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2nd version of this....
fixed some levels as the vocals were killing everyone i'm sure.... and added some more vocals in places and re-recorded in others.... basicly the same though....
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Lyrics
the last time i called
you were on the phone
i got a busy tone
your getting busy now
i'm not calling
leaving you all alone

i'm on the road now
(just like i wanted all along)
your on the run now
(moments from your next break down)

it was a shot in the dark the night that we met
i was shouting out the words with my hands in the air
i never dreamed i could be this close to you
and now that it's all over what the hell

the last time i called
you were on the phone
i got a busy tone
your getting busy now
i'm not calling
leaving you all alone

i'm on the road now
(just like i wanted all along)
your on the run now
(moments from your next break down)

X4
you take and you take and you take and you take
(a picture a snapshot a moment in time)

X4
this is the last time i'm calling you


the last time i called
you were on the phone
i got a busy tone
your getting busy now
i'm not calling
leaving you all alone
all alone
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Downloads: 70
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Uploaded: Jan 22, 2010 - 04:06:15 PM
Last Updated: Jan 22, 2010 - 04:06:15 PM Last Played: May 16, 2017 - 08:49:17 PM
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crissew said 2683 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
Very modern
pop rock sound. Very radio ready sound here. kind of a blink 182 sound on this one. Very well done here. Amazing production and performance. Excellent.
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mybravedesign said 2683 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
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thanks man...i didn't here the blink refrence until you pointed it out and now i hear it in my own voice... thanks for the listen...
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jfisenne said 2683 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
Bliss
Enjoyed this.
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mybravedesign said 2683 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
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awesome... thanks for stopping by...
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egobandit said 2682 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
great phrasing
Love the layering on the vocals, THe spread you give each ear is nice THe mix is solid Very cool!
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mybravedesign said 2682 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
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thanks.. i'm trying to master things a bit more instead of just throwing it all in the track and hoping it works...
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johnwhitehead said 2682 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
Bliss
Man...you're getting good. Love the big sound on this. Great beats and plunky/poppy keys. Some great countermelodies. Very musical throughout. Nice harmonies!
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mybravedesign said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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thanks... you can thank phunker for the backing on this.. i knew i had to do something with it as soon as i heard it..
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moorlandt said 2682 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
distinctive
Very catchy from the start. The high register singing came as a total surprise to me, but makes the song way more distinctive. Nicely structured as well. I think the vocalizing could win with some harmonies, especially near the end. Splendid post all around.
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mybravedesign said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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i have a generally high register... but i agree that alot of what i do is clear and distinct... i would hope that it makes people remember it more... thanks for the listen and i'll go back and look at throwing some more harmonies in...
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dave_b said 2682 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
bliss v2
The vocs are sounding better on this version. On the part where you have two vocal lines going at once, you drop the levels on both, but at that point both tracks are in danger of being overwhelmed by the strings. Perhaps you should consider dropping the strings out of this section, this will better showcase the vocs.
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mybravedesign said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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i hear where your talking about... trying something a little diffrent in that section to fill it out so it's not a problem.. thanks for the listen and observation...

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ConnieO said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
Very catchy
Very original song; didn't expect the higher vocals and really like it. Good arrangment.
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mybravedesign said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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thank you i'm getting the didn't expect the higher vocals thing alot.... i was originally going to go with breathy lower vocals that were more spread out.... but i decided to go this route after hearing the 2 back to back...
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Cameron said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
Twists and Turns
The string introduction had a certain floating atmosphere, then suddenly the beat kicked in with the vocals! Nice shift.

Good vocal harmonies. I like the change of texture just past the 2-min. mark, and the expansion of melodic chords thereafter.

The overall sound is very homogenous and closely-packed, very much in the pop/radio style.

Love the ending!

Nice work. Very professional.


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mybravedesign said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
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thanks for the comments.... i was def. looking to push it into that genre.
hoping to do more like this in the future..
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VicDiesel said 2681 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
You know
You've dialed the vocals back a little, and I didn't think them obnoxiously loud in the previous version. Right now I would say they are a bit too soft. The extra ones (I'm going by memory here) are nice.

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tempie said 2680 days ago (January 25th, 2010)
bliss
cool dude. i hear matt pond pa and the cure in your vocals - they sound great. really like the backups, . great instrumentation, I like the strings over all those chiming sounds - a really lofty and big pop sound . "number you have dialed" sample at the end is cool too. Overall just a really professional job man, thanks for the DL, i'll be happy to listen to this walking around the city this week.
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michaelkoppenheffer said 2680 days ago (January 25th, 2010)
"On the road now"
chorus vocals are really nicely emphatic--agree with the other commenters that the high-register vocals rise above the accompaniment really effectively. On my speakers, I personally like the vox level on this one; don't think they ever get too low for me. Love the overlapping vocals at the end!
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jibes said 2680 days ago (January 25th, 2010)
Great song
Love the melody and the delivery of the lyrics. This is really good!!!! Just the right length too.
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Gaylen75 said 2679 days ago (January 26th, 2010)
modern
This sound has a lot of popular merit. You have some skills and should exploit the crap out of them.
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 2679 days ago (January 26th, 2010)
Contemporary...
.. gee man you get that amazing contemporary feel with ease. Really love the contrast of the punky vocals and electronic backing. BUT ... for all my talk of contemporary there are moments here that sound pure Andy McClusky (OMD) and some of the arrangement especially around 02:00 sounds beautifully 1981. This is retro-modern cool and I love it.
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SuperStarSmith said 2674 days ago (January 31st, 2010)
lots
of attitude in the vox. love it
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AndeeScott said 2672 days ago (February 3rd, 2010)
:)
This versions great vocals gel alot better. You should send me the vocals so I can tweak my track to compliemt your vocals better a few things need droping I think in place like the violin and others place stuff need adding. Can't do anything with the file you sent need the seprate files of your vocals to keep qulaity up.

Awesome singing :)
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mybravedesign said 2671 days ago (February 3rd, 2010)
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email sent...sorry man i been really busy
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Electropop (also called Technopop) is a subgenre of synth pop music which flourished during the early 1980s, although the first recordings were made in the late 1970s. Numerous bands have carried on the electropop tradition into the 1990s and 2000s.

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