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spitlogic

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I've had this song for over a year now. It has taken me a while to finally post it due to 1) missing vocals and 2) permission to use those vocals. My wife dancedivine is singing on this track. She is actually the person who found this site and introduced me to it. So anyway here it goes. I hope you enjoy it.
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Lyrics
[Chorus]
When in the face of adversity there is noting that I cant do
Though the enemy is strong in force and the numbers we have are few
I am firm in what I believe and try to follow the path of the wise
Final countdown for all of our sakes and to save our children's lives

As the planet revolves and mankind evolves out of sync with the natrual laws
Do we have to pause
Instead of spending our time attacking flaws and exploiting our own
I am a product of a broken home
So I hope the poem that I try to speak to you has success in its attempts at reaching you and one day inpire to provoke the dome
My lifeline inspired by a lot of sources
Of course I've had my ups and downs
But when I touch the ground and make the world see that this music to me is more than just a sound
Its my family tree manifested in rhythm and lyricism thats reported and distorted by those who would deny the fact that its impact upon so many lives among us here is just profound
What is actual and what is shown is existing in a state of disparity
Many claim to be real but they're just parody
They have flair to see, but no clarity
Allah is the father taking care of me
Against all of those that try to bury me
And erase my influence off the face of the planet out of the sheer fact they all are scared of me
And fear what I represent. To my best intent I will do what I can for you
And what I can't accomplish against these monsters is the burden of struggle I will share with you
How does it feel when no one cares for you
In a system that is barely aware of you
Until you disrupt it, though it is corrupted and by that design is made for tearing you
down till you're just a clone
Am I just alone?
Or do we all seek to adjust the tone
All together and make this home
And to stop these devils among us all who try to take the throne
The truth is out for us to make it known so we give it our best despite size
Of the serpent's eyes and the lives it has taken in the name of lies to re-create a Rome
Where unjust laws would rule the land
Make a fool of man with these tools in hand
And with no opposition or adverse competition not a single thing would stop him once he'd choose a plan
And the end result is to create a storm
That is based on oppression and to make conform
We'd accept immorality as just the norm
The seven headed dragon taking form

[Chorus]
When in the face of adversity there is noting that I cant do
Though the enemy is strong in force and the numbers we have are few
I am firm in what I believe and try to follow the path of the wise
Final countdown for all of our sakes and to save our children's lives
Song Stats
Hits: 3762
Comments: 59
Fans: 29
Plays: 228
Downloads: 0
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Apr 03, 2009 - 09:55:32 PM
Last Updated: Apr 04, 2009 - 02:34:42 AM Last Played: Dec 22, 2014 - 01:33:28 PM
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Comments
Char said 2976 days ago (April 3rd, 2009)
Yay!
You married a great singer. Yay! you got her to join you here. Yay! Excellent.
Thanks.
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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 3rd, 2009)
thank you
She is a great singer and a great supporter. Thanks Char.
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Macaudion said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Yo, Senior Dude
... dars so'em bout yer voice/tonal inflections/modulation/pitch/your grace/musical tone/your cadence/use of rhythm/the words that you string together/the typically, high quality of your art/and your choice for a mate - all dat tossed into one basket, it has me thoroughly enjoying a type of music that before you, I was a lost cause. To me, that's a huge universe to just roll past without stopping in to say, mucho gracious, Senior Logic! ... and even if you are a related to that Hussein guy... D
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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Uncle Sadaam
Hey Dion. That has to be the most original sentence I have ever read. Thank you for stopping by and giving my music a listen. Please don't mind the flaws in the mix and the instrumentation. I've had this thing sitting here for so long and just got tired of fooling with it. Good to hear from you bro.
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Elevator_Funk said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Holy Smokes...
that was good. I don't even know what else to say.
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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Thanks
I'm glad you felt so impressed by the jam. thanks for stopping by.
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davisamerica said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Mitchell ...
oh man .... this was so worth waiting for. Your wife just rocks on this and your work here is amazing as always. You are truly a poet my friend ... and I am glad I know you. GREAT track man ... pass on kudos to the wife!
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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Thanks Jack
Glad you enjoyed and fav'd it. I have been sitting on this for too long. Thanks for the listen.
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lengold said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Wonderful track
Love everything about this.
Cheers
Len

