and something else, something even better. Love it.. Check out my latest song called The Jes on Sea Road
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michael2
i like the real piano and your voice is great. what you did is awesome, but if it was me i would: bring in a cleaner piano sound when the vocals start (maybe fade the first out while the other comes in). i really like the sound you have but it's a little thin and distorted. but it's really cool sounding.
i would also make the drums louder and add a bass. maybe some acoustic guitar chords over the chorus. i like when you do bring in the guitar about 3/4s of the way in.
really nice song though, almost like an old motown song. i really liked it.