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This is an early rough draft, so please be kind. My friend Scott made up the chord progression and I played around with it a bit. I created the melody and wrote some lyrics, trying to feel out a song. The recording is average, nothing special. One guitar track, vocals, and drums. I realize the drums don't match up very well and are a little too...poppy. The song is also incomplete, still needs alot added. I haven't had much time to record lately so this is all I'll be posting for sometime.
Thanks for listening, any feedback is appreciated, enjoy!
Thanks for listening, any feedback is appreciated, enjoy!
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Lyrics
I wanted to stay asleep
I don’t want to remember
All that hope should be
Was long, long gone
Long Gone
I tried to stay awake
But my mind wouldn’t let me
Can’t forget, can’t stay asleep
Can’t go on
Go on
And here I am again alone
Still waiting for you to come
I thought I knew what it was I needed
But look what I’ve become
I’ve lost my way; I’ve lost my hold
I’m breaking away, not in control
I’m caught in the moment, searching for something to feel
I wish it wasn’t real
I don’t want to remember
All that hope should be
Was long, long gone
Long Gone
I tried to stay awake
But my mind wouldn’t let me
Can’t forget, can’t stay asleep
Can’t go on
Go on
And here I am again alone
Still waiting for you to come
I thought I knew what it was I needed
But look what I’ve become
I’ve lost my way; I’ve lost my hold
I’m breaking away, not in control
I’m caught in the moment, searching for something to feel
I wish it wasn’t real
gail60
I really enjoyed this song. You have a great voice and play guitar nicely. Like you mentioned, the drums may be a bit off sounding, but honestly, I think this is a really good song. You did an excellent job!