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This is a song about fear...
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| PentaRay said 1674 days ago (October 21st, 2008) | |
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Lyrics Thanks for your compliments! In an earlier version of the song I had the polyrhythmic part going on throughout the whole song. That turned out te be too much, so I cut it down a bit. The lyrics are below. As I am not an english native speaker, I welcome any comments on my lyrics. ---- Down in the Deep Lyrics & music by Penta Ray Down in the deep It's waiting for me A shade of something With no name That's why I told you I'm afraid to go out swimming When the water is green And there's no one to be seen No one to be seen Down in the deep I know it's waiting Massive in it's presence Without shape It follows me with it's eyes Slowly it will rise When the water is green And there's no one to be seen No one to be seen Down in the deep It's waiting for me And here I am Not knowing what to do It must be slowly That my mind is going crazy When the water is green And there's no one to be seen No one to be seen ----- Check out my latest song called Just You Wait 'till I Am Sober (LIOLI#09)
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| Feter said 1674 days ago (October 21st, 2008) | |
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Down in the Deep Great work my friend ...very cool arrangment .. good rockin ..interesting lyircs ye ...nice lead line ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it
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I like that chord progression, the polyrhythmic theme, and the guitar sounds. Nice work with the vocal effects, too. Please publish your lyrics. They sound interesting.