Livin' Lastin' Love

Patriotpizzaman

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This is my second recording at "The Producer" Mike House's studio. Took me alot longer than the last one to get my tracks down right (sorry Mike) but, I think it was worth the wait. I wrote this song for my wife because she said I never wrote her any songs. This is also from my writing session with Bill Evans in 1999.

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Lyrics

I can see it when you look at me oh yeah,
See it in your eyes.
I can feel it when you hold me close oh yeah,
Feel it deep inside.
You walk and talk like you're six foot four oh no,
You're only five foot two.
The way you carry yourself my babe oh yeah,
Gives me my faith in you.

You gotta hold on to your heart,
'Cause I'm comin' for it every way.
I want your totally conventional, Highly unpredictable,
Livin' everlastin' love.

I can hear it when you call my name oh yeah,
You make it sound brand new.
I'd like to shout it from a mountain top oh yeah,
So you can hear it too.
I don't care if you're rich or poor oh no,
Don't mean that much to me.
The simple things in life mean more oh yeah,
Live your life wild and free.

You gotta hold on to your heart,
'Cause I'm comin' for it every way.
I want your always irresistable, Completely unconditional,
Livin' everlastin' love.

You gotta hold on to your heart,
'Cause I'm comin' for it every way.
I want your totally conventional, Highly unpredictable,
Always irresistable, Completely unconditional,
Livin' everlastin' love.

Song Stats

Hits: 1045
Comments: 55
Fans: 23
Plays: 129
Downloads: 43
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Feb 27, 2009 - 12:00:25 AM
Last Updated: Apr 08, 2009 - 11:40:41 PM Last Played: Nov 20, 2009 - 01:08:13 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
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Keywords:

Love (1150), Country (135), Lead guitar (2), Acoustic (588), Electric (87), Rock (1437), Southern rock (11)

Hardware:

Mac mini, Limited Edition first run Les Paul Robot guitar #677, Alvarez acoustic/electric Kurzweil 2600 S, Ibanez Bass.

Software:

Digital Performer 6.0.1

Comments

Feter	Feter said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Livin' Lastin' Love O WOW ..David this is such cool rockin folkie sound so cool ..loved the strummin with the solid drums work ...what a vocal work my friend ... headbangin ....what an honest singin along song ... kudos for the lead !!! thnx alot for sharin such gem !!!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Contributing Artists Lyrics: David Shreiner Music : David Shreiner, Bill Evans,and Mike House Lead & Rhythm guitars : David Shreiner Lead & Backing vocals : David Shreiner Live Drums!, Bass & Keyboards : "The Producer" Mike House Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	As Usual Mike did the engineering mixing & mastering. He rushed this one for me so there are tweaks he'd like to make to this. Maybe he'll give me a remixed version to post later.(fingers crossed) Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

LunaTrick	LunaTrick said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Honestly.... not my kind of music But nicely recorded and produced. Full of attitude... which is what you want! Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)

segiperkasa	segiperkasa said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	This is cool... Really cool stuff... the solo is also really cool..... Check out my latest song called Sepiroth Strings of Fire Symphony

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Thanks Dude. Took a few stabs at it before that popped out. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Mystified	Mystified said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Glad I caught the link posted in chat... No critiques here, I just really enjoyed the listen :) Thank you for posting and sharing your music here! Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth

abfkingsport	abfkingsport said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Oh yeah! Love it. Good feel to it, nice groove. I love petite women, 5'2" yo yo yo. Love em. Great vocals and lyrics, shredding lead awesome. Fav'in it. The King Check out my latest song called Gold Digger

lavalamp	lavalamp said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Hey Great piece of songwriting here. Not as country as a lot of tunes, more on the rock side. Awesome solo. And a GREAT hook. Very good song my friend. Dave Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

magnatone	magnatone said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	love song TERRIFIC song for your wife! love the feel of this, very well put together song - makes ya feel GOOD! Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown

sheilad	sheilad said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Awesome tribute Nothing better than a tune dedicated to the one you love... lucky, lucky woman! Thanks for the d/l... Check out my latest song called Halloween Wandering/PickQuickRecords

