Maggots!

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sewer rod

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Staying true to form, here's another lovely little diddy. Usually I sing from a different point of view. This is from another side.

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Lyrics

The overwelming stench of filth
Eminating from me
Welcomes insects to my body
I stew in my own fluids
Which serve as nurishment
Entering where they may- They lay their eggs

Maggots-seething-
Feeding on the dead
Expanding rotting flesh
Exposing the guts

My once warm corpse
Now an incubator for my pets
My only family
Being so full of these creatures
My eyes start to bulge
They start dropping out
A wriggling white mass of worms

Song Stats

Hits: 97
Comments: 9
Fans: 5
Plays: 23
Downloads: 4
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Oct 28, 2009 - 05:19:55 PM
Last Updated: Oct 28, 2009 - 05:19:55 PM Last Played: Nov 24, 2009 - 12:53:36 PM

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Comments

Daugrin	Daugrin said 29 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	Naw! Mumbles is back again... this time some singer song writer introspection is on the menu. He's doing his best James Taylor! Really showing his sensitive side here! Great to see some growth in Mumbles character. The conceptual continuity in these tunes is fun, I got my helmet... Happy Halloween from your number one fan Jay! Daug Check out my latest song called Daphne w/ Andy Wigzell

crissew

crissew said 29 days ago (October 28th, 2009)

Death Metal Baby
in the tradition of Cannibal Corpse and Carcass. I actually used to hang out and jam with the members of Carcass when I lived in Dallas. Never was a fan of death metal but I got an appreciation for it then. I would bump the vocals up just a tad and turn down the effects on the vocals a tad. Still want to hear the words and at points in the song, it is a bit muddled. I would suggest some drum craziness in this at some point too but overall a great start. Enjoyed it.

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sewer rod

sewer rod said 29 days ago (October 28th, 2009)

Thanks
For stopping in and listening. I do agree with most of your comments. I would like to clean the mudiness, but I'm limited to what I have to work with.(which isn't much) As far as the vocals, I record on a portable studio crappy thing, believe it or not, there are no fx on them. The sounds I make are just me. Thanks again for the listen.

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scofugate	scofugate said 29 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	Raw This is Metal in raw form. Classic my friend! I really like the distortion selection. This is a great recording with what you are working with after reading other posts.Keep rocking brother! Check out my latest song called Trains and Plains

sewer rod	sewer rod said 28 days ago (October 29th, 2009)
	Why Thank you I appreciate the compliments. I always like to think of "what could've been" if I had some better stuff. The distortion is actually right off the amp, nothing added. It works. Thanks again. Check out my latest song called No, Santa Won't Be Coming This Year

Relic67	Relic67 said 28 days ago (October 29th, 2009)
	james taylor influence LOL brilliant! I really like the lyrics to this one. great guitar solo. the fact that you play real drums is a big plus too. always enjoy your stuff.... thanks for posting! Check out my latest song called Novis Libris

sewer rod	sewer rod said 28 days ago (October 29th, 2009)
	James Taylor I've been listening to him alot lately, and he inspired this.(ha,ha j/k) But seriously i thought I'd put myself on the other side with this one, and it worked out pretty well. Thanks for listening, it's always good to have repeat offenders. :) Check out my latest song called No, Santa Won't Be Coming This Year

kingbee

kingbee said 28 days ago (October 29th, 2009)

magic maggots
Love the lyrics as usual.
The drums are sounding a lot clearer and 'seperate'
Are you miking them up differently?
That snare's a killer at times. I think I've been shot.
I was wondering what your vox would sound like WITH effects.
In a way I don't think you need them.
You have a way of making your voice go beyond human.
Anyway, great stuff
enjoyed
cheers

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sewer rod

sewer rod said 28 days ago (October 29th, 2009)

You're too kind
Like I said to relic, it's always good to have some same people coming back and listening to this filth. :) I basically just jacked the volume on the drums a little more. I don't know what my voice would sound like with effects (I'm a little scared) I'll have to try sometime. Not sure what I would try, but anyway. Thanks as usual for stopping in and always having some good input.

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Name: Jay Rivenburgh

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