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Picture a Place


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hackneybloke

 Genre: Acoustic

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I wrote this twenty years ago to a different tune, and now i am resurrecting it. the first part is a melancholic, navel-gazing song-to-slash-your-wrists-by....but if you're still alive at 2.25 it morphs into a starkly contrasting progressive and positive instrumental section.
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Lyrics
Picture a place by the river my dear,
row out the boat and I’ll wait for you there – there’s nothing to fear
Sing me a song that you know in your heart
Will reach us at times when we both are a part of emptiness clear
Mine is the colour and yours is the reason
The conman is caught and convicted of treason – let justice prevail
Where are we if we’re not free
Who are we supposed to be
Picture a place, no this time it’s too late
The ashes are dead – they rise from the grate – and float in the air


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Hits: 4515
Comments: 43
Fans: 41
Plays: 269
Downloads: 135

Uploaded: Dec 30, 2009 - 11:00:34 AM
Last Updated: Dec 30, 2009 - 11:00:34 AM Last Played: Mar 21, 2017 - 02:25:25 PM
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Hardware:
Garrison GD-30-CE-HG Electro acoustic.
Edirol UA 25 audio interface
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Comments
Gaylen75 said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Sweet Darkness
This is a definite work of art. It seems that both sides came together to a wonderful place. I wonder if the disedent backing track might detrack. This is an incredible piece either way. A+
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kingbee said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
a picture
Nice playing and singing and good choice lyrics.
What effect are you putting on your vox?
I would have maybe bought some strings in at 3rd verse but that's just me , always overcrowding things.
And I like the build up at the end, especially the 3rd guitar coming in
Again I was hearing a harmonica coming in later ..but I really should mind me own business ;-)
Great track anyway
cheers
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moorlandt said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
fantastic mood
another prove of the less is more theory. I'm a bit short with words today. Consider the less I say, the more I appreciate it. Splendid song.
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johnwhitehead said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Picture
Was distracted by your first line's similarity to "picture yourself in a boat on a river" from Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds. But I soon got over that.

I like the minor key vibe, Nick Drake-like picking and your usual cool singing. You weave a great moody and gauzy web.

The instrumental section with interlocking
parts meshing and building is wonderful. Great guitar work! I especially like the organ part.

Hey, what about resolving to the major key? Just kidding...the minor key brings this all the way home.


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crissew said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Picture a Place
There is definitely a melancholy feel going here, the vocal effect works for this tune. Resolves into a Doorsesque Dirge for the outro.

Cant remember if it was you before where I mentioned a high pitched sound in the background but I hear it on this one as well. Am I the only one that can hear it? It comes through very clearly on my system but I have a very high end sound system hooked up to my computer. Anyway, just figured I would let you know.

Enjoyed the song, great song writing and love the acoustic guitar work you interlace throughout this song.
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Feter said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Picture a Place
Poetic intro I m enjoying how your vocal kept
going through the lyrics with emotions ..this
is all so good veyr groovy keys work here ...
a classy job done here my friend ..this is really
remarkable ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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Vic Holman said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
paints a picture
excellent song. changing up the second half is great to kick it up a notch.

yeah there is a high pitch noise here maybe a little eq taper on the high end may tame it.

but all in all a great song
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lengold said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
Beautiful and
sweet song Julian - very impressed with the vocal and harmonies. Very infectiously heartwarming. Lovely mix.
Downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len

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Bob6stringer said 2707 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
A moody masterpiece.
This might be a callus-biter but it's definitely not a depressing wrist-slitter. It's a Moody masterpiece.

Words: Your singing is great, and the lyrics, well I feel a cautionary, unadorned naturalistic outlook toward live's compromises. (Hope that's vague enough to pass as pseudo valid.)

Latter-half instrumental: The layered leads, especially I genuinely dig your layered leads. Especially that trilly little low-register hammer-on panned predominantly left. I'm seldom one to want to trance-out, but THIS is different; I could listen to that instrumental section for another 10 minutes. Thank you for the download, bruv.
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damiengh said 2706 days ago (December 31st, 2009)
Very Effective
Nice mood piece.

