Broken (Demo)

So a friend of mine sent me over a little acoustic number he was working on and was asking what I could with it. So "Broken" was born. After getting down some vocals and adding a tonne of instrumentation I wasn't really happy with most of the lyrics and was stuck for a decent second verse so I asked another friend of mine to lend a hand and he helped me out a lot. This current version is still incomplete but I wanted to post it to get some feedback.

"Broken"
Music: Ewan Crossan
Words: Liam Barbour, Gordon Macdonald

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I’m broken down
The pieces of my heart
Just bleed ever after

I was your clown
But baby your circus needed
love more than laughter

Remember now?
Dancing, pretending.
Full of half-finished singing

So kiss me now,
And I'll show you forever
As cold as you've shown me

Remember I’ll be there when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure you will find it (too late)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before

I'm just a man,
Built up by your promise
Empty... whatever

And how do you suppose?
I take this while smiling,
This pointless surrender

Remember I’ll be there when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure you will find it (too late)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before

cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than

Remember I’ll be here if you change your mind
if its a matter of faith then ill pray you find it

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Uploaded: May 07, 2009 - 07:33:54 PM
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