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This is woefully incomplete. I'm posting it, hoping someone will inspire me to finish it. Does anyone out there here something I don't? It got off to a good start. It started as a 12 tone row, but mutated into something satyrical and a little angry. I'd like to build on the prog direction here and take it somewhere unexpected and interesting...

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Uploaded: Sep 23, 2009 - 01:41:54 AM
Last Updated: Sep 23, 2009 - 01:41:54 AM Last Played: Nov 22, 2009 - 08:03:08 AM

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Feter

Feter said 61 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)

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OK ...this showed alot of work to be incomplete
this is too complex to be anything at the begin
anyway ..the monster pace for the song would
reminds me of ELP which I would connect to a
moog that more close to hammond than synth sound
like a prog J S Bach ..if thats make sense ..
it would need a jump of bass roll and drums
gives an electric guitar a groove ... just
how i love prog ...and you rock ...cant wait
to see where you are going with this !!!!!
thnx alot for sharin !!!!

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blindsidedpoets

blindsidedpoets said 61 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)

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Great tune. I actually had visions of that scene in the movie Robots where they are stuck on the recycling line.
As far as incomplete, I don't know about that. Personal preference, I would fill it out aurally a bit on the spectrum. Perhaps lower some of the keys stuff an octave, or float the rhythm guitar tone to the bass side a bit. Nothing is a must though, it's already good!

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awigze	awigze said 61 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)
	Captains of industry There's that guitar sound. Like all the directions that you take it. Sounds like all the inspiration is there and the unexpected remains present. Check out my latest song called We got to Jive in Blues by (Feter)

Reggie_Pole	Reggie_Pole said 61 days ago (September 23rd, 2009)
	Nothing else like tonestones Well, this could shape up to be a real monster. Good theme, unique sound, clever. It could be bottomed up (or down) a bit more. I hope you will flesh it out. Check out my latest song called Examination Dream

Scott Carmichael	Scott Carmichael said 58 days ago (September 25th, 2009)
	Steve Raps Hey Steve... an excellent study/painting of the subject matter... some guys like to take apart swiss watches and then put them back together... I'd like to dismantle you and carefully pay attention as you are rebuilt... then maybe I could learn what you know.. my friend you are wired differently... that's a great thing Check out my latest song called Good Morning

crissew	crissew said 57 days ago (September 27th, 2009)
	Captain I am hearing a funky bassline doing its own thing in there then for the when the the ascending and descending keyboard riff comes in, the bass snaps into the melody. I bet a solo keyboard break would sound good in there. Nice piece as it is though. Check out my latest song called What Does Love Entail w Relic67, ciheins & Filmscorz

johnnyblues	johnnyblues said 57 days ago (September 27th, 2009)
	Holy 7 Crap This got off to a really good start. The sudden silence fits the song - I suggest 3 seconds of silence and starting something totally different but equally intense! I am looking forward to see where it goes. Check out my latest song called The Other Side

tokai	tokai said 56 days ago (September 28th, 2009)
	prog Many great moments through out this track. You could go anywhere and everywhere with this. The start is excellent with a great new section starting that could be expanded, but you can't end it like that, i think. Check out my latest song called maizuru/Bud/Char

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 34 days ago (October 20th, 2009)
	Holy cow This cranks! Nicely done! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

davisamerica	davisamerica said 12 days ago (November 11th, 2009)
	oh hell yes!! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

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Name: Steve Stone

My name is Steve Stone. I live in the San Francisco bay area, originally from Louisville, Ky. College at Indiana University. My focus in school was between music, math and computer science. I played music professionally off and on during the earl... [see more]

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