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Waves (Rough demo)


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obbster

 Genre: Rock

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A rough demo of a song i'm working on. The music for this was written a while ago and yesterday i was looking through my old stuff and stumbled upon it - pretty much had forgotten all about it and I quickly came up with some rough lyrics for it.
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Lyrics
The waves they crash
Over me
And over all I see
(yeah)

Drifting through I am a man
with time on his hands
The night will come and I pray I see the morning
I feel the waves
they crash down and I float away
Yeah

Liars live to lead the blind
They savour the crime
The nightmare comes
and all this hopelessness is rising
They're so divine
and they'll hide alone in darkness
Yeah

The nightmare comes
and all this hopelessness is rising
We're so divine
and we'll hide alone in darkness
Yeah
Song Stats
Hits: 367
Comments: 6
Fans: 7
Plays: 31
Downloads: 16
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jun 05, 2009 - 05:40:51 PM
Last Updated: Jun 05, 2009 - 06:14:26 PM Last Played: Aug 13, 2009 - 10:44:50 AM
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Hardware:
MacBook pro 17" 2.4ghz
Software:
Logic Pro, guitar rig 2, B4 2
Comments
Feter said 174 days ago (June 5th, 2009)
Waves
Hmmm ...this is nice and thoughtful ...great singing for this ...
the guitar just right ..(rough demo ?) man ..this sounds amazing ..
loved the lyrics ...great live feelings all over ...nice ballad ..
thnx alot for sharin !!!!
caymanjazz said 174 days ago (June 5th, 2009)
Waves
Great song for a demo. You have a very original tone to your voice which makes it stand out in the mix. I like the raw earthy tone on the guitar and the space gives it that haunting feeling. Good job. Can't wait to hear the next version. I would try and keep a few elements from this version to hold on to the original emotion.
Thanks Mike
Check out my latest song called Insomnia Exposed
MarkHolbrook said 174 days ago (June 5th, 2009)
Wow
I hope you continue with this... This is great! Polish it up and you have a hit!

Vocals are really cool!
Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
Dadai.2 said 174 days ago (June 5th, 2009)
a haunting tune...

I'm glad you found this back in your back files.. cause this belongs in your front line song files. A Cranberries kind of vibe.. which in my book is gold. I can easily imagine this playing on the rotation on the local FM station.

cheers...
Check out my latest song called The Riverside (with Ed sloparts sitting in)
Bob6stringer said 174 days ago (June 5th, 2009)
Seriously...
You are one hellacious talent as both a musician and singer. One of the best I've heard for hitting a certain, resonant emotion in between those lines. great pitch on your voice, with some polish but not "showy." And great music. Seriously, just great. Period.
Check out my latest song called Yours and Mine
Reggie_Pole said 173 days ago (June 6th, 2009)
What bob said
Another beauty. Great voice. Needs a little work, but you already knew that. Among the best.
Check out my latest song called Examination Dream
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