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Here, but Gone


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persona

 Genre: Piano

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This is a first-recording/first-draft/improvisation from this sunday.
Thinking on many friends that are still here (I mean, alive), but gone from our lives.

Should revisit it later and fix a couple of errors from this 'live' play but want to share it as it has touched me.
Sorry for the rough edges :)
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Hits: 166
Comments: 19
Fans: 6
Plays: 36
Downloads: 3
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Nov 04, 2009 - 10:36:22 PM
Last Updated: Nov 04, 2009 - 10:36:22 PM Last Played: Nov 24, 2009 - 08:52:06 PM
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Feter said 21 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
Here, but Gone
This lovely ...ye it has nice spirit ...I m
enjoying it as I m hearing it and writing my
comments .sweet tune ..good volume lovels s
far ;..thnx alot for sharin !!!!
persona said 21 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
comments here...
thank you Feter!
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crissew said 21 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
Enjoyed it
another pretty melody. The only suggestion I have is that the song build more. I was expecting it to speed up as it went along. A change in emotion would be cool in this song. Just my 2 cents. Nice job
persona said 21 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
thanks
for the idea Charles. I guess a "celebration" part of it with a full orchestra (even a choir? :)) would really have that energy built into it. I'm trying it with some violins and it may be something to surely add. thanks again!
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crissew said 21 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
That may be cool
but I was more referring to the piano part getting a bit more complex with faster notes toward the end. Not necessarily "festive", it can still be in the same mode but with more angst.
notsosweet said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
...
lovely dreamy quality - I enjoyed this a lot
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persona said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
glad
you liked it! thanks!
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Char said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
Sweet.
Probably needs more variation in tempo or a second harmony woven around this one. Kind of sad. But very pretty. Thanks.
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persona said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
captured
the spirit of the moment. I guess I could try some things around the theme. thanks for the comment!
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Outtaorbit said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
This is lovely.......
Friends..you can't live without them...nicely done
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persona said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
true
even though we (or maybe only I) let them go. :-/
need to improve my "friendship gardening" :)
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guitapick said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
6 months...?
Wow...very impressive. This is somewhat reminiscent of a Beethoven sonata. Not an idle compliment. Just that feel and I'm particularly impressed with the way you separate the melody line from the accompaniment.
Nice tune.
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persona said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
Beethoven
wow! Thank you for your comment.
It's been quite an interesting 6 months period - specially the last month here at MJ. Learning a lot. Hope to be improving from composition to another.
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Mike_Lynn said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
Great composition
I like this moody piece. It just keeps me thinking about lot of things. This is a very good one-take effort. Look forward to your final version. Perhaps you would consider adding some strings to the second half of the song. Thanks for sharing / Mike
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persona said 20 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
thanks
thats right. it has an open space for strings. even some percussion :)
thank you for listening.
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VicDiesel said 14 days ago (November 11th, 2009)
Gentle
That's some sweet piano playing. You're building on a simple idea, developing it, so the listener keeps paying attention, but still keeping a fairly constant mood without disruptions or large changes. Very nice.
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sschedra said 10 days ago (November 15th, 2009)
Sad
But a soft edged beauty. Almost has a hymn like quality.
Very nice,
Stephen
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sschedra said 10 days ago (November 15th, 2009)
Sad
But a soft edged beauty. Almost has a hymn like quality.
Very nice,
Stephen
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scaustrita said 16 hours ago (November 24th, 2009)
Touching
very touching song, very easy listening.
It make me think about old friends I have not seen in over 30 years . . .

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