Excellent mic effect for setting the tone along with the tasty & woody sound of your guitar.

That crisp plucking against the almost harpsichordian organ sound, certainly a nice treat for the ears as we slip into the mirky depths.



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magnatone said 2706 days ago (December 31st, 2009)
Picture
beautiful, moody, dark - and then not - you are one fine musician Julian!
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drakonis said 2706 days ago (December 31st, 2009)
Drifting through this world
I was caught up in the intoxicating simplicity of the music and dark hushed tone of your singing, and just floated along, drawn into heavy introspection by the lyrics. I actually did not find the second section to be "starkly contrasting/positive", but instead it seemed to simply reinforce and add energy to the dark ride, fitting perfectly and seamlessly. Perhaps looking back down on the music and my lifeless body in the tub, my only thought is that it ended too soon. ;-)
ttfn,
Drakonis
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DWL said 2705 days ago (January 1st, 2010)
Wonderful!
We are not worthy.

Classy work Julian and very impressive.

Playing is excellent (even for a guy who professes he can't play)and that end section is very clever and works beautifully. I see the Garrison is indeed a very good guitar.

Cheers

Dick


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Moviz said 2705 days ago (January 1st, 2010)
Signed in
especially for this comment...... beautiful soundscape you created on this both vocally and instrumentally... love the 'lost' dreamlike (Beatle-esque?) treatment....I really am becoming a big fan of yours, regards M
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eleveneyes said 2704 days ago (January 2nd, 2010)
wow,
great stuff. lyrics, mood, presentation, everything. Especially like the harmonies on "supposed to be". enjoyed tremendously!
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bud said 2704 days ago (January 2nd, 2010)
Great atmosheric production
on your vocals - really good. Excellent contrast against the clean guitar sound. If it weren't for music like this I might have slashed my wrists a long time ago. Just kidding - but I'm sure you understand what I mean. Very interesting transition and closing compositional choices.
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scofugate said 2704 days ago (January 2nd, 2010)
I get the
last years johnny cash vibe here (is that way off base or what). I really like the down / dark tone.

kudos!
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Willywagga said 2704 days ago (January 2nd, 2010)
Me Likey
I like everything about this, it develops beautifully and holds it's structure very well, lyrics are sublime and soothingly uncomfortable.
My mood for the day.

Beautiful

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rsolorio said 2704 days ago (January 3rd, 2010)
Such contrast
Intimate guitar and ghosty vox. Beautifully artistic. Very very cool.

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mikkinylund said 2703 days ago (January 3rd, 2010)
I did not
see anything to slash my wrist to, but more of a beautifully painted picture, very well performed and arranged. Great lyrics, very poetic, gives a good story between the lines as well. The vocals are very well done, I totally like the effect you're using - wouldn't work for everything, but for this song it does. The hints of Bossa Nova is brilliant as they take into a different scene - the accordion (?), works very well at building the last dramatic conclusion. Very well done. Thank you!
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fasteddie said 2703 days ago (January 3rd, 2010)
Progression
I dig the breathy vox in the first half of the song. The way the song progresses in the second half is really cool. Good work!
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smokey bacon jnr said 2701 days ago (January 5th, 2010)
a minor masterpiece
Minor key that is. Another brilliant downbeat bomb from the master of melancholy! Excellent - lyrics and music in perfect harmony. Reminded me a little of Nick Drake too - is he an inspiration?
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michaelkoppenheffer said 2701 days ago (January 5th, 2010)
I like the instrumental "outro"!
To me, the two pieces aren't a stark contrast to each other. The dreamy and contemplative mood remains even after the instrumental section picks up the pace, at least for me. Very nicely established emotional tone and feel!
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richardhowardjones said 2698 days ago (January 8th, 2010)
Haunting
I enjoyed it. Particularly the unusual harmonies and the guitar sound. You found the perfect picture, too.
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kassia said 2697 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
picture
this is incredible. i absolutely LOVE the choices you have made regarding the vocal effects and different synth sounds. i wish it was twice as long. i love this song.
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Hickling_Stan said 2692 days ago (January 14th, 2010)
Navel gazing
It's being so cheerful keeps us going!!
the muse comes at different times and in many different ways, god knows I've done plenty of navel gazing. Vey delicate playing and nice harmonies. Really liked the instrumental section, maybe it shouldn't have all been lumped at the end? Just a thought. Mark
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ThePinealTrip said 2691 days ago (January 15th, 2010)
cool
great song
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Jarvoid said 2691 days ago (January 15th, 2010)
Very different
for me and enjoyable because of it being so...definitely a song of two halves, a slightly disillusioned and broken spirited song in the first but picking up after half-time into a more positive and perky song ..moving the notes into clear spaces and looking for opportunities to progress toward the finale with a resounding....GOAL.....sorry sorry not goal...crescendo.....I am going to have a lie down now......Jarvoid
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johnnyblues said 2690 days ago (January 16th, 2010)
Picture Perfect
Beautiful composition... Very Dream Like - very Dark. Great Guitars. Opeth like vision... There is a high-pitched tone throughout - intended? Awesome just the same!!
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Bob Rodgers said 2689 days ago (January 17th, 2010)
A
lovely song Julian with some great vocals and harmonies.
Excellent guitar playing and a wonderful arrangement, very much enjoyed this.

