Restless (w davisamerica)

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Restless is a poem that I wrote in July of 2008. I posted it on my Yahoo Answers page. In the last week, davisamerica asked if I'd read some poetry over a soundscape he put together. I thought I screwed up, not really knowing how to place words. Today, he sent me his "tinker" as Alannah calls the artistic tweaking. You should hear a stormy night and a rather "pissed" woman having a dialogue with herself, as she roams from room to room.
davisamerica is the producer. I only wrote the thing and spoke it. Thanks, Jack!

davisamerica : " I had the most wonderful experience getting to see Char's talent during a project we were both on this summer. Over the months she has shared some of her poetry and I have always thought I would like to do the backing music to one of her works. "Restless Night" painted a great story in my head when I first heard it and Char was gracious enough to let me play along. We did some experimentation in that we wanted to create the image of moving about in an apartment, watching it rain and having this "internal" conversation. I hope the vocal effects do not offend as they are intentional. ... and I hope you enjoy this as much as I do. Thanks Char ! "

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Restless

So here I am, again.
Sleep-walking through one more restless night.
Should I go to my bed,
Though I can't stop my nightmarish fright?
>>>
It just spills over now,
Through the agonizing, pointless days.
Do I have to allow
Life lived through a veil of choking haze?
>>>
It doesn't have to be like this.
I don't want the endless pain.
Oh, yet another day I spend,
With another sad refrain.
>>>
Oh still, I walk on shards of glass,
And I cling with claw-like hands.
I cry and cry a thousand tears.
Is there one who understands?
>>>
Is there one?
Let there be, at least, just one.
Is there one?
Is there one?

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Hits: 1317
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Fans: 32
Plays: 315
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Uploaded: Feb 02, 2009 - 03:36:01 PM
Last Updated: Feb 02, 2009 - 10:34:40 PM Last Played: Nov 26, 2009 - 12:52:50 PM

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Comments

awigze	awigze said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	like so far I like the direction you are going in so far - seems like there are many interpretations that can be embarked upon. Now that you have heard the music how are you thinking about intonation and all that? Check out my latest song called We got to Jive in Blues by (Feter)

Char

Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)

I only did it once.
I think I should go for a British accent, next. :) I would have done more readings where I wasn't hesitant, because I didn't know what I was doing, but I got the impression that davisamerica liked it as it was. I was listening to his music when I spoke the poem. As for the voice, unfortunately, that's me. I am getting used to things getting done, though imperfect. Thank you, awigze.

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Feter	Feter said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Restless Awesome ...Char this is a very nice poem ...Jack is a cool man really made a very nice sound bed ...thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

Char	Char said 245 days ago (March 26th, 2009)
	Oh, thanks so much for saying it was good. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

TheReverendAG	TheReverendAG said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	wait what This is creepy. The lyrics and the music. The whole thing is kind of like what happens if you a take whole box of benadryl. Check out my latest song called Can't Stand it

Char

Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)

If I had a smokier or throaty voice
it could be macabre. Instead, I have this "little girl" voice. You would die if you took benadryl and didn't puke it up, first. Insomnia is a real consequence of stress and frustration. I know.
The poem is about not being able to find rest. You want to hear something really creepy....?
You should hear me sing the thing. Thanks for stopping in, Rev. :)

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 296 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	:-] made him twitch .... right then :-] Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

TheReverendAG	TheReverendAG said 289 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
	Taking a whole box of benadryl will not kill you It's just incredibly terrifying. Don't ask me how I know this. Check out my latest song called Can't Stand it

davisamerica	davisamerica said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	right then you are a pleasure to work with .... thanks ! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	As are you. It's just "get'er done!" And, voila! Something is created. Very cool. My thanks. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Outtaorbit	Outtaorbit said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	nicely done really.... Check out my latest song called Sea Shell Blues and Alannah

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	I am glad you came by and appreciate the support. Thanks. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	insomnia this is a great piece insomnia is something i know... too well although this also brings in elements of depression (another thing I know a little) i was glad to hear a hint of hope in the closing lines - it rounds out the piece and makes it whole thanks Check out my latest song called One For Me