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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
cool beans
Great to hear from you. Thank you.
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tokai said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Class
act, great words, like it.
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spitlogic said 2976 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Hey man
Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you liked the lyrics.
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ktb said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
great talents
attract! kudos to you both. Look forward to more divine collabs. Well done
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Hey
Thank you KTB. I am looking forward to the same.
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Morning Light said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
I love this song!
You two sound great together.....excellent lyrics too!
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Duo
Yes I like to think we do. She is very talented and a huge supporter. Thanks for stopping by.
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magnatone said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Revelate
WOW - what an INCREDIBLE collab - the essence of collab! This is so way cool you two - THANKS for sharing this with MJ!
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Karen
We are trying. Maybe in the future I will guest star on one of here songs.
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Do I hip hop?
Having had my ears opened to hip hop by DJ French Toast (I'm just such a white boy indie-rocker!) I'm starting a journey of exploration and this is on my road. I love this! The riff, the processed vocal on the female voice and your terrific lead vocal are just spot on. Thanks for continuing my education!
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
No problem
Im glad you found it informative. Welcome to the family.
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lavalamp said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
This is hot
Like what you did with the opening vox. Excellent production.

Also, like your words- Where unjust laws would rule the land
Make a fool of man with these tools in hand- for example.

Deep stuff.

You really brought it on this one.

Dave
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Dave
Thanks for the kind words. Sometimes the lyrics flow pretty easy, such as with this track. I'm glad what I wrote was able to spark the brain.
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Skean said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Ah!
Yes I remember this one, we talking about it back then, hey bro I'm very glad she allowed you to post it with her in there, she have a lovely voice, I want more from you 2... Nice post bro.
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Trust me
She will be posting a lot more in the future. I'm glad this is finally coming out so she can get over those first post jitters.
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Dj French Toast said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Love you Spit
Miss ya man ! Thanx Mrs. Spit for introducing one of the best Emcees on the Planet to the site !
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Fate
It could be the reason we were brought together. To find this site...lol.
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Moviz said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
Great Poetry
and as always delivered with excellent diction.... I never heard clearer words than you pronounce..... this is tops on production with the singing in the backing etc. Though I took my headphones off three times thinking someone was tapping at my back window to my left LOL (it's true) cheers M
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
vocals
It actually took me a hell of a lot of takes to get it right. I even considered recording parts of the song at different times, but instead kept trying until I got it right. I think I had sweat rolling down my head once I finished.

Thank you for the comment and the listen.
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kassia said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
well then
i'm with elevator funk...holy smokes that was good. incredible performances from both of you. and wow those words. this is awesome.
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spitlogic said 2975 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Thank you
Im glad you liked it. Lyrics have always been a very important part of music to me.
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yrp said 2975 days ago (April 4th, 2009)
this
is a work to admire.
Your deliver is totally hipnotic.While the song prgressed I just stopped reading the lyrics and let it hit me like a giant soundwave.
Your wife has a smooth and angelical voice which is a nice contrast to your relentles flux.
Hope you can come back home and work more often with your wife on music.

Thanks for this one.

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spitlogic said 2974 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
So do I
My wife is very talented and hopefully with this post I have opened up the gates for here to begin to share that talent with the rest of you.
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Mystified said 2975 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
what a team :)
awww...this is just great stuff. You really do make a winning combo with your voices against the stirring instrumental.
I hope you will do more music together! :)

Love the song art, too!!
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spitlogic said 2974 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Thanks
I think it was a pretty good track, but her singing completed it somehow. Thanks for the listen and comment.
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scaustrita said 2974 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Wow!
What a fresh sound, great lyrics, and of course your wife's voices!
My nephew is their in Tikri with you! He is a Sargent and works in PysOp, for that reason I hope there is no need to meet him.