Bob
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SuperStarSmith said 2687 days ago (January 20th, 2010)
nicely done
might have brought in a synth into the verses, liked the instrumental. well composed
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Stevie J said 2683 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
mellow track
I like the effect on your voice it fits the mood of the guitar.

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craft said 2682 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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nice sad song... Really nice.. Great job!
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Parichayaka said 2681 days ago (January 25th, 2010)
mesmerizing
Find the beginning quite chilled, doesn't pull me down at all. Like how you treat your voice and the development of the guitar riff is subtle and mesmerizing. Reminds of Eric Wollo's soundscapes. Very original sound and feel.
The ending with the synth lead left me a little bit unsatisfied - I would have liked to have more of a musical arch with the vocals coming back after the buildup - I could even hear a simple string arrangement come in towards the end.
Anyways, another excellent post. Continue to be impressed!
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michaeljayklein said 2657 days ago (February 19th, 2010)
Superlative
You are a performer and songwriter of note and have perfectly captured the mood and feeling you set out to convey. Definitely stirred some certain dark moods residing within me and that takes some work, let me tell you! Very impressive work here. Michael
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jdholliday said 2588 days ago (April 28th, 2010)
more of an interlude to
another song like on a pink floyd album but very cool!
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TobinMueller said 2469 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
Resurrection
Fab poetic lyrics, stream of consciousness down a river Styx. Really liked the structure, the layering toward the end, until the non-guitar sound came in; consider a version with a an acoustic solo instead?
In a similar concept vein, check out an old MJ tune:
http://www.macjams.com/song/10672
Great writing.
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tokai said 2445 days ago (September 18th, 2010)
Picture
a place, you know you music and lyrics always do that so well. I love music that does that for me. You have such a soothing voice, you must be a real tranquil sort of man, that is encouraging.
3.00 that is really working when all your guitars are playing off each other, nice piece of art.
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tmcfate said 2346 days ago (December 26th, 2010)
glad i did
so many reasons to kill yourself, so many reasons not to kill yourself....beautifully arranged.....i made it to 225. glad i did.
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woofer3 said 2346 days ago (December 27th, 2010)
I like the vocal effect
The song is very attracrive and once again I love the way you bring in the harmonies at just the right time. Lovely.
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jodyrush said 2288 days ago (February 22nd, 2011)
Why don't you?
Why don't you play live? You obviously have the talent for it.
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five_extra_arms said 2240 days ago (April 11th, 2011)
Moody
Oooh I like this!

Really good guitar playing and the vocals really intensify the dark mood you promised. The outro is really well designed. That's a nice instrumental riff, but I don't think it's a departure from the rest of the tune.

I think this is my favorite song of yours.

Thanks (download #86)

Bob
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Philip18 said 1950 days ago (January 26th, 2012)
Picture a place
Gentle, rhythmical guitar is mesmerising, as is the eerie vocal. Rich imagery in the lyrics. There is an urgency to the gradually developing guitar solo. Great work!
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