Monkaton	Monkaton said 269 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Good Song Very well done ppman. Guitars sound good, very strong vocal and the production was also very tight. Your wife should be very happy with this song. Now for the rest of what you do, that could be a different tune. Good job! Check out my latest song called Darkness of the Night

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	I work hard to make her happy no matter what. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

lengold	lengold said 268 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Another great pro sounding track. i really can imagine this on the radio. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Big thank you That's a fine compliment from an artist of your caliber. Really apreciate you taking the time to check it out. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Sigmund

Sigmund said 268 days ago (February 27th, 2009)

everlastin
cool tune - got my toe tapping to this one. You have done a good job of creating the type of tune that one can grow to like quickly. The melody wastes no time reeling you in, and holds on till the end. The chorus is very catchy - cool lyrics. Good guitar solo, and everything neatly arranged. I also happen to like the doubled vocals in the chorus, as opposed to harmonies - just lends itself to the pop rock feel of the tune. I might suggest you consider adding a little extra something in between the lines of your second verse. Perhaps some cool guitar fills or even some rock organ. Another interesting thing to do would be to add a harmony vocal here as well. You could sing a harmony through the entire verse, or add tasteful harmonies here and there. Your work sounds great without those things - I just here them in my head. Anyway, good job to you guys - thanks for sharing your work here with us!

Check out my latest song called End of a Season

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 268 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	Great suggestions. I'll explore some of those options in my free time. If I come up with something noteworthy I'll give Mike a call to see what he thinks. Thanks for the listen Bro! Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Char	Char said 268 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
	I like the singing, especially singing alone in the chorus for a bit. Wondering how it can be both both conventional and unpredictable... oh, okay, not at the same time. You want her in every way. Good song. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	She's a woman We all know how complex woman are. Her love is good for me(conventional) and she can be alternately demanding and giving (unpredictable). Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

davisamerica	davisamerica said 268 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Time well spent great tune ... lovely lady ... lucky you ! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

mowguy3	mowguy3 said 268 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Fine mix Hats off to all involved. A rich crisp sound. Love the strummin and vocals, right up front. Good job. Be well,Russ Check out my latest song called A Different Shade Of Moonlight

Rocha Malhada	Rocha Malhada said 268 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	great song & vocals David, it's good. I wish the lead was a little louder, but maybe not what you wanted for this genre. Nice package in a C&W song, Kudos . - Harold Check out my latest song called Kanun Oud Rock (LIOLI9)

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Your wish may well happen on the remaster of this track. Mike has some tweaks to the production he'd like to make. I'm going to post the new version as soon as it's done. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Doug Somers	Doug Somers said 268 days ago (February 28th, 2009)
	Nice Tune And whoa - that solo!! Have you thought of laying down a harmony track to put the icing on the cake? It doesn't need it since I think this is full sounding as you recorded it - just curious. Well done! Take care, Doug Check out my latest song called Desiree (MJ Space Race 2009)

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Thanks Brother Love your evil laser! Anyone who thinks that's a weird thing to say should check out Doug's songs. He has some great stuff up. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 267 days ago (March 1st, 2009)
	I love the guitar sound in this! Excellent. Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 265 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Love that cat Bro!! Thanks for the comment about the guitar sound. It was something I was trying to get right and Amplitude had the right tool for the job. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Skean	Skean said 267 days ago (March 1st, 2009)
	Great stuff If I was half that good to playing guitar I should be very happy. I love this song and I'm so thankful that you share it, download it… Cheers Check out my latest song called Let's Go Trippy

