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Closed Clam


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tenawanboy

 Genre: Piano

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Sometimes I have feelings which I can't tell anyone.
Sometimes I think it's not worth talking to anybody.
In such a case, I become a closed clam.

Artwork:"Shell and Foam" by ladymonarda
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Plays: 17
Downloads: 15
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Uploaded: Jul 18, 2009 - 05:05:19 AM
Last Updated: Jul 18, 2009 - 05:08:28 AM Last Played: Oct 27, 2009 - 09:23:07 PM
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paul f. page said 129 days ago (July 21st, 2009)
You capture...
...the introversion nicely with this thoughtful piano improvisation. There are some very nice harmonic changes that just creep up on the listener and give your work particular interest as the composition unfolds. I think you perhaps need a to find a little more structure in the inner portions of this piece. You DO come back to the original theme/mood several times and this is a good unifying element. ... Your skill at the keyboard is secure. Is this an acoustic grand, or are you using a digital keyboard?
Peace.
Paul
Check out my latest song called Double Etude
tenawanboy said 129 days ago (July 21st, 2009)
Arigato gozai masu!
Arigato gozai masu!
Thank you very much for your comment again! I feel quite encouraged by your gentle words.
As you mentioned, I also think this composition needs some more changing. It ends halfway. When I wrote this composition, I was aware of that and tried another structure. But I didn't succeed after all.
By the way, this piano music is too difficult for me to play. I can only play piano by chords a little. I've never taken piano lessons. So, I used Logic Pro 8 to play the music. The sound is a software module called "Steinway Piano".

(I'm not fluent in English, so please excuse me if I use strange English.)

Thank you.
tenawanboy

Check out my latest song called For You Who Were Left Alone
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I'm a Japanese amateur musician. I composed music in April 2008 for the first time. So I'm a beginner. I like piano music at present. I respect Ryuichi Sakamoto for his piano works. Perhaps you may know him as a composer of The Last Emperor's Theme... [see more]

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