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Take her back


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hongshan

 Genre: Acoustic Rock
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This is an older song of mine made in 1995. It was originally only acoustic and I added electric guitar later. Once again production is choppy. I apologize for this. I actually like using less with everything in my life and I guess that goes with my recording gear. If someone can give me some idea of a good mic to use with garage band (I would appreciate the advice).
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Lyrics
Take her back words and music by Michael Moras

Hold little child in mother arms,
new born innocence child of today,
teach her well for she dont know what’s to become of her destiny,
tears of joy for life once held,
a soul thats spawned near perfect girl,
life holds pain she should be free,
the womb was fine thats where she should be.

Take her back, take her back dont leave her here,
this place is wrong,
this place is wrong and full of fear,
noone to turn to, noone really knows,
noone to turn to, noone really knows,

As years gone by as time move on,
the innocence gone for she has grown,
people aint what they appear to be,
shrouded and torn by insecurity,
the lessons of life will hold her down,
her wings clipped to the ground,
she cannot escape the ideals of a feminist vicious wheel

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Thats because, the bitch has been made there's no way out,
she's moulded now without a doubt,
striving for power through demeaning ways,
the child within lost in a daze.

chorus

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Comments: 4
Fans: 3
Plays: 26
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Uploaded: Feb 18, 2009 - 06:12:41 AM
Last Updated: Feb 18, 2009 - 03:54:54 PM Last Played: Jul 08, 2009 - 12:11:02 AM
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garage band
Comments
Feter said 281 days ago (February 18th, 2009)
Take her back
Man ,....you got the groove of the 70s ..which blows me away !!!
your songs so solid rockin ..I bet your band is one of the best !!!
you Rock so good ..the right effect ..the right beat ..thats the deal !
more more ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
hongshan said 281 days ago (February 18th, 2009)
Thanks again
This is a very old song of mine Im glad you liked. I don't have a band(in Japan it's too difficult playing originals). If I play live here, it's just 'session' and usually playing beatles songs.

Once again thanks Feter you are a legend
Check out my latest song called Mr Gumby
gerenm said 249 days ago (March 22nd, 2009)
Snowball
This sounds pretty decent -- a couple rough spots as you mention, but probably better than you think.

If you're still looking for a mic, though, people seem to be getting real good results with the Blue Snowball -- it's amazing me, and I've been using the likes of Neumann's and such. It's making me rethink my mic cabinet!
hongshan said 248 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
Ta!
Len,

Cheers mate. Thanks for feedback and advice on the mic. Ill look into the snowball.


Check out my latest song called Mr Gumby
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Hi, I've been playing guitar for around 20 years (originally from Oz but needed a change). Have been living in Japan for around 6 years. Just started to get back into things with music (last few years) playing live houses aound my local area.... [see more]

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