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MetaFlow


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ElPeruano

 Genre: Hip Hop-Rap

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Description
My first beat which utilizes Apple Loops. Still no midi-keyboard, so im looking for beat possibilities elsewhere. First take on vocals. leave some comments and criticisms please!

Pic is: False Mirror by Rene Magritte 1928
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Lyrics
Metaflow

Verse 1:

If poetry were sand id build sandbags and castles
I flow like hourglasses to the timing of the samples
I’m stringing thoughts together like symphony
Easy to label, but hard to grasp like infiniti
I’m into these similes but I am a metaphor
Lyrically spitting these rhymes with the eyes of a predator
I got more cuts than a raptor
Plus I got a sharp tongue, put my favorite razor to these rappers
I’m only human I’ll admit to having vices
Mostly in the form of literary devices
The nicest, but not the nicest
I write this in the likeness of my own mind
Build a mirror with my own rhymes
And so they ask me “what do you see?”
All I see is a sea of words that are poems to me
Wash in with the tides caused by gravity
Cuz life can get heavy

Chorus (2X):

Trying to make sense of what I sense
get incensed by the senselessness
sensitivity to the sounds of the sentences
superfluous surface over my eyes like a sedative
still sleeping, surreal sound seeping into my rhetoric

Verse 2:

I speak in tongues I’m an abstract poet
My meaning runs like a faucet flowing
Of my mind unwind as I try to find mine
My place in space in time
Instead I find adjacent rhymes
That touch purpose but do not define or clarify
I speak the truth as I see it but eyes lie
And you’s use words that confuse
And we are humans infused with questions
The question is who’s got the answers?
And do the answers really matter?
And if they matter can we make this world a better place?
And so I face the very meaning that I create
And in this place called my mind I try to innovate
So that I make a world within to trace
The traces of something (of something, of something)
Of something more than nothing (than nothing)
Of something more than nothing.

Chorus (2X):

Trying to make sense of what I sense
get incensed by the senselessness
sensitivity to the sounds of the sentences
superfluous surface over my eyes like a sedative
still sleeping, surreal sound seeping into my rhetoric

Song Stats
Hits: 422
Comments: 10
Fans: 5
Plays: 63
Downloads: 0
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Oct 31, 2008 - 06:01:57 PM
Last Updated: Oct 31, 2008 - 06:01:57 PM Last Played: Nov 03, 2009 - 12:56:48 AM
Song License
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Hardware:
MacBook. M-Audio USB Fasttrack AI. ART TUBE PRE, Behringer XM8500.
Software:
GB3
Comments
Enrique Gil said 391 days ago (November 1st, 2008)
Hello there!
pretty interesting rap you sing here! Very cool!
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ElPeruano said 389 days ago (November 2nd, 2008)
:)
thanks man
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Diviner said 391 days ago (November 1st, 2008)
Very nice
Really like the music, its lovely and relaxing which is quite a odds with thos tongue twisting lyrics you have there. You rap those words really well and they move with the music like water over a smooth surface. Nice one, really enjoyed. Shame no download.
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ElPeruano said 389 days ago (November 2nd, 2008)
thanks you
its always a pleasure to hear your kind feedback!
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Konscious said 390 days ago (November 1st, 2008)
Long time
no see... diggin the song, the strings in the background are overly used or so I heard when I used them for one of my first songs, but i love the sound of them regardless. Great lyrics of course, nice word play as well. It's coming along nicely...
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ElPeruano said 389 days ago (November 2nd, 2008)
thanks konsciouss
yea I was just using whatever I could and apple loops is what I got right now. thanks for stoppin byyyy.
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PrototypeEightyOne said 385 days ago (November 6th, 2008)
yo
If poetry were sand id build sandbags and castles
I flow like hourglasses to the timing of the samples
I%u2019m stringing thoughts together like symphony
Easy to label, but hard to grasp like infiniti
I%u2019m into these similes but I am a metaphor
Lyrically spitting these rhymes with the eyes of a predator
I got more cuts than a raptor
Plus I got a sharp tongue, put my favorite razor to these rappers



that was sick. flow was hot and the wordplay, especially on the last line i mentioned sounded dope.

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ElPeruano said 385 days ago (November 7th, 2008)
thanks man!
i definitely put some time into the lyrics so Im glad you took note. much love.
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SmokeyVW said 367 days ago (November 24th, 2008)
sick
i'm really getting into this one.

good stuff!

thanks


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ElPeruano said 367 days ago (November 25th, 2008)
thanks smokey!
much love for the kind feedback! I think I'm getting closer to the sound that I want to achieve. samples is definitely the way I want to go. thanks again!
Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)
musicmitigation said 354 days ago (December 8th, 2008)
really enjoyed it
this is a nice find. Good lyrics, and you set the mood really well. Nice chorus man, works on so many levels at the same time, its a trip. I can really see your style in this one.
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ElPeruano said 352 days ago (December 9th, 2008)
thank you
thanks for the feedback! i think this is one of my best works. I really appreciate it man!
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Dj French Toast said 325 days ago (January 5th, 2009)
Fat
Kid ! This is another bad ass poem and sweet flow . I can dig !
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ElPeruano said 323 days ago (January 7th, 2009)
thanks DJ
French. i peeped Lost in Space and it as killer man. thanks for peepin all the new tracks!
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Sir Bass said 228 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
beat
I like the why made that beat with GB loops very smooth. Good lyrics too.
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Clambake said 153 days ago (June 26th, 2009)
Excellent
alliteration. Those esses in the chorus are so cool. This is the kind of beat poetry I love. Please keep it up ElPeruano.
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I'm a 20 year old college student that loves music but never seems to have the time to do it justice. I dont really know what I really want out of life yet. Musical experience is fairly limited. I played piano since I was five off and on. I quit in h... [see more]

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