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Ah, yes. Insomnia: Vicious cycle and bottomless pit. People must sleep. Synapses fry. Thank you, Smokey. Davisamerica wanted to add atmosphere and I think that it was appropriate. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

abfkingsport	abfkingsport said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	ABFkingsport As I've said before you have a great singing voice and an excellent speaking voice, take it from a broadcaster/actor. I like it. Davis did some wild sounds here and your voice with it at times reminds me of the poetry of Jim Morrison and the sounds of the Doors. very nice. Anthony Check out my latest song called Gold Digger

davisamerica	davisamerica said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	lol cool and thanks Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Gracious of you. Um, do I know who to pick as a playmate on this playground or what? I am doing things I would never have done. There is an entertainer, an actress buried within. She is having the time of her life. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

awigze	awigze said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Wow !!!! I got firsties... I beat Feter... LOL Check out my latest song called We got to Jive in Blues by (Feter)

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Feter is off a bit. Not superhuman, you know. Lucky you. You keep hanging with the less popular kids and it will happen more often. Thanks, again. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Alannah	Alannah said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Here a tinker .... .. there a tinker .. everywhere a tinker tinker ... this is great ! Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit

Char	Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)
	Thank you. They are luring me to the dark side. So, move over. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

drakonis

drakonis said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)

Woohoo, there she goes!
Good to see your song page filling up with your works! Overall, this is very nicely put together, both of you! Char, your poem is great. I would only suggest putting a little more drama into the reading, but your voice was clear and thoughtful here. Jack, your hesitant music backing seemed perfect for this, well done!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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Char

Char said 297 days ago (February 2nd, 2009)

I know.
I certainly would have done more readings. I think I could do it better. But it was an honest first and only reading in an unfamiliar circumstance. Reading to music compares to singing to music. The trade off is that neat background that makes it more interesting.
Two isn't exactly filling up. Without Daniel, Mike, Jack, ic42, Ez, Moses and you..I would have nothing. Lucky, lucky me.

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LunaTrick	LunaTrick said 297 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	The suddenly prolific Char strikes again.. Nicely done here... great backing track from Jack... really fine ambience and thoughtful words! Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)

Char	Char said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	Thanks, Daniel. Davisamerica liked it. I can't refuse him anything. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Skean	Skean said 297 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	Hove cool is this Im so happy for you... I know you're so good at writhe poem, and its way too cool with this musical think around them... More more please. Scary but I can take it. Much love from Sweden. --- Kenta Check out my latest song called Let's Go Trippy

Char	Char said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	I am open to putting poems on anything, Skean. It doesn't have to be me performing it. You have always been very dear. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Bob Rodgers	Bob Rodgers said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	A wonderful poem and a great reading from you Char, this sounds so good! Jack's backing is great and it creates the perfect ambience and atmosphere to this piece. Bob Check out my latest song called In My Mind

Char	Char said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	You will never know how very much I appreciate your taking time to listen. I've got a million of these poems. It is nice to share them, even if they are creepy. I think I can do better and hopefully, I will. Thank you.:) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

sonnyjim	sonnyjim said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	Wow This is pretty amazing: I find myself on edge listening for the (really exquisite) changes in the music, and then suddenly following Char into one ear or another..... Char's delivery is very good, and the occasional echo on her track is tastefully applied. Very successful piece and a definite download. Thank you! Check out my latest song called LIOLI 9 (Interlude)

Char	Char said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	This was a first for me. As with anything, I'll get better at fitting what I do to the soundbed. No one has as much practice at "not knowing what she's doing" as I do. Fortunately, davisamerica has a clue. It's all him. Thank you so much for stopping by. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

algabatz	algabatz said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	Nice... ...but too arty for me. I can't help comparing to the Still she weeps ballad, one of my favourites at Macjams. Can You belive that voice. If You could bottle that and sell... wait, You can! It'sa a nice poem but the music doesn't move me like the words. Sorry... /Al Check out my latest song called Hunting down luck

