Serial Lover

jakgetar69

Genre: Alternative Rock

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This is a VERY rough demo. Be kind when rating.

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You never offered much in the way of a solution
To help me heal the wounds you left on me
It seems kind of unfair
That you were able to escape unscathed

How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never

wasted hours wasted life
all for my the sake of my cold mistress
pleasing her without knowing
that i'm no lover
just her fool

How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never

Something else broke your short span of attention
and I was suddenly no fun
Time to leave the crime scene
and suck the life from another one

How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never

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Hits: 548
Comments: 5
Fans: 3
Plays: 36
Downloads: 0
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jun 20, 2008 - 01:43:24 AM
Last Updated: Jul 07, 2008 - 03:07:31 PM Last Played: Aug 03, 2009 - 08:44:16 AM

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Feter	Feter said 526 days ago (June 20th, 2008)
	Serial Lover good rockin ..thnx for sharin I m waitin to hear the final take ! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

rabittwhole	rabittwhole said 526 days ago (June 20th, 2008)
	right then cool .. but u need a bass line ... but a lot of promise really :-] Check out my latest song called Just A Kid

Peter Bauckham

Peter Bauckham said 526 days ago (June 20th, 2008)

As a rough demo
this is pretty good - like the guitar sound - Vocals are obviously recorded 'dry' - I think they'll sound better with a dash of reverb or something. I'd like to see more of a change on the chorus - I think they need to sound bigger - add another guitar - double track the vocal - perhaps an acoustic. There's lots of potential.

All the best
Peter

Check out my latest song called All The Same (CBGB) (Last Chance Challenge)

mikkinylund	mikkinylund said 525 days ago (June 20th, 2008)
	I don't know I kind of like it with just the guitar like this, perhaps some drums would make it a tighter song. It has potential though, I like the sound. Reminds me of a mix between BRMC, and Joy Division. Check out my latest song called Fairyland (Satumaa)

jakgetar69	jakgetar69 said 525 days ago (June 20th, 2008)
	THANK YOU! The fact that you said that the song reminds you of Joy Division, even if only very slightly is a HUGE compliment to me. Joy Division might be my biggest influence and is possibly my favorite band of all time. I wish my voice was as deep as Ian Curtis's, that would be nice. Check out my latest song called Letter to the Editor

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Artist Info

Name: Jack

I have many more influences than I am able to list here but some of my major, current ones are: -Frank Zappa -The White Stripes -The Who -Radiohead -Thom Yorke -LCD Soundsystem -Kashmir (the band from Denmark, not the Led Zeppelin cover band... [see more]

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The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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