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Okay, so first of all, I swear that the title goes with the lyrics! So next, this is a bit of a classical-pop-rock song I made last fall. Since then it's been practically completely. I just have to record the vocals, which will require a good mic... *sigh* Well, enjoy for now!
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Lyrics
Please tell me what I can do
Cuz I don't want no one new
And I won't ever hurt you
Cuz I swear I'll never leave you

Many times I broke your heart
Cuz I wasn't all that smart
Threw everything good away
And now I have something to say

chorus:
I was stupid
Such a damn fool
Wish I never ever threw it all away
And I miss you
More than ever
And I understand if you won't take me back

Sometimes I don't wanna see
Otherwise depressed I'll be
I've made too many mistakes
Never again I'll slam the brakes
I'm jealous it's her you see
Please open your eyes to me
And give me one last chance
I'm asking for just one more dance

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Hits: 2581
Comments: 31
Fans: 14
Plays: 134
Downloads: 83
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Aug 18, 2009 - 11:28:06 AM
Last Updated: Dec 19, 2009 - 11:43:01 PM Last Played: Jun 06, 2017 - 10:43:36 AM
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crissew said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
You can get by
with a pretty inexpensive mic like a SM-57 (made by Shure). You can get these mics for under 50 used on ebay and they are the best bang for the buck mic you can buy. This song has potential. I would experiment with the MIDI tones you are using on this song. If you are using garageband, it is pretty easy to do. I am hearing something warmer for the main keyboard part (maybe the garageband grand piano or something like that). Good start!!
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Thanks
I'll be sure to check that out as soon as I get the chance! That would definitely be good for me. And I think actually I'm currently using on of the GB grand pianos. Could be the punchy one but I don't remember... Would you suggest a different one?
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Einarus said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Nice one
The piano line is simple yet effective, although I think you could've changed it up a bit during that first minute.
I like the way you introduce various new sounds and they create a pretty well balanced background. I would maybe bring the volume of the synth sweep pad down a bit, as it almost distracts a bit from the rest of the ensemble.

When the aggressive drums (maybe a bit too aggressive?) come in, I think it really needs some low end, i.e. bass or bass pads.

Finally I think you should rather fade out the final chord rather than letting it cut off like that.

But all in all a nice piece of music.

-Einar S.
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Thanks
for the input! It's good to get other people's input, especially people with more music background than those of some friends and family. I'll try taking some of your advice and will see how it goes! Overall, thanks!
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Feter said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Stupid
THis is lovely ...very nice arrangement ..
and how you let the synth layers all work
through your song ...cant wait to hear your
voice over this ...good job ..thnx alot for
sharin !!!!
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Thanks
I can't wait either til it's all together! And thanks for your feedback and support!
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I.G.M. said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Nice tune Jessica
wow, lots of tunes, hmmm, think about loading up song by song, not all at once. so you will get much more attention on a tune.
sorry cris but I don`t think the sm-57 is a good buy because it`s a mic for live performances not for homerecording.

I use an Audio Technica 3035 and I`m very glad with it!!!

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crissew said 2960 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
I agree
that the audio technica is much better if you can afford 200 bucks. I think CFG is a high schooler though
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dadgarus said 2961 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
Stupid
I think it's better to upload your songs with vocals, so they may be listenable and rearrange your song with a better quality quality.
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ShadowofNine said 2947 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Nice
now all we need is a singer, and we can rock...very nice track Jessica
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maxruehl said 2947 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Hey!
There are some really cool moments in this...but where's the floot?:P Really nice energy, especially towards the end. Good job.:)
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guitapick said 2889 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
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I like the way this builds. The theme's present throughout...nice variations.

Sennheiser makes a nice vox mic...as does Shure of course. $100. A vocal will sound nice with this. You can get by for practice using the built in on the computer. Does the trick nicely...
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Calchas said 2887 days ago (October 31st, 2009)
Damn nice tune!
How'd I not hear this until now? (Sometimes it's so hard to keep up...)

Wonderful composition. Looking forward to the vocals!

