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Fallen Frame (Coffee House Challenge) Remix - Alannah _ Mrjctm


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Alannah

 Genre: Acoustic

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I decided to RE-DO the first song I ever posted on Macjams as the Coffee House Challenge .... because it was so coffee-house-esque .... the lyrics and music are by Mrcjtm
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Lyrics
I am the fallen frame in the hallway
a crooked leg in the morgue
im all thats haunting
pleasant, contrasting
warmly swimming to the deep end
slowly sinking
the flying thoughts come back again while i
think i might - come home
the curveless pitch returns come monday
with the weekend gone im loving more
and in every way prepared
the stars might shine through everyone but the earth
devours hearts
bleeding mouths without a mind to render false
and eyes running till they all turn red
slowly retreating - and look back again
to the south
carrying on - about needs and wants
ruptures spleens - and breaks up hearts
if there was one thing more
in this world the i abhor
its that you were nothing more
than what the cover told
me you were
i am coming to the end - of my wits
or what you might say
gets me through the days, the weeks, the months, the years
what little time
we hold, we share, we bought
we join, we split, we part
but still hold hands in the dark
just a little - taught
the days grow long - our hold grows strong
we wont have to do it alone
our hearts cant break
and our eyes wont tear
because we wont - forsake
our love this year

Lyrics by Mrcjtm
Song Stats
Hits: 2404
Comments: 31
Fans: 10
Plays: 83
Downloads: 98
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 06, 2008 - 01:19:18 AM
Last Updated: Feb 14, 2010 - 12:24:22 AM Last Played: Jan 17, 2017 - 01:32:08 PM
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Comments
davisamerica2 said 3365 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Love your voice....
...on this Alannah, the guitars are great. I enjoyed the lyrics, and the melody was perfect. Thanks for this. Terry
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Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
This tune ....
.. was originally the first thing I ever posted on my own page at Macjams ... and I thought it was so fitting as a coffee house challenge thingey ... even though I submitted it AFTER the challenge was over .... sigh ... what else is new ! Thanks for the listen and comment!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
dirigent said 3365 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
What a great voice
Outstanding vocals and great atmosphere. Love this track :-) Congrats Alannah!!
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Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks dirigent ....
.. I tried to mix it up a little in the re-sing ... but I don't think I changed too much up .... I guess the original will always be stuck in my head ... thanks for the listen and the comment!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
said 3365 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Wow!!
Alannah you sound wonderful and you are a really amazing singer you really are and you sooo cheered me up when I was down in the dumps.
earlier. Lov ya girl. :) lyrics are brilliant as well. Great music.

Such a beautiful spirit you have as well. I really mean that too.
You have a powerful voice and thats what I love in a great singer such as yourelf as well.
Well done both of you You Rock !

Peace Dee xxxxxx
Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Ah Dee .....
... you are such a faithful supporter of so many here at Macjams ..... I should really smarten up and try to do the same .... thanks for your kind words (as always) ..... "A"
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Skean said 3364 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Okay I love it
Okay!
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said 3364 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
ha hahaaaa
Ok have I gone a bit overboard :) But I mean it. No wonder my fingers are starting
to ache I write too much. LOL
Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
hahah a girlie .....
.. you DO need to get some sleep !!!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Skean my friend .....
Okay ... is GREAT to hear .... glad you love it .... it's been around here as long as I have now ... heh heh
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
HEY ....
... my Skean response ... somehow ended up under the Dee response .. what the heck is going on here !!!!!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Skean said 3355 days ago (July 15th, 2008)
Hi my dear friend
The site is up & down I'll waiting for the beta site and hopefully all be better there.... I love what you're doing but that you already know... Cheers and take care, Kenta
Check out my latest song called Deep through the forest / W-particledots
cjhoose said 3364 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
calming
I remember this one! :) Thank you for the lovely reminder, with your lovely voice.
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Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks CJ ....
.. yes .. it definitely "took me back" as well when I was revisiting this .... back to the good old bad old days ....... sigh .... we never see you in chat anymore .....
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
guygrooves said 3364 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
This is soooooo
Beautiful. The lyric is so deep and delicious. The vocal is smooth and warm. Great job Alannah. This is a sure favorite.
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Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks Guy ....
.. the lyrics belong to MRCJTM .... he wrote the original ... he played the guitar and originally sang the tune himself .... I then did a cover of his tune .... but in my cover version ... I sang his same lyrics .. just in all the different places .. and changed up the melody some .. thanks so much for the listen and the comment!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Doadars Uncle said 3364 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Niiice
Warm presentation. A story of standards... strength or weakness...

but love is both, I think.

Well done,
Doug
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Alannah said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thank you so much ....
D.U .... your listen and comment is appreciated .....
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
said 3358 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Very nice Alannah
Encore!!

Bravo

b
Alannah said 3351 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Well then ....
... after throwing my own little mini concert ... it occurred to me that I forgot to say "thank you" to my virtual audience .... how evil am I?
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
mrcjtm said 3356 days ago (July 14th, 2008)
great
yah this is a great remixing of it - the coffee house atmosphere fits really well. great job!
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Alannah said 3351 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Thanks ....
.. for the inspiring guitar track to work with ... did ya notice tho .. I "flubbed" your name in the title (ACK ... it just wouldn't be Alannah if I didn't go dyslexic on something ..... sigh) .....
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
LunaTrick said 3355 days ago (July 15th, 2008)
Cool Alannah...
Good to hear your voice again!

Cheers...
Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)
Alannah said 3351 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Thanks Luna ....
... good to see you back round these parts again ... I still look forward to our "dark" collab .....
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Lightman- said 3346 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Great
This isn't the last time i've heard this song.... I really love it.... Good lyrics and vocals... I really like your voice.... You're doing great here.... Keep up the good work....
Check out my latest song called You Are
Alannah said 3346 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Thanks Lightman ....
.. the fun part was creating my own little mini concert ... complete with people ... applause .... etc. .. hahaha almost like being there ! Amazing what we can do in our basements these days!
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
Lightman- said 3346 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Yeah
I've had the idea myself... That i wanna try to make a little concert, on the computer... With a bunch of songs....
Check out my latest song called You Are
Alannah said 3346 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Yes ....
.... my dream is to be the whole damned choir on one .....
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
MarkHolbrook said 2806 days ago (January 15th, 2010)
Cool
Great coffee flavor here... Is this Sumatra? :-) Loved it!
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Alannah said 2806 days ago (January 15th, 2010)
I was trying to do the challenge thing ......
... you know ... find an ambiant coffee house cutlery and voices loop ... toss it on your tune .... hahahahaha I did resing it tho ! My original version of this I flubbed the lyrics !
Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)
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