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Waiting


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tmcfate

 Genre: Acoustic

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this is my forth song posted from my RPM Challenge experience in February. basically 10 songs in 28 days, written, recorded and a cd produced. the name of the cd is "Food and Shelter"
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Lyrics
Waiting
i saw the curtains changing color
i watched the sun room come alive
i have been sitting in this rocker
wondering when you might arrive
i am hoping for redemption
cant stand the way i feel
i know it is only passing through me
rivers flood my fertile fields
am rolling down the windows
i am turning off the lights
i am pushing down on the pedal
i made it through the night
i wonder if you are sleeping
i wonder what you dream about
i know i am headed for the river
to do things i only read about
i am on the floor picking up pennies
you are in a car on your way home
i am watching geese fly towards the water
hoping i am not alone
the stars are so much brighter as if i was much closer to them
and i am feeling a little bit lighter
flying higher
i am going back down to memphis
going to do it right this time
going to swim in the muddy water
and i know i will be just fine
i never thought i would be a winner
never planned to do this stuff
sometimes my love is just not enough
i remember when i was special
and you were just a kid
i and i knew someday you would find me
and all those things i hid
see the sun in the distance
rising up through the trees at 6 am
my first cup of coffee is cold from yesterday
cigarette glows like a gem
i saw the curtains changing color
i watched the sun room come alive
i have been sitting in this rocker
wondering when you might arrive
i am rolling down the windows
i am turning off the lights
i am pushing down on the pedal
i made it through the night
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Comments: 6
Fans: 5
Plays: 64
Downloads: 88
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Jul 21, 2009 - 06:12:16 AM
Last Updated: Jul 21, 2009 - 08:16:55 AM Last Played: Mar 27, 2017 - 07:42:11 AM
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Comments
MarkHolbrook said 3049 days ago (July 21st, 2009)
Excellent
Wonderful guitar work!
Check out my latest song called Corn Whiskey
Feter said 3049 days ago (July 21st, 2009)
Waiting
Greatly formulated ...good solid energetic beats
delivered behind a great vocal work ..very great
rock setting and production ...thnx alot for
sharin !!!!
Check out my latest song called Roll with it
lengold said 3048 days ago (July 22nd, 2009)
Really enjoying
this series of songs - all very well written and intimate. Very interesting things happening in this mix.
Downloaded for further listens. Thanks.
Cheers
Len

Check out my latest song called Decent Girl
Richard_Schletty said 3047 days ago (July 22nd, 2009)
Dig this

Hi hat is a little loud. Other than that, way good. I like your voice. Like a fresh squeezed lemon mixed with raspberry juice.

Typewriter percussion? Awesome!
stevel said 3047 days ago (July 23rd, 2009)
Cool
This is my kinda tune...great stuff
Steve
Check out my latest song called Broken Toy
Bob6stringer said 3026 days ago (August 13th, 2009)
Your entire RPM effort shines.
As a whole, your entries in the RPM Challenge benefit from a great aesthetic cohesion musically and in the mix. Lyrically, the exercise seems to give you great focus--they thankfully lack the sophomoric angst of "why is the world so X."

You seem to be carrying the sweep of an entire album in your "RAM." And who knows what will come of it? Van Morrison recorded Astral Weeks in three-days; the label hated it at the time, but it's since been canonized as a masterwork.
Check out my latest song called Happy Birthday (Na Na Na Na)
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Name: tmcfate
Location: cranston ri united states
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