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This is a song about fear...
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Uploaded: Oct 21, 2008 - 08:32:14 AM
Last Updated: Oct 17, 2008 - 04:07:58 AM Last Played: Jun 19, 2014 - 12:56:20 AM
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said 2141 days ago (October 21st, 2008)
Fear that deep water.
I like that chord progression, the polyrhythmic theme, and the guitar sounds. Nice work with the vocal effects, too. Please publish your lyrics. They sound interesting.
PentaRay said 2141 days ago (October 21st, 2008)
Lyrics
Thanks for your compliments! In an earlier version of the song I had the polyrhythmic part going on throughout the whole song. That turned out te be too much, so I cut it down a bit.

The lyrics are below. As I am not an english native speaker, I welcome any comments on my lyrics.

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Down in the Deep

Lyrics & music by Penta Ray


Down in the deep
It's waiting for me
A shade of something
With no name
That's why I told you
I'm afraid to go out swimming
When the water is green
And there's no one to be seen
No one to be seen

Down in the deep
I know it's waiting
Massive in it's presence
Without shape
It follows me with it's eyes
Slowly it will rise
When the water is green
And there's no one to be seen
No one to be seen

Down in the deep
It's waiting for me
And here I am
Not knowing what to do
It must be slowly
That my mind is going crazy
When the water is green
And there's no one to be seen
No one to be seen

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Feter said 2141 days ago (October 21st, 2008)
Down in the Deep
Great work my friend ...very cool arrangment ..
good rockin ..interesting lyircs ye ...nice lead
line ..thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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