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My Little Song

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 Genre: Rock

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A song I started writing the music for last night, just got the first draft recorded so I thought I would upload.

Lyrics by Gordy Macdonald.

Cheers.
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Lyrics
"My Little Song"

1
How can I keep the sound from coming out?
Make my tiny song so brave and proud
Listen to him scream his little lungs
And only you can hear him now

Chorus:
The better half of me
You're better scraps of me
A better piece of me
From a tune you'll never be

2
You don't know what this little guy's about
Does it look like you all written down?
Don't even bother to read aloud
Cos only you can hear him now

Chorus:
The better half of me
You're better scraps of me
A better piece of me
From a tune you'll never be
You're moving on
Wander into verses you don't belong
You're moving on
And, fuck you, this is my song


Words by Gordy Macdonald
Music by Liam Barbour
Song Stats
Hits: 288
Comments: 8
Fans: 5
Plays: 46
Downloads: 13
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Aug 03, 2009 - 04:50:05 PM
Last Updated: Aug 03, 2009 - 04:50:05 PM Last Played: Nov 19, 2009 - 09:40:38 PM
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Hardware:
MacBook Pro 17"
Software:
Logic Pro 9
Comments
Feter said 115 days ago (August 3rd, 2009)
My Little Song
Great production ..the guitars balanced so well .
loved the mixing with all the arrangement ..good
vocal work as well ...thnx alot for sharin !!!
scaustrita said 115 days ago (August 3rd, 2009)
Guitars
Well done that haunting sound of the guitars is awesome! Great vocal harmonies . . .
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ste said 115 days ago (August 3rd, 2009)
sounds
some nice sounds here, perhaps a minute could be shaved from it? good vox
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screamalexz said 115 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
cool
the intro is sounding beautiful. this is the first draft? wow. like the lyrics.
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dantimmermans said 114 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
that's some dirty guitar!
I love the tones! and I've gotta admire what you've managed with synthesized guitars here. Fan-frickin-tastic chorus and harmonies!
Would love to hear this with real guitars and some more flowing drums.
An excellent song with a great vocal performance.
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Boundless said 114 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
Cool first draft
Pretty solid tune already.

Well done - thanks !

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Henke said 114 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
This really is good
as it is. But if I may offer my two cents:

I loved the intro, best part to my simple taste, but does it belong to this song? The rest is solid rock. Like ste suggests, maybe shorten a bar or two at 3 minutes or short thereafter. Instruments all sound great to me and the singing is stellar as always. Good lyrics too. Almost there already, but a little extra time with it and it's a superhit!

Take care.

/Henke
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WharmtonRise said 113 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
Really good
For a first draft. Keep it up.
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