Winter (Demo)

obbster

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This is song that ive just written. It doesnt feel finished yet and i think the vocals need some work but im posting it to get some constructive feedback.

Cheers.

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Lyrics

and time, drifts away
winter comes and darkens day
i live
to die
i wait

moving further into night
i live, i live, ilive

carry you into the place where we are free
i live
to die
i wait

no-one can escape this winter i feel
the winter i feel

i wander through the fields
try to forget this pain i feel

i live
to cry
im tired of waiting

(The winter i feel, The winter i feel)

Song Stats

Hits: 607
Comments: 16
Fans: 9
Plays: 33
Downloads: 38
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Jul 09, 2008 - 10:19:24 AM
Last Updated: Jul 09, 2008 - 10:19:24 AM Last Played: Oct 18, 2009 - 02:00:33 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

acoustic (589), winter (58), sombre (3), death (146), pain (72), slow (101)

Hardware:

MacBook Pro 17" 2.4
M-Audio Keystation

Software:

Logic Pro, Lounge Lizard, B4-II, Jam Pack Rhythm Section (for bass and drum instruments), T-racks EQ/Mastering/Compressor

Comments

kassia

kassia said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)

Winter
Ah dude, the vocals on this are awesome. I love your voice. Nice guitar and bass. This is a beautiful, beautiful tune. My only suggestion would be to make those keys sound a little more organic and less synthy, to meld with the lovely acoustic feel of this. Great harmonies and backing vocals. This is really a killer tune. Good job and thanks for sharing!

Check out my latest song called Deep Majesty

obbster	obbster said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Thanx Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked the song. Check out my latest song called Legend

	said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Winter Very nice. Peace Dee.

obbster	obbster said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Thanks Thanks for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it. Cheers. Check out my latest song called Legend

Foinix	Foinix said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Winter Very, very cool. Great tune. Check out my latest song called Coming To Consciousness

obbster	obbster said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Thanks Thank you for your comment. Im Glad you liked the song. Cheers. Check out my latest song called Legend

12parsecs	12parsecs said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	cool pic. great vocal melody. great sounding rhodez or whatever keys those are. normally i'd point out that bass looses 'oomph' if it is panned, but in this nice mellow tune it really works. nice job singing too. Check out my latest song called Through

obbster	obbster said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Thanx Thanks for your comments. I'm a big fan of your stuff so im glad you liked my song. I used Lounge Lizard Electric Piano plug in for the keys - its a great piece of software, sounds amazing. Cheers. Check out my latest song called Legend

rsorensen	rsorensen said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	great I faved this within 2 secs of hearing the opening riffs. great sound/style. chilly guitar tones. right up my alley. great singing too. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up

obbster	obbster said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Thanks Thanks for your comments, mate. I love your stuff - inside your skin is awesome (and I bought it from iTunes too). Looking forward to the Satellite Tragedy album. Cheers. Check out my latest song called Legend

rsorensen	rsorensen said 500 days ago (July 14th, 2008)
	inside your skin wow thanks for that! album's out next month :) Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up

Feter	Feter said 505 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
	Winter this is very powerfull ...very deep great great singing ..the insteruments so awesomely used here, the keys in the middle just right in time ..Good job thnx alot for sharin !!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

lavalamp	lavalamp said 503 days ago (July 11th, 2008)
	Great voice Your voice is stellar and the song is great. Hope hear more from you in the future. Dave Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

	said 494 days ago (July 20th, 2008)
	Winter This sounds gorgous Your vocals are really cool. Love the guitar chords your song lyrics are awsome as well. Very Poignant. Thanks for sharing. Peace Dee.

fremsley	fremsley said 328 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
	... nice outro biz. Check out my latest song called at least its a start

kingbee	kingbee said 304 days ago (January 26th, 2009)
	let it snow Great vocals again. And the guitar is great. I wasn't sure about it being panned on it's own to the right..but it works really well. Nice one Check out my latest song called Dr.Thunderball-Bond theme challenge