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 266 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	You're too kind I wish I was half as good as you say I am. Thanks for downloading this one. We're currently working on a new mix and possibly a few additions to the soundscape on it as well. The new one will be squeaky clean! Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Alannah	Alannah said 267 days ago (March 1st, 2009)
	Top notch production ..... ... I forgot I was at Macjams here for a moment .... your wife must be luvvin this ! Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 266 days ago (March 2nd, 2009)
	Thanks for the listen I really appreciate you taking the time to checkout my work here. Means alot to me. Thanks again for the great things you have contributed to the site as well. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 264 days ago (March 3rd, 2009)
	very nicely done great song and excellent conviction in delivery on your's and Mike's parts all good! Check out my latest song called November

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 264 days ago (March 3rd, 2009)
	Thanks Vic I know you've heard it before but, it's really nice to hear from someone who's been here for as long as you have and is as productive a member of this community as you are. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

awigze	awigze said 264 days ago (March 4th, 2009)
	wife songs I love dedication songs. You earned some points there! I can imagine my wife and I running down an empty beach with this song playing as the soundtrack of our lives.... Check out my latest song called We got to Jive in Blues by (Feter)

Pete_NB	Pete_NB said 263 days ago (March 5th, 2009)
	Conviction I can believe every word you said here. You sang it like you meant it. Great tune with a fun groove, I like it! Just a meaningless aside, my wife is five foot two and I'm six foot four (or five foot sixteen when I want to make her feel good) Check out my latest song called First of Fall - Slide

Joe Brady	Joe Brady said 262 days ago (March 6th, 2009)
	Great sounding mix! Really like the way you start out the chorus with that rest. Great lines in the first verse (walkin' like your 6'4" Oh, no, you're only 5'4") sets the tone for the whole tune. Great to hear real drums; can I borrow Mike for my next one;-). Nice vocal; smooth and well controlled; confident. Check out my latest song called The Refugee Blues by Feter with Jiguma

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 259 days ago (March 8th, 2009)
	ThanksGuys Thank you for the kind remarks guys. I'm very pleased that you guys took the time to comment. I hope to continue to be productive here on mac jams. Peace! Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

Patriotpizzaman	Patriotpizzaman said 251 days ago (March 16th, 2009)
	Mike is the Man! The Producer is mvh9591. Give him a holler if you'd like to hook up on a collab with him. Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

maxjsl37	maxjsl37 said 253 days ago (March 15th, 2009)
	This definitely helps Awesome tune. Very upbeat. Great vocal delivery. Crisp,clean and directed guitar. Love the chops, you can definitely play. Great lead break (was bummed....... too short LOL!) Great song! Check out my latest song called National Bastard

Patriotpizzaman

Patriotpizzaman said 251 days ago (March 17th, 2009)

Thank you John
I love this lead too. Believe it or not my wife basically told me what to play by hanging out with me while I was working on ideas for the lead break. She'd say that sounds good or What was that or hey do that again. She left the room after about 10 minutes and I started to assemble the riffs in my mind. Before too long I had come up with the lead you hear. It also was guided by a comment that Mike made when I was noodling around with the idea that I was going to play the lead. (Originally hoped to get Mike to do it)(He Rocks!!!!) He said that a lead should lift up a song to another level(paraphrasing). I kept his advice in my mind the whole time I worked on it. Mike's experience has helped me out in more ways than he knows.

Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

thetiler

thetiler said 253 days ago (March 15th, 2009)

Terrific
country type singin ! You have a very good texture in your voice. i don't exactly why, but I go back to Ricky Nelson in this type of singing style. Then the of course the lead is more of a current jam. Nice combination. Again, you really have a very good natural singing voice.

Nice back up music too !

Thanks for sharing !

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Patriotpizzaman

Patriotpizzaman said 251 days ago (March 17th, 2009)

Thanks thetiler
I love the Ricky Nelson comparison. I grew up on old time rock n' roll. The Everley Bros. Ricky Nelson, and especially Elvis.

Who would you compare the lead to? It reminds me of a fairly contemporary player(He still records) that I wouldn't even list as a guy who influenced my playing at all. His influeces and mine are probably the same though as we're about the same age.