Char	Char said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)
	That was an experiment. I am trying to learn. That's okay. I sang this thing, too. You should hear that! Or, not! Thank you very much for coming by and commenting. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

MarkHolbrook

MarkHolbrook said 296 days ago (February 3rd, 2009)

So sorry
So late on the comment here. I did a FAMO (the Fave and Move On) move and promised myself I'd get back for a comment and then the boss lowered the boom and made me endure a 5 and 1/2 hour document review meeting... I wanted to carve my skull out with a butter knife near the end of that!!!

Alas tomorrow will be yet another busy day but I promised myself to come listen to something posted by probably two of my favorite MacJammers! Char and Jack...

This had me on edge during the entire listen my friends and I mean that good... It keeps you there... I mean you can't turn this off. When I went to hit the browser back button I got a little warning shock to listen all the way through! (just kidding).

Excellent you too! Excellent!

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Char

Char said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)

Nothing to apologize for.
Nothing Lamo about a Famo. I am happy that there is some interest. It is a good thing davisamerica knows what he is doing. I can only guess at what it takes to produce such as this. Sorry about the shock. I hate to bring people down. But commiseration is nice. Mark, you are such a nice guy. Thank you.

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TennesseeVic	TennesseeVic said 296 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	The bleakness of life You guys have put together the perfect blend of poetry and motion, eh, music. This is really good. Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)

Char	Char said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	The definition of music, that covers a lot of territory. I have been learning a lot. I'm so happy you guys made a place for me at your table. Davisamerica built this and I'm glad he did. Thank you. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

magnatone	magnatone said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	Restless sorry i got to this late - somehow i totally missed that it was even up, and finally got clued in about it this morning. This is wonderful collaborative work you guys - the soundscape is perfect, and Char, your reading of your terrific poem is spot on. Congratulations to you both! Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown

Char	Char said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	With Jack, it is best to try to be a one-take wonder, because he takes the ball and runs with it. I thought I was going to get a critique and some direction but, no... he put it all together, As I said, before, "get 'er done!" Thank you, Karen for the nice words. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

kristyjo

kristyjo said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)

Wow-
Char's got a post up!
This is cool. I like this kind of spoken poetry with background. You do it well. Actually, I'm thinking it sounds like so many of us, who go through the sleepless night thing, but then are back at our jobs the next day, acting professional and normal. I'm not sure that's the effect you were going for, but that's what I read into it.

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Char

Char said 294 days ago (February 5th, 2009)

In a way
I am glad you can relate, though I would never wish insomnia on anyone. I think stress puts your brain in a state of anxiety and so the rudimentary part of the brain keeps you awake. And yes, you know you are at a disadvantage but you still try to function, because you must. Exactly right, Kristyjo. It is good to know you can appreciate what davisamerica did with his music. Thank you.:)

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dajama

dajama said 295 days ago (February 4th, 2009)

Excellent
This is great. I think your delivery of the lines works very well with the musical background - not affected or "forced", and not twisted to achieve some effect, rather spoken, recited as it should sound, and then the music wraps itself around the words. Wonderful. The poem is really good, evocative of that dark, bewildering state of sleeplessness (or at least to me) and nicely complemented by the sonic surround. Jack, your music here is perfect. You guys are a great combo. Thanks for sharing this with us. Kudos all round. Peace.

