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Originally a poem I wrote for an English Composition class, 'Truce' turned into my first fully structured song, as well as an experiment in instrument over-dubbing and MIDI controller use. No loops are used. All MIDI controlling was done using a padKontrol drum machine, and an M-Audio Axiom 25-key. This work was done on an MBP, by me, myself, and I, in my poolhouse. I also used an SM57 mic for both acoustic guitar and vocals (I'm saving up for a legitimate vox mic - any suggestions appreciated)

It's apparent that my voice needs a lot more work, and I did use a bit of auto-tuning. I view this song as more of a stepping stone to a higher proficiency with DAWs, as well as music composition in general. Please leave any feedback, whether positive or negative.

Cheers
-Nate
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Lyrics
VERSE 1:
i said to you in another life
what have we got to lose?

now it feels like there's no other way
than to offer you a truce

been down this road so many times
so be sure to don your mask of war crimes

CHORUS 1:
and she said,
how many years have we been waitin'?
and she said,
all that's left - it ain't worth savin'

VERSE 2:
pour yourself some coffee
black, just like your hair

only we remain in the spotlight,
nothin' else can take us there.

CHORUS 1:
and she said,
how many years have we been wastin'?
and she said, man,
all that's left - no, it ain't worth savin'

BRIDGE:
Am F
i can't remember
all the words that i said

i can only feel the hot pain
cutting through my head

slide C
and it feels....
slide C, C Am G
feels like nothing i've felt before

SOLO:
Am, G x3 |
D | x3

BRIDGE BACK TO VERSE STRUM PATTERN:
Am, G x3
F, A#, A

VERSE 3:
movin' down the lazy ol' boulevard
feelin' wrong without a right

the sun sets itself behind the trees ,
as the stars put up a fight

CHORUS 2:
and she said,
this lonely street is my safe haven
and she said,
deep underground, the earth is shakin'

VERSE 4:
It's important, here, to note that we have been
a war machine who's gears work on a shot of gin

but, like the old saying goes, 'war is peace',
so let us set ourselves down and give life a new lease

CHORUS 3:
and she said,
what kind of game have we been playin'?

Song Stats
Hits: 217
Comments: 7
Fans: 3
Plays: 19
Downloads: 13
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Aug 27, 2009 - 07:09:45 PM
Last Updated: Aug 21, 2009 - 06:03:20 PM Last Played: Nov 10, 2009 - 07:27:27 PM
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Keywords:
Truce (1)
Hardware:
KORG PadKontrol MIDI Controller
M-Audio Axiom 25-key MIDI Controller
M-Audio Fast Track Pro
Shure SM57 Microphone

Software:
Garageband 9
Comments
crissew said 92 days ago (August 27th, 2009)
This is a very cool tune
Very nice phrasing of the vox and I love your bass tone. Enjoyed it. Most people here are using Technica condenser mics. I use a AKG Perception 200 condenser (although only on one song so far on here). I used an sm57 for my first 30 songs and it works pretty well.
Check out my latest song called It Wont Stop w/ Verbalist
Feter said 92 days ago (August 28th, 2009)
Truce
This is way cool ...lovely arrangement for
all the MIDI files ..your vocal surely so
interesting ..the whole production is cool !!!
kudos ..thnx alot for sharin !!!!
PaddyNavinCaryatid said 92 days ago (August 28th, 2009)
Good composition
.. sure the production could do with a few tweaks, but for a first outing on MJ this is excellent. I'd maybe take the autotune off and let your voice have its natural timbre. Unless you're using Meolodyne (and then only sparingly) most autotune is hardly worth it.
Guitar work is very good, the electric solo is well mixed and nicely played.
As to redording vocals, I've always used a Behringer C1 - probably the cheapest legitimate condenser money can buy and it is a world away from dynamics in its ability to pick up the nuances of a vocal performance.
Good work here my friend. Welcome to MJs
Check out my latest song called The Last Goodbye (New Version)
ste said 92 days ago (August 28th, 2009)
nice
delivery on the vox and good playing. great job
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Relic67 said 91 days ago (August 28th, 2009)
good one
i enjoyed the music and the lyrics. Voice sounds fine to me.
nice bridge and solo.

Check out my latest song called In Hell
Mike_Lynn said 91 days ago (August 29th, 2009)
Cool
This is pretty neat with interesting lyrics. You have a great voice too for this genre of music. Cheers / Mike
Check out my latest song called Profusion
SmokeyVW said 88 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
good arrangement
welcome to MacJams!

well done. i like the arrangement, vocals, and the guitar solo

thanks
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