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Can't Be Together


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asconejar

 Genre: Rock
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Probably my last loudest composition. I intended to make it honestly raw, loud and dirty. I'm having a hard time mixing the drums for I only use free loops. This is actually inspired by deep purple and nirvana. It was composed 15 years ago. Hoping you can share the feelings that this song is trying to convey.
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Lyrics
Can’t be Together

Verse 1
I, I feel so fine
When you said you don’t love me
The pain subsides

Verse 2
You, you made me mad
When you didn’t tell me
What will be the last

Chorus
Things so clear
You mean what I hear
The two of us
Can’t be together
Love means so different
To one another

Verse 3
Yes, I am weird
Even I know that you’re wrong
I respect your decision

Song Stats
Hits: 2264
Comments: 5
Fans: 2
Plays: 38
Downloads: 90
Votes: 3
Uploaded: May 31, 2008 - 11:13:37 AM
Last Updated: Jun 04, 2008 - 07:33:27 PM Last Played: Feb 13, 2017 - 09:00:25 PM
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Hardware:
at2020
firebox
imac 2gz
rbx 170
pacifica 112j
Software:
garageband
Comments
dajama said 3483 days ago (May 31st, 2008)
I like this
It does have a raw, loud feel, which I like. The bass sounds very good, but seems a little buried in the mix to my ears. The drums sound good, but could also be a little louder in sections. I also use drum loops in my songs, and it can be challenge to make them sound natural, but I think it can be done. I definitely think the guitar should be more forward in the mix. Your vocal sounds good, and you put a lot of feeling into the singing. A couple of places where the vocal does get a little loud, but a great performance. Nice track. Very cool. Peace.
Check out my latest song called Across the Wire (MJRF)
said 3481 days ago (June 2nd, 2008)
Can't be together.
Yeah I can relate to this. The Music is loud but I like it.
I will also download it. Thanks.
Peace Dee.
said 3481 days ago (June 2nd, 2008)
And
I voted you all 10z. xx
mowguy3 said 3475 days ago (June 8th, 2008)
Nice Rockin
Realy like what you did vocaly. some great guitar chatter as well. Enjoyed it, thanks for sharin.
Be well, Russ
Check out my latest song called What Would That Make Me?
chinaman2 said 3435 days ago (July 18th, 2008)
galit na galit
great rocking tune. btw, i'm more active in iComp, it's also a site for Mac user musicians.
Check out my latest song called Weather (with Strangedream)
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