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Char	Char said 294 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
	What a supportive comment. That makes me feel better in my evaluation of my part. I have no idea how davisamerica does what he does. I am grateful that he wanted to do this piece with me. Thank you so very much. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 294 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
	dajama.... David got it right from the production view of this .... we could have re recorded your performance but i thought it was honest ... thanks for the nod David Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 293 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
	Okay, It was my first time trying something like that. I've got tons of poems. It is a gift to be able to share with such nice people. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

kassia	kassia said 293 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
	one who understands i think jack understood perfectly. absolutely stunning meld of poetry and ambient sound. char your delivery is real and unaffected and sitting perfectly in the middle of jack's swirling soundbed. i love this. do more! Check out my latest song called Deep Majesty

Char	Char said 292 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
	Shay, so very nice of you. Jack does know what he is doing. I hate the way I sound. I guess I'll get used to it, eventually. Yes, but I have to get less creepy and depressing. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

KellyMarkSmith	KellyMarkSmith said 292 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
	Very Artistic Nice.... I really did like it, it was something that I normally don't listen to and yet it pulled me in.. Thanks KMS Check out my latest song called Just Tell Me To Stay

Char	Char said 292 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
	As long as There is something of value, I would like to do more of all of it. This is fun, even if I am not sure of myself. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

yrp	yrp said 292 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
	this is scary... it´s raining over here and... Better turn off (the rain) Check out my latest song called Light (with onesweetworld)

Char	Char said 292 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
	I'm sorry, I don't think we meant to scare anyone. And I sure hope this doesn't cause storms wherever it's played. Thank you listening. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

mikkinylund

mikkinylund said 289 days ago (February 10th, 2009)

Char
This to me is a mix of Laurie Anderson and William S. Borroughs, still its your words and your story of course. In regards to reading poetry (which I've did quite a bit when I where young), I think it has to be a caption of the moment, which in many ways still is the philosophy of my music development as well (although not 100% true, but, I like to lie). I actually liked this quite a bit, mainly because it sounds honest. I take anything honest upon anything polished any day (the liar said, he, he). It is sad, just like life is at times. To me you captured a personal moment. And you did it with passion. P.S. Also reminds me Lydia Lunch a bit.

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Char	Char said 288 days ago (February 11th, 2009)
	So nice of you. Just one try. I am thinking I need to get a life and not be creepy and depressing. In stages, I'll get there. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

_nderscore	_nderscore said 289 days ago (February 11th, 2009)
	nice. it must be interesting creating a poem meant to be read & giving it another dimension with sound. i wonder how this will affect your writing in the future. it's always great to hear poetry as its meant to be read/performed. keep them coming.. Check out my latest song called glyd

Char	Char said 288 days ago (February 11th, 2009)
	Hmm, certainly, having some music or sound surrounding a reading gives it more drama. I've written poetry my entire life. It kept me sane. I have now been allowed to write lyrics for myself and others and that is a lot of fun. It is better with the soundscape. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

tokai	tokai said 288 days ago (February 11th, 2009)
	Congrates on this collab, thought provoking and well written lyrics, i like it. In a storm too, perfect backdrop for your spoken part. Cheers Check out my latest song called maizuru/Bud/Char

Char	Char said 288 days ago (February 11th, 2009)
	This was davisamerica's idea. Anytime he wants to do this again, I am willing to give it a go. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 287 days ago (February 12th, 2009)
	So here I am, again. i had to listen again thank you Check out my latest song called One For Me

Char	Char said 287 days ago (February 12th, 2009)
	Aw, thanks, Smokey, I am so glad you can appreciate what davisamerica created here. Sleep well. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Doug Somers	Doug Somers said 285 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
	Very Very Cool Collab This is most effective as the spoken works weave with the soundstage, creating for me a place of introspection amidst a space of moving wonder and shapes of emotion. Well crafted folks! Be well, Doug Check out my latest song called Desiree (MJ Space Race 2009)

Char	Char said 285 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
	Nice of you, Doug for stopping in. Davisamerica was excited about doing this. Thank you very much. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Muse Ritual	Muse Ritual said 282 days ago (February 17th, 2009)
	I love it. So unrushed and well read, as I guess should be expected. This is really special I love it Char, dont stop seeking out collab work ever its good on you :) Check out my latest song called Rage3 Lih Re-Mix

Char	Char said 281 days ago (February 19th, 2009)
	Hmm, nice of you to say so. I've got poetry up the ying yang. But, no music. I've been able to write to fit. It has been pointed out that I am creepy and depressing. I'll have to work on that. Thank you for coming by. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

thetiler

thetiler said 280 days ago (February 19th, 2009)

There
sure is a need to have more understanding of what goes on in the brain when sleeping and waking up. It may be one of the most important things to learn in this life. People are very complex, I for one need more understanding and I think it is very important to have more music, wisdom and words on this subject. Thanks for setting a path for this endeavor!
Thanks for sharing your song !

