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This is my first attempt at blind macjams.com collaboration so I don't really know if I'm doing this properly.

Here's a song that really needs something more I think. Lyrics, either sung or spoken would definitely improve it. If you don't find it too boring please feel free to add to it. If you however do find it boring, please say so in the comments, so I get some feedback.

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Hits: 2160
Comments: 18
Fans: 13
Plays: 209
Downloads: 81
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jan 09, 2010 - 12:42:27 PM
Last Updated: Jan 10, 2010 - 03:58:05 AM Last Played: Jan 10, 2017 - 04:05:58 PM
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Hardware:
Mac Mini (Intel)
M-Audio Keystation 49e
Software:
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Native Instruments Absynth 5 and free Kore Player
Vienna Symphonic Library
Comments
crissew said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
I actually like the
vibe of this song very much. And while it may sound boring to you now, the "boringness" is due to structure. That is good if someone wants to put some vocals on it. I had an immediate idea for vox on it. I will DL it and see what I can do with it.
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Char said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Not at all
boring. Kind of slow and bluesy jazz. I have an idea too. We'll see what Charles gives you. Very nice. Thanks.
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Char said 2659 days ago (January 11th, 2010)
Two days later
and we have Black Widow Girl by crissew:
http://www.macjams.com/song/58272
And, there you go! Great music.
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bitfeld said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Thanks!
Thanks to both for the feedback! This is really exciting!
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Feter said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Water Chill
Very nice ..yup this can take a deep singing
or a poppish flavor vocalist ,it has bit of
the 80s feeling ...nice song ..thnx alot for
sharin !!!!
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bitfeld said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
80s indeed!
:-) You're quite right, Feter, can't escape the 80s feel it seems whenever I try a some electro-pop song. Thanks for droping by!
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PrototypeEightyOne said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Nice Vibe
it really shapes around :54. I was really into that section, then the change up into 1:10 was nice. It held a great flow from that point on. I would maybe look into adding some more in the first :50 sec to grab the listeners attention just a tad more. Cool track.
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bitfeld said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Appreciate the suggestions
You're probably right about the slow start. The end maybe a little too repetitive. Noted! :-)
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lengold said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
You have created
a lovely soundbed for a vocalist here. I am sure that it will go somewhere.
Cheers
Len

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magnatone said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Water Chill
ooh ... this is cool. can't wait to see what charles and/or char (or maybe both together???) come up with!
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davisamerica said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
really a nice soundbed
for lyrics indeed ..... enjoyed
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Lardo said 2662 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Sound track
Gorazd, I like it. I'll see if something comes to mind for lyrics and vocal styling.
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bitfeld said 2659 days ago (January 12th, 2010)
Glad you like it! :-)
Great! Thanks for taking the time.
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richard13 said 2658 days ago (January 13th, 2010)
Not at all boring
indeed, quite tasty. Very nice and thanks for the d/l.
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bitfeld said 2649 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
No no, thank you! :)
Glad you like it!
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Jarvoid said 2656 days ago (January 14th, 2010)
Nice solid
and controlleed track,stands up on its own or could be developed further. Either way it's
good.
Jarvoid
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MarkHolbrook said 2649 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
Ok I have
been listening to this in the form of Widow by Crissew and giving him and Char a ton of credit... well... I needed to get over here and credit the cool music too.

I can see how this inspired people to take off and do something cool with it. I'm gonna download it and try to mangle it a bit if you don't mind... I really like this!

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bitfeld said 2649 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
Please feel free
... to download and play with it, by all means. If you need separate tracks, drop me a message. And thanks for taking the time to listen and comment!
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