Check out my latest song called Livin' Lastin' Love

smokey bacon jnr	smokey bacon jnr said 248 days ago (March 20th, 2009)
	Brilliant This sounds like something you'd easily hear on the radio. Brilliant solo, really rocked. Nice mix too, really clear. Liked the bullfrogs or whatever they are... Check out my latest song called Sunless

jiguma

jiguma said 245 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)

Cool tune Dave
Sounds a bit like Rick Nelson way back in the old days :) That's a compliment by the way.

This seems well recorded - great vocal and guitars. For my taste, the bass is too low in the mix, which is compounded by the drums being so "up" in comparison. I think the panning of the TrapKat kit sounds a little unnaturally spread too wide. The kit sounds good, just the panning makes it clearly an e-kit of some kind. I'm sure that's just a matter of some tweaks in post. Very nice post.
Neil

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mvh9591

mvh9591 said 245 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)

Bass____
Thanks Neil, I shy away from adding to much bass only because Bass can be over powering and mud a mix. I also wanted Dave out front so I did hold back a bit on the mix end. (It's easier to add a bit on the stereo if needed than reduce it) (I am forever working on the mix - never satisfied myself)

The TrapKat - well, It is what it is and it to me is much nicer than say programming drums on my keyboard or using loops. I'm using an Alesis D4 module for the sounds and they arn't exactly the most realistic sounding drums however I have them treaked to my liking. I was going to explore some new samples soon so This is what I needed to actually move on and do that.

Appreciate your opinion and Thanks for listening,

mvh : )

Check out my latest song called Ease My Troubled Mind

Kicbal	Kicbal said 244 days ago (March 23rd, 2009)
	Fun This has a great indie college rock vibe. Great sounding voice. Overall mix seems a bit hot, but the structure and arrangement are solid. Nicely done. Check out my latest song called Falling Stars Forgotten

mvh9591	mvh9591 said 243 days ago (March 24th, 2009)
	I Agree___ I actually asked Pizzaman Dave not to post it but he just couldn't wait. The mix is "HOT" and it's to late to correct it for this post. Maybe next time. (I realized it was to hot the next day after we recorded it and I will correct that) Thanks for the comments Kicbal, mvh : ) Check out my latest song called Ease My Troubled Mind

HolleyHall	HolleyHall said 237 days ago (March 30th, 2009)
	Very 60's! Awesome Guitar vocals! very tight! Check out my latest song called Just Stop Not Living

einstien	einstien said 224 days ago (April 13th, 2009)
	try this refresh

dajama	dajama said 223 days ago (April 13th, 2009)
	Nice Very cool song, and very nicely performed. The instruments all sound great, and the vocal is warm and delivered with verve. Great lyrics, too. Does sound a bit loud in my phones, though. Nice job, gents. Peace. Check out my latest song called Across the Wire (MJRF)

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 206 days ago (May 1st, 2009)
	Great Recording! I like your vocals, a lot! This tune has good energy, a real boost. Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

edpdx	edpdx said 202 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	Happy song! I like how you are able to blend your lyrics with the music. It has a feel of it's own! there is also a unique tone to it. A little piano here and there would be nice. edpdx Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2

ste	ste said 193 days ago (May 14th, 2009)
	Nice feel to the tune. Bit retro in the way the best summer songs are. Thanks for sharing. Check out my latest song called sweet potatoes

Nostragordus

Nostragordus said 57 days ago (September 27th, 2009)

Well Done!
Think I got here from a thread about offering lyrical collaboration. Glad I did! Nicely written tune with lyrics that might fit a few genres/melodies. No real criticism or comments other than perhaps dropping the "oh Yeah's" and "Oh No's, etc. at the end of verse lines. Leave a little space. Space is our Friend! Especially in countryish music. Perhaps even replace the verbal punctuation with something musical...

Really enjoyed, THANKS!

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Nostragordus

Nostragordus said 57 days ago (September 27th, 2009)

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Name: David E. Shreiner jr.

Love to jam with new people. I hosted an open mic show for a year and got to jam for and jam with alot of great musicians. Was a tough gig though because I was learning two - five songs a week every week for the whole year so that the people who work... [see more]

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