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Char

Char said 280 days ago (February 19th, 2009)

When you don't sleep
you lose the ability to do even simple math, engage in simple eye-hand co-ordination and you hurt all over as if you have the flu. Sleep repairs and renews everything. It is necessary. But, your body can refuse to sleep, regardless of how fatigued, as long as a strong enough stressor is active, such as anxiety or fear. I always was a night person and it was too easy to stay up to continue some activity.
Do that too many times and you forget how to lie down and sleep.
Thank you for appreciating the experience mirrored in this work. :)

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thoddi

thoddi said 280 days ago (February 20th, 2009)

exhausting nights
Hope this isn't the reality for you Char... Restless nights are pretty exhausting. There's probably as many reasons as there as people experiencing it... Having peace of mind is vital I guess. Being aware and true to ourselves about who we are and what we love comes to me as a guideline for achieving this. Isn't that just one of the things to wish for... a quiet night, and a good nights sleep... Very natural to many, and we don't give it much though if we have it. But when we don't... it can ruin the day.

The music and spoken words are like meant to each other. Very well performed by both parts:)

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Char	Char said 279 days ago (February 20th, 2009)
	The danger for me is pushing past a bedtime too many times and inviting insomnia in. Yes, you have to be aware of your angels and your demons. Thanks so much for listening. I think I might do this again. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Dj French Toast

Dj French Toast said 279 days ago (February 20th, 2009)

A little Dark :)
To my ears this poem is not of saddness or torture in living but of someone who is seekin other enlightened souls but only finding the normal zombies the selfish self centered robots . Its a burden to become conscience . To see the world through compassion and not through the Haze . Cool thought provoking work char :)

Toast

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Char	Char said 279 days ago (February 20th, 2009)
	Hello, Dj French Toast, You understand the meaning behind my words. I am happy that you could relate. We only need to find kindred souls that can offer solace and peace. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 270 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Dear Lady .... I am still so pleased you allowed me in on this .... :-] Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 269 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	You have a standing invitation. I'll never forget how you have supported me. Thank you. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

maxjsl37	maxjsl37 said 257 days ago (March 14th, 2009)
	Amazing This is really interesting. Great job! Check out my latest song called National Bastard

Char	Char said 256 days ago (March 15th, 2009)
	So nice to have someone stop in and listen. And, even nicer to hear that you liked it. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Bowman	Bowman said 252 days ago (March 19th, 2009)
	Strangely moving Char. I like your honest non-theatrical delivery. It suites the work very well. And the swirling mesmerizing background soundscape from Jack is perfect. Excellent work from both of you. Best, Charlie Check out my latest song called The Orion Express - MJ Space Race 2009 by Bowman

Char	Char said 252 days ago (March 19th, 2009)
	It is a good thing that it appeals to many. I only read it once to see if I was putting the words in the right places. Jack liked it and so, it was finished. I imagine that I could have screwed it up. Less is enough, sometimes. Jack deserves all the credit. Thank you for coming by. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Calchas	Calchas said 250 days ago (March 21st, 2009)
	Bravo! Nice reading Char. Intriguing soundscape Jack. Melancholy musings... Be well friends! Check out my latest song called It's Not The Same

Char	Char said 250 days ago (March 21st, 2009)
	I hope you aren't overdoing and then ending up with MJers ear and arthritic fingers. Thank you for including this listen in your marathon. Sweet of you. I appreciate your time and support very much. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Calchas	Calchas said 248 days ago (March 24th, 2009)
	Hah! Definitely my pleasure Char! Check out my latest song called It's Not The Same

