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Just Shy of 15 Years


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claypotts

 Genre: Ballad

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Losing a child is probably the most emotionally difficult experience that a human can possibly face.
I watched it happen in my own family 26 years ago when my sister lost her 15 year old son. The entire family has never been the same. It's taken me this long to write a song based on that experience. My sisters strength getting through that time and in the ensuing years was nothing short of remarkable. While she was strong, my brother-in-law fell apart. The song I have written depicts the contrast of emotions that occurred at the time. May such a tragedy never touch any of your lives.
Thanks to Debbie for sharing the microphone with me on this. She is a fantastic artist.
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Just Shy of Fifteen Years

By Clay Potts

Father-
I lost my future when our Carrie passed away
The grief is endless
I can't bear it another day
Please don't tell me, you know what I'm feeling
Don't say it's time that I move on
I've lost my faith
The empty space
No way that I can face the fact she's gone

Mother-
She was my baby, just shy of fifteen years
I know you're devastated
I taste the sorrow of your tears
Our child shall live within us
And our bond will never break
But as you purposely destroy yourself
Please consider what's at stake
Beyond today I cannot see
What God has planned for me
We'll never be
As we were before
That only makes me need you more


Father-
The thought of pressing on without our little angel
I just don't think that kind of life's for me







Mother-
If you loved your little girl
Pick up the pieces of your broken world
And celebrate the love that she showed us through her too few years...


Both-
We lost our future when our Carrie passed away
The grief is endless
But we bear it every day
She was our baby, just shy of fifteen years
We celebrate the love that she showed us through her too few years...

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Plays: 37
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Uploaded: Sep 22, 2009 - 03:43:23 AM
Last Updated: Sep 22, 2009 - 03:43:23 AM Last Played: Nov 14, 2009 - 09:20:52 AM
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blindsidedpoets said 65 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Just Shy of 15 Years
Beyond words, no critique (it's all good), just... thank you, this is powerful. Blessings to you and your family.
Check out my latest song called Sorry (Bracelet of Hope Version)
MarkHolbrook said 65 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Wow
... this is without a doubt my biggest fear in life ... We put so much into our kids... To have them taken would as the song tells take away the reason to live...

Very clear, clean, powerful message. Excellent performances on this too. Loved it all the way through...

Thank you!
Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
Feter said 65 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Just Shy of 15 Years
WOW ...this is so powerful ..the song ..the story
behind ..very emotional ..Debbie's voice a true
warmth to the whole scene here ..amazing mix here
cant believe how cool this song production and
sphere ..tight tight work ..moved me so ..kudos
God Bless ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
gail60 said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Sad sweet song
I have been in this place before with friends and family - but have never lost one of my own children. I cannot even begin to imagine the pain the parents feel. This song is very nicely done and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it with us. Blessings to all the families involved.
Check out my latest song called Sweet September
J.A.Stewart said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Powerful
A very powerful song, for sure.

Tragic losses like this are always a severe challenge to the human spirit, which are never more fragile than at times such as the one your family experienced.

You've captured some terrific energy in this song. Nicely done. ;)


--- Joe
Check out my latest song called A Night @ Neverland
crissew said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Man Clay
Your voice takes on so many different tones. You voice effortlessly adapts to any number of musical styles. Beautiful song with heartfelt lyrics. I think this song would sound even better done in your old school country style but it sounds good as a rock ballad too. Enjoyed it.
ConnieO said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Just Shy of 15 Years
Very sad...heart wrenching.
Check out my latest song called Greig Meets Chopsticks
Sigmund said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
just shy
I don't see how a family could ever be the same after such a tragic event. Even after all these years it must be hard. The music helps - you did a great job conveying the emotion, and the back and forth duet style works well here. Nice job - thank you for sharing this.
Check out my latest song called End of a Season
Godchaser said 64 days ago (September 22nd, 2009)
Blessed to have heard.
A beautiful tribute of love,of life and just how precious it truly is.Thank you for posting this.
Check out my latest song called As i Walk
edurbrow said 64 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)
Just Shy of 15 Years
Music from the heart always rings true. Nice voices and production. Thank you.

awigze said 63 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)
unimaginable
I cannot hear this as I am at work, but just reading the lyrics and gleaning thru the other comments bids me to comment. I will come back another time to listen but I do know that music can heal and it is profound to see that you have shared it with us. This can only help. Our children are not really our own but belong to God. I imagine that your nephew lived a life of love and you can remember the smiles you shared and that is a good thing.
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