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its not me, its you


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Sea Monk Seven

 Genre: Ballad
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trying to stay away from cliche chord progressions, but if i do use them, then i try to make it sound unique.
id like this to have "idle race" or "elo" sound at the finished version
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Lyrics
smoke another cigarette
even if it only makes you sick
lived my life with no regrets
im sorry
its you, not me

watch you smoke another j
hope this feeling doesnt pass away
cause our time is fleeting
and gone
its you not me


cast another shadow light
cast this feeling softly through the night
but the shadows leaving
the sun is back again

if i could lie here with you
will you make my pipe-dreams all come true
but my mind is fleeting
and gone
its you not me

ill show you how i feel
ill show you how i feel
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Uploaded: Mar 26, 2010 - 01:14:10 AM
Last Updated: Mar 26, 2010 - 01:14:10 AM Last Played: Jan 29, 2017 - 04:48:47 AM
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Comments
crissew said 2649 days ago (March 26th, 2010)
Modern vocal
skills. Wish I sounded modern when I sang, lol. I like the vocal melody you have established here. Some work on the arrangement part of things and you could have quite a recording on your hands.
Check out my latest song called Dollar Store Christmas w/ Jerry Rissew
alackbass said 2649 days ago (March 26th, 2010)
Very Nice
The beauty of this song shines through the very sparse arrangement. Proof positive that a good song doesn't require a whole lot of production. Nice chord changes that compliment a very good melody.
Check out my latest song called Mean Miss Teacher
buckhorn said 2648 days ago (March 27th, 2010)
Nice
You write some cool tunes. Nice vocals.
Check out my latest song called when you smile
tempie said 2646 days ago (March 29th, 2010)
another great tune kids
i like the sparse production and i like the 'will you make my pipe dreams come true' line. i like the treatment too - sounds like a cross between a 50's ballad and a campfire song.
Check out my latest song called Summer Song
Artist Info
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Name: Milton, Alex, Steph
Location: Victoria BC Canada
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good morning starshine the world says hello! Sea Monk Seven is a group of up and coming musicians that hail from Victoria, BC, Canada etc etc. We all met up in Grade 8 and are still making music together after high school. Alex is the brain. J... [see more]

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Genre Info
A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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