Kicbal	Kicbal said 248 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	This is cool Quirky and great. Actually think that your reading of your work is really cool and your voice works well with the excellent sounds that are happening all around. Great collab! Check out my latest song called Falling Stars Forgotten

Char	Char said 248 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	That's so nice. Thank you for giving it a listen. Great thundering night sounds by Jack. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Andy-bm	Andy-bm said 248 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	This is so cool I find it hypnotic. Both of you guys did a great job. I hope you get some rest soon. //Andy

Char	Char said 248 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	I eliminated a major stressor a while back. I go to bed and most times, I sleep. I still tend to being a night person. I have to watch the "staying up all night" behavior. Davisamerica wanted to do this. It was his vision. I have tons of crappy poetry lying around. Thank you for listening and liking it. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

dirigent	dirigent said 245 days ago (March 27th, 2009)
	Thrilling What a wonderful arrangement - love the lyrics. An amazing treat!! Check out my latest song called Autumn

Char	Char said 244 days ago (March 27th, 2009)
	Gee, you came to two of my performances. I am very happy that you liked what davisamerica and I did here. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

saymme	saymme said 244 days ago (March 27th, 2009)
	Nice ! Very good hearing this w You & DA : ) o yes.. those times in life r horrible but usually open the door to something better ! Inspiring seeing You posting Char I enjoyed this alot , Jack fits the music so well with Your speaking cool ! thx

Char	Char said 244 days ago (March 28th, 2009)
	What a sweetheart! It is nice to know that you liked it. I agree. It is a good meld. Jack can work miracles. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

lengold	lengold said 231 days ago (April 10th, 2009)
	This is wonderful - sorry it took me so long to find it, won't happen again. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

Char	Char said 230 days ago (April 11th, 2009)
	No need to apologize. I am so happy you made some time to listen. This was davisamerica's idea. I love the music he put together. I already had the poem. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Roxylee	Roxylee said 230 days ago (April 11th, 2009)
	Very effective Jack is a genius at composing, and I'm glad he asked you to do a spoken word piece over it. You certainly did it justice. Wow... Check out my latest song called Sweet Grace

Char	Char said 199 days ago (May 11th, 2009)
	Thank you so much, Roxy for coming by and for the encouragement. That was new for me. Jack is very talented. Thanks. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Schello	Schello said 193 days ago (May 18th, 2009)
	awww could to be a tune starting a CD...mumble!..FANTASTIK Check out my latest song called Snozz'en (Cronik Mix)

Char	Char said 192 days ago (May 18th, 2009)
	Ah, è stato qualcosa di diverso. Poveri poesia su insonnia. Grazie. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Giusepppe	Giusepppe said 182 days ago (May 28th, 2009)
	Surrounding atmosphere Very good the use of the Rhodes and the surrounding atmosphere, has some dye of Vangelis with Blade runner, brilliant Check out my latest song called Feeling Sweet

Char	Char said 182 days ago (May 29th, 2009)
	Ah, yes the rain. All Davisamerica's doing. I only read a poem. One shot while not certain how to go about it. Glad it turned out sounding all right. Thank you :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

PaulaMunk	PaulaMunk said 24 days ago (November 2nd, 2009)
	This sounds better every time I listen to it. Davisamerica is cool. Thanks. Check out my latest song called The Conqueror Worm

guitarfreak	guitarfreak said 20 days ago (November 6th, 2009)
	Nice, Creepy, But niiice :] It can be interpreted many ways. Great job, I liked it, Happy Birthday, Char Smiiiiile, :] - Aemyn Check out my latest song called F.L.O.A.S.I.

Char	Char said 20 days ago (November 6th, 2009)
	Yes, I am very creepy and very nice. What did you do? You listened to all of them? Wow! How sweet. Thank you. :) Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

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Name: Charlene Kankiewicz

I used to be a lot of things that I'm not, any longer. I was an artist, art teacher and an occasional poet who sang in a choir. After a time being a listener to all this treasure of music and song I got hooked into performing, myself. I have found th... [see more]

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