That line as the plant revolves is awesome!
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spitlogic said 2974 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
Hello sir
Thank you for coming by and giving me a listen. Glad you enjoyed the lyrics. So does your nephew make any music?
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scaustrita said 2973 days ago (April 7th, 2009)
Nephew
He is not a musician, but his brother has played for years.
I'll be watching for your next comp.
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preference said 2974 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
Beautiful
I'd love to take advantage of your wife's great vocal power one day. Btw, you should really message me more acapellas, I'd love to continue work with you spitlogic. I know good hip hop, and your lyricism is top notch.
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spitlogic said 2974 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
acapellas
If you look on my main page you will see them. I usually make an a cappella version of every song I spit on. I will be laying down another a cappella here soon, but to make things easier I will pm you the links. Thanks for the listen.
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egobandit said 2974 days ago (April 5th, 2009)
A musical slap
I love that, You ever listen to Flobot this reminds me of them. This is huge what a great song Deep Bows greatness! Gave me chills by the way!
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spitlogic said 2974 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
Flobot
Never heard of them, but I will look them up now. Chills huh? That just put a huge grin on my face. It feels great to know that someone is feeling what you feel when you make the track. Thanks man.
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racerat said 2974 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
tight
Spit,
This is amazingly tight. I am constantly taken back by your lyrical chops. There is a tension in this track that is begging to be released. Tension and suspense that is never satisfied. The end may need a little work though, IMHO, it feel just a little abrupt. But the body of it outweighs that small suggestion by far. Great cut. Your wife's vox are a great touch, another complex layer. Thx,--P
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spitlogic said 2973 days ago (April 7th, 2009)
Thanks
Im not really sure how else I could end it. I think it does come across a little abrupt, but that is the best I could come up with. Since I don't really play the guitar or most of the instruments I played with my keyboard some sort of solo would be out of the question, though I think that may work. I don't know, but I appreciated the advice and am glad you came to listen.
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Konscious said 2972 days ago (April 7th, 2009)
I remember
this one... but this time it was much more valuable to listen to as I am able to more easily follow your thoughts with the lyrics in print. I love the general vibe of the beat, very fitting for the theme. I've always been a fan of female voices singing especially in hip hop songs for choruses and whatnot, your wife's voice is amazing... cool that you guys have that connection.

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spitlogic said 2971 days ago (April 8th, 2009)
Brother Kev.
Yes. It is cool. Hopefully I will be able to get her more invloved with some of the music I have planned that would require a female voice. I am greatful for her and her contributions. Thanks for listening (even though you've heard this before). Take care.
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Diviner said 2971 days ago (April 8th, 2009)
Great track
lovely backing singing and great rapping. A marriage made in heaven, look forward to more collabs with your wife. Nice one Spit, enjoyed.
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spitlogic said 2971 days ago (April 9th, 2009)
Keith
Hey bro. Thanks for the listen. I hope for her to be able to drop some songs herself. Talk to you later man.
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sonnyjim said 2969 days ago (April 10th, 2009)
Wicked fast delivery!
I'm with yrp: I stopped trying to keep up, and just went with it......... great phrasing, man........ great weaving rhythms, too. Impressive track, Mitchell. Thank you very much!
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spitlogic said 2968 days ago (April 11th, 2009)
thanks
It was something different as far as style I wanted to try and became a very difficult process, but I made it through with this result. Thanks for the comment and the listen.
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bud said 2967 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
Great track
you amaze me with your dexterity and insightful lyrics. Nice hearing your wife on his too. Excellent backing - really pushes along.
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spitlogic said 2967 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
Bud
Hey man. Thank you for the compliment. I try my best to keep the music dynamic. Glad you enjoyed.
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ElPeruano said 2967 days ago (April 12th, 2009)
killer
i remember when you sent me this song for the first time. its still dope man! i love your rhyme scheme on this one. you go into more complex rhyme structures then you do in some of your other songs. the lyrics, of course, are always impressive and positive. nice guitar sample (sample? im not sure). your wife has a lovely voice that really blends well with the feel of the track. i like the dissonance of the whole thing. much respect.



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spitlogic said 2965 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
Thanks Anthony
Wow man. That feels good when someone thinks that a riff that I played on MIDI is a sample. I think I was going for that kind of effect on the beat. I think the style I used on this is one that I've admired from people like Twister, but always had a hard time mastering. I think with some more practice I will get better.

Thanks for the listen bro. Take care.
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willbill808 said 2953 days ago (April 26th, 2009)
now HOW did I miss this??
this is awesome! the singing that your wife did is great, and of course you got that dope spitlogic flow.

Those lyrics man! They are honestly godlike.
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Calchas said 2950 days ago (April 29th, 2009)
Wowzer!
Well done dude! Excellent poetry. Impassioned vocal delivery.

Nice to hear your wife's vox in this too.

Beautiful and intense.

Be well friend!
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craft said 2930 days ago (May 20th, 2009)
great feeling
Killer flow as usual.. Love the lyrics and your wife's singing... Great.. really great..
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PrototypeEightyOne said 2696 days ago (January 8th, 2010)
nice
tough flow on this one. nice. enjoyed both yours and your wifes lyrics. Great stuff.

that scratching @ 2:56 is ill son.
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dancedivine said 2512 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Collab...
So, when are we gonna collab again?
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