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Song written for someone I couldn't stop thinking about ... messed around with different effects on the vocals, drums and synths. I tried to be a little bit original with the constant motion of most prominent synth over the piano during the verses. It still ended up sounding a little more cliche than I wanted... let me know if you have any ideas for how to make a love song like this more unique as far as orchestration.
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Lyrics
Waiting for the phone to ring
I'm trying again, today to pretend
That I'm moving on
I laugh at myself and think
All of the time I was trying to get you off my mind
You were right here in the center of my thoughts
Chorus
I try and I try to forget who you were to me
But the harder I fight the more it occurs to me
Each time I deny the truth of this feeling inside
I find, you on my mind... again
I wish you could see me now
If you looked in my eyes
You'd see you've been on my mind
Though I wont admit
I've made up my mind before
I said I know this time for sure
But I can't pretend anymore
Chorus
Still waiting for the phone to ring
If you looked in my eyes
You'd see you've been on my mind
Though I wont admit
I wonder if you'll ever know
I've wished for the chance
To ask you to dance with me nice and slow
And I'd tell you what's on my mind
I'm trying again, today to pretend
That I'm moving on
I laugh at myself and think
All of the time I was trying to get you off my mind
You were right here in the center of my thoughts
Chorus
I try and I try to forget who you were to me
But the harder I fight the more it occurs to me
Each time I deny the truth of this feeling inside
I find, you on my mind... again
I wish you could see me now
If you looked in my eyes
You'd see you've been on my mind
Though I wont admit
I've made up my mind before
I said I know this time for sure
But I can't pretend anymore
Chorus
Still waiting for the phone to ring
If you looked in my eyes
You'd see you've been on my mind
Though I wont admit
I wonder if you'll ever know
I've wished for the chance
To ask you to dance with me nice and slow
And I'd tell you what's on my mind
davisamerica
"hear" a lot of different approaches to this mix but I am mainly just a song writer ... and this tune is a beauty in the rough ... you have created something pretty damn good ... kudos