Come Out To Play

Sea Monk Seven

Genre: Lo-fi

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a song about an abusive boy
a song about an abused girl

sounds better in headphones (panning)

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Lyrics

head to the wall
its my fault
(eating away)

dead child at dawn

bottles are empty
no cab has been called
(no money to pay)

dead child at dawn

cant leave you this way
gotta be all or nothing today
i see you crying
that bruise means no denying
in the end all he'll leave you with is pain...

can you come out to play?

the choke hold is strong
it wont be very long
till youre fading away
(walk to the light)

dead child at dawn

cant leave you this way
gotta be all or nothing today
i see you dying
this time theres no denying
in a moment or three it will all simply turn to grey

cant you come out to play?

Song Stats

Hits: 505
Comments: 17
Fans: 13
Plays: 46
Downloads: 30
Votes: 1
Uploaded: May 04, 2009 - 03:52:28 PM
Last Updated: May 04, 2009 - 03:52:28 PM Last Played: Nov 10, 2009 - 05:50:37 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
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Song Actions

Keywords:

northern lights (16)

Hardware:

microkorg
guild guitar

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Comments

Feter	Feter said 206 days ago (May 4th, 2009)
	Come Out To Play Nice song ...good feelings here ...would suggest some tweaks here and there on the volumes ...as you plugged a drums pattern would cool to bring bass along ...good job and song writing ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

lengold	lengold said 206 days ago (May 4th, 2009)
	Very, very powerful song and I like the sparse production too. I think I would like the vocals a bit louder. Love this. Shame about the abrupt end though. Downloaded. Thanks. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

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Willywagga said 206 days ago (May 4th, 2009)

What man ?!?
Give me some volume here please. This is one damn fine song. I love the vocals but they're a bit too understated.
Instrumentation is brilliant but again I need the levels taken up, move a little closer to the mic or something.
Lovely harmonies on the vocals. I think this song has tons of potential, of course care must be taken not to take anything away from the rawness because that is an important element.
You have a great baby here, feed it and watch it grow.
Thanks for sharing.

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mtransue	mtransue said 206 days ago (May 4th, 2009)
	cool stuff I really like the raw sounds of the guitars and the contrast of the effected voice. Nice tune man. Check out my latest song called The Antibody

dantimmermans	dantimmermans said 206 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	what a chorus! perfect production choices here, i love the level of the vocals here and the way the different vocal lines don't seem too interested in unison. the ending is fine but I'd let that final bass drum resonate completely before cutting the track. nice work, thanks. Check out my latest song called From The Fire (Alt)

shavingronaldscar	shavingronaldscar said 206 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	nice! Love those descending chords, great job! A definite favourite and DL. Check out my latest song called Way Down FIlth

Daugrin	Daugrin said 206 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	Out to Play Splendid, a fine mark for songwriting and presentaion. This remindes me a Brian Wilson chord progression, the vocal harmony really adds to the hypnotic feel. It may not be possible to add any production values from this knock without alterting the stark, naked feel. Do you listen to Syd Barett? Daugrin Check out my latest song called Daphne w/ Andy Wigzell

lavalamp	lavalamp said 206 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	Hey This totally reminds me of a lost Elliott Smith tune. Which I DIG. LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

Sea Monk Seven	Sea Monk Seven said 206 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	man i thinks thats quite the compliment! thanks Check out my latest song called one white lie (demo)

blindsidedpoets	blindsidedpoets said 205 days ago (May 5th, 2009)
	Come Out To Play Disturbing content, yet moving and touching. Sad. Beautifully done, thank you. Check out my latest song called Sorry (Bracelet of Hope Version)

TERRAPLANE

TERRAPLANE said 205 days ago (May 5th, 2009)

Great song!!
You vocals remind me of David Gilmore,, I would like to hear them more up front though. I wondered if you were deliberate in the harmonies that were off in timing here & there. You could have echoed the bass drum in the abrupt end or something that doesn't sound like the tape broke.. lots of potential here...keep on keepin on,T

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Cashed-In	Cashed-In said 205 days ago (May 6th, 2009)
	I think... I'm going to listen to this song and watch salad fingers at the same time. I think it would go well together. This song is great. Good job. Check out my latest song called Empty Bird Cage

tempie	tempie said 204 days ago (May 6th, 2009)
	out to play hey dude i agree with lavalamp on the Elliott Smith comparison. Very cool tune. lo fi production agrees with you. Stay away from cutlery. Check out my latest song called Get Away with Murder Eyes (5XArms Cover)

Sea Monk Seven	Sea Monk Seven said 203 days ago (May 7th, 2009)
	hehe ill do my best to stay away from cutlery, but my girlfriend might not... Check out my latest song called one white lie (demo)

Relic67	Relic67 said 203 days ago (May 8th, 2009)
	Waltz #3 This is great! Really enjoyed this one. the harmonies towards the end are perfect. Guitar sounds good. Ending a bit abrupt, but I assume that was intentional. I'll look out for more of your stuff.... Check out my latest song called Novis Libris

yrp	yrp said 166 days ago (June 13th, 2009)
	I was about to quote Elliott Smith but that has been already done, so I will just say I loved your song. Check out my latest song called Light (with onesweetworld)

kingbee	kingbee said 134 days ago (July 16th, 2009)
	up the mix Love the song and the lyrics. Great chord sequence...would just love to hear a clearer mix of this with stuff bought 'up' a bit. In a way this song doesn't deserve to be so lo-fi but that's just me. Enjoyed and moved by it all cheers Check out my latest song called Dr.Thunderball-Bond theme challenge

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Name: Milton, Alex, Steph

good morning starshine the world says hello! Sea Monk Seven is a group of up and coming musicians that hail from Victoria, BC, Canada etc etc. We all met up in Grade 8 and are still making music together after high school. Alex is the brain. J... [see more]

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Lo-fi ? from "Low Fidelity" ? describes a sound recording which contains accidental artifacts, like distortion, or environmental noise, or a recording which has a limited frequency response. This stands in contrast to high fidelity or "hi-fi". In dig

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