Be well!
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IdleBel10 said 2879 days ago (November 7th, 2009)
Nice
graet into and the build is almost genius, great piece.
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thetiler said 2850 days ago (December 6th, 2009)
nice
feel to this, like the synth bass and how it goes in and out with a cool sound. Nice play on the melody !
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Char said 2838 days ago (December 19th, 2009)
A very
nice start.
Different last four?

I'm jealous it's her you see
Please open your eyes to me
And give me another chance
I'm asking for one more dance

Thanks.
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2837 days ago (December 19th, 2009)
Thank and brilliant!
Thank you!!! That is brilliant!!! If anything, I just have to switch just a couple works to make it fit syllable-wise [sucks being a little ocd], but I love that! It's perfect!!! Thank you so so much!!!
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jibes said 2835 days ago (December 21st, 2009)
Jessica.
When are you going to do the vocal? We are all waiting! Good mic or not I say go for it.
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crissew said 2835 days ago (December 21st, 2009)
I agree cfg
there are artists (gaylen75) that are doing great recordings with the apple pin hole mic that comes with the computer. Bite the bullet and do the vox, you can always do them again later if you need to. I recorded my first 20 songs on a stock computer 1/8 inch jack.
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2835 days ago (December 22nd, 2009)
Well
its a matter of finding the time too to do it. But since it's winter break I'll be doing so really soon! Promise! I really do wanna get this song finished!
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HollywoodJetset said 2830 days ago (December 26th, 2009)
***
Hey this is a sweet tune. Keep it up .
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davisamerica said 2828 days ago (December 29th, 2009)
really
great bones
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PrototypeEightyOne said 2827 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
nice
very cool soundbed. I think this is my fav of yours so far. Very cool melody and sounds going on here. You need to lay vox on this. As IGM stated above the AT3035 is a nice mic, I have one that I am selling soon. If you want I can hook you up for cheap ;P it would be about $100. same price as a new shure57 i believe. Ive had it for about a year. offers there just holler if your interested.

the only suggestion i have for this that i think you could easily fix up is the ending distortion. it was just a tad too grainy and rough. smooth it out a touch with some EQ, maybe accent more mid to low end as opposed to high end.
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2827 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Thnx
Actually got a mic just a lil while back [at2020]. Just finding the time to record. I've actually changed up a few tiny things since I last uploaded this song. Hope to get it up soon! Unfortunately this week go a 6 hr long job everyday! I really don't like using my time to babysit this child... Lol, at least I get money outta this!
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 2800 days ago (January 26th, 2010)
Catching up...
... I'm trying to catch up with some of the newer artists here. This is great. Lovely build. All done with software instruments? Really digging the high speed drum break towards the end. Great composition.
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nevermine said 2797 days ago (January 29th, 2010)
hey
can u do the lyrics for this, even just the music moved me like u have no idea and i can kindof hear u voice even tho i cant.. sounds weird but i love the words u wrote mmmmm
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2797 days ago (January 29th, 2010)
Sure
cuz I think I might have time this weekend and my almost cold turned out to be no cold! And I'm in the perfect mood for it anywayz! I'll let you know once it's up!
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nevermine said 2797 days ago (January 29th, 2010)
ps
wasnt sayin ur words were weird lol, just meant that its weird that i can almost sense u singing it ;p
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2796 days ago (January 29th, 2010)
It's
fine I knew what you meant! Thanks for giving both versions a listen. Another thing that's weird though is this one got higher ratings while the new one has gotten much lower ratings. Hmmm.
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nevermine said 2796 days ago (January 30th, 2010)
hmmm
yeah i think its someone being a prick to people on here, maybe my ex lol, or someone who has a thorn up their *** ;p well i am very impressed by youir voice and songwriting so thanks :) i will go vote for ur other one too :D
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2796 days ago (January 30th, 2010)
Who
knows? Bunch of crazy stuff happening around here lately... But I doubt it was my ex. He was actually impressed by it! And thank you! I always love hearing from you!
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