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Who Could See


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chronologic

 Genre: Acoustic

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Another installment from "Contagion". I wrote this song in 1998 after something that happened one morning in a college classroom. There was an "uncomfortable moment" involving myself and an "old friend" I guess you could say.

I actually put up a photo this time, which is a picture of the trusty 424, complete with the actual tape that contains this version of Who Could See inserted. This device stopped working about four years ago. Something is wrong with the drive and I haven't had time to really look at it. One thing I used to do religiously before every serious recording session was demag the tape heads. I also cleaned them fairly often to remove residue. Basically I did everything possible to keep this little box humming and recording as high quality as was possible, considering what it is. It served me for a few years under this TLC. Though the output of these efforts was far from perfect, it's very real. And I am happy with what I did, for what that's worth. I'm also pleased that as I retrospect my doings I can see progress. This is a great thing to see all around me in myself and others I work with and know.

I don't tend to think of this song as much but I decided to post it. It's simple and straightforward, not as texturally deep or woven as some of my other efforts. But maybe there's charm in simplicity as well.

Thanks for your time. And Merry Christmas to all.
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Lyrics

i came early
was forced to look upon her face
it's too much for me to behold anymore
she moved slowly and chose a place apart from me
it's too much for me to control anymore
we ran to the comfort of silence
'til even that's too much to bear

why do i do these things?
clutching the tattered parts of dreams
wrestle with fate you'll feel his cold hand
who of all here is fit to burn
who could see?

life is lonely
never had it anyway
there’s just too much to ask anymore
tell another story
running’s what i'm good at now
it's hard to see what's really me anymore
running on to the comfort of silence
'till even that's too much to bear



Song Stats
Hits: 436
Comments: 13
Fans: 4
Plays: 41
Downloads: 39
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Dec 20, 2008 - 01:55:01 PM
Last Updated: Dec 20, 2008 - 01:55:01 PM Last Played: Jan 26, 2010 - 01:32:28 AM
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Hardware:
Tascam 424, Applause acoustic guitar, Yamaha bass, human voice
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Comments
davisamerica said 451 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
man
this is nice ... BTW really dig all your forum postings
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chronologic said 449 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
thanks
Hope to see you around some more. Been checking out your work also. There's so much goodness to find, which is good... but bad! It's hard to imagine that kind of problem.
Check out my latest song called Walk with You
Feter said 451 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
Who Could See
Man ....this is authnetic ..powerful ..great structure and sung so well ...
I m enjoyin this kinda rockin ...nice mixing and production ..thnx alot
for sharin !!!!
chronologic said 449 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
Feter
c'mon we both know the mixin' and producin' was a wee bit short of top notch ;) But thanks very much for dropping in. I hope as time goes on I get to know you more.
Check out my latest song called Walk with You
lengold said 450 days ago (December 21st, 2008)
There most
certainly is charm in its simplicity. A really lovely song - great vocal.
Cheers
Len


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chronologic said 449 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
Thanks Len
I'm glad you dropped by. Happy Holiday to you!
Check out my latest song called Walk with You
TERRAPLANE said 445 days ago (December 26th, 2008)
Enjoy
The good vocals & guitar sound,, great meld ,,,, Thanks for the DL!
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kassia said 385 days ago (February 24th, 2009)
hmmm
sorry i missed this when you posted it. love the harmonies in this and although the recording is a little rough, your excellent song writing really shows through. i'm really falling in love with your voice - rough and full of emotion. i can hear some strings on this one, maybe some piano, percussion. really great song. man, you're good.
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chronologic said 382 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
mee too
I'm sorry you missed it too!!! It would be great to hear what you hear. I can't place any strings in my head, I just made the attempt! But I know that whatever you're thinking would be great, based on all your solo and collab work. Thanks for the compliment on the singing. I did get one offer for marriage once after singing at a talent show, so you'll have to get in line!!! Just kidding of course. But that actually did happen. I'm sure the girl who said that was not serious but still it's nice to hear that kind of feedback!!!! I'm married now and I don't think my voice did me any good when it counted. Thank goodness! I'd hate to get a cold and lose everything!! :). Thanks for stopping by Shay.
Check out my latest song called Walk with You
Char said 357 days ago (March 24th, 2009)
Is this
static and delay intentional? It will take some getting used to. You are a fine singer and an exceptional writer. Thanks.
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chronologic said 356 days ago (March 25th, 2009)
static and delay
Well, I am not sure, probably not. Maybe you're hearing something gone wrong in the mp3 or the website player. Some people say sometimes the playback is bad and the quicktime (bottom/old) player works when the flash player (top/new one) doesn't.

You could try that if you have the time, or you could download the song and listen to it on your own player. I am sorry if it's technical crap that got in the way of you hearing a good thing. I'd pay you back for your time!

If not... well I guess it's just the song. There is some "static" from the tape hiss. And depending on how good your ears are you may hear some scarring from a digital noise reduction. At the time of recording this I was doing my best to compensate for the equipment (cheap 4-track) and make it sound something like the commercial recordings I had, and there is a very slight distortion effect that you can hear if you're sensitive. Of course the mp3 format also adds a tiny bit of that. I don't think there is a ton of delay just a warm/thick reverb.

Really I think it's overall fairly clear and not bad at all for a 4-track tape recorder. I'd really appreciate if you could give it another listen and just let me know if you think it was just a problem with the site player. I do hope so. But it is a "raw" sound for sure.
Check out my latest song called Walk with You
Char said 323 days ago (April 27th, 2009)
Yes, it is
perfect on my computer. And I was right: you wrote and sang a wonderful song. My thanks.
Check out my latest song called Intangible Bud mix
chronologic said 318 days ago (May 3rd, 2009)
thanks for coming back!
I really appreciate it and I